I feel ...

[Darkchild]

Sometimes I feel so alone
...I feel so cold and feel so empty
I feel vulnerable to all ... the devil best not tempt me
I
feel like my mind's confined .. I could shout ... noone would hear
I feel like i'm wasting
time ... noone close ... not even near
I feel like my friends .. always frontin' like they got the
biggest sack
But i feel if a situation arised ... only a few of them would have my
back
Sometimes i feel my father ... is only proud of me because im smart
Sometimes i
feel he hates me cuz im smarter than him, he takes it to the heart
At times i feel like i just
can't win at life .. if life's a battle ... I'm sure losing
I feel that must be why i always drink
... life changes when ur boozing
I feel that life's a journey ... ive taken wrong turn after
wrong turn
I feel life is also a lesson ... if hurt's all that's taught, who wants to learn?
I
feel life is also like a dice game ... game over when your numbers rolled
I feel like is also like
a poker game ... wat use is my ace when it's the joker that you hold
Sometimes i feel like
saying "Fuck Everybody" ... noone knows me ... why should they care?
But i feel noone
would hear me ... Even when i'm next to them ... I'm not there
I feel like my mouth is
taped shut ... I barely speak ... Even when spoken to
I feel like saying "You don't wanna
know me ... And I Don't wanna know you"
I feel like i can't let anyone close anymore ... I
can't even talk on da phone
I Still don't know why sometimes ... I feel so alone ...

[Darkchild]

any other feedback?

[Darkchild]

thanks :-)

[Darkchild]

cheers dude :-)

[Floppy]

it was ok

[Chick-N-Bone]

have u ever been lonely with the homies -bizzy bone

its an ok poem, the first ive heard from you