WAT CAN I DO?!

[*~PlaTiNuM$iNk$BuRnA~*]

IF I COULD
SEE THROUGH UR EYES,
WOULD I SEE ME?
IF I COULD HEAR ALL UR
THOUGHTS,
WAT WOULD THEY BE?
IF I COULD BE JUS A FRIEND,

WOULD U MEANTION MY NAME?
IF I COULD CHANGE ALL MY FAULTS,

WOULD U STILL FEEL THE SAME?
IF I GAVE U THE WORLD,
WOULD U TAKE
IT AND RUN?
IF U SAID U LIKED THE STARS,
I'D GET THE SUN
4~U.
PLEASE LET ME KNOW,
TELL ME WAT CAN I DO.
I HAVE LOOKED SO
FAR,
AND CAN'T FIND NOONE LIKE "U"
:smile: :!:

[*~PlaTiNuM$iNk$BuRnA~*]

THKX......

[xCasperx]

it has been one of the best i have
read. short and sweet, but the part where you say IF U SAID U LIKED THE STARS,
I'D
GET THE SUN 4~U. don't include for you say something like I'd capture the sun, or
something to that effect. 4 u just makes it seem like the line runs on. Good job.