[color=blue][font=Comic Sans MS]BORN AGAIN[/font][/color]

[*~PlaTiNuM$iNk$BuRnA~*]

ZTOP HOLDIN ME
BACK
UR GRIP IZ LEAVIN MARKZ
MY ZTRUGGLIN ZHOWZ MY
DETERMINATION
LET ME REACH DA SURFACE
I WANT TO BREATHETHE AIR
I'VE LONGED 4
ZO FREZH
ZO PURE
POLLUTED IT'Z NOT-IT'Z NOT BECUZ
I WON'T
LET IT BECUM DAT WAY
LYFE IZ BROUGHT FROM IT
HOPE IZ
BORN FROM IT
THE ZELF CAN BECUM FREE
THAT IZ-IF DA CHAINZ ARE
DETACHABLE
THATIZ-IF WORDZ DON'T FAIL U
RUN-DON'T WALK-FLY,
DON'T RUN-ZOAR, DON'T FLY
IT'Z ALL AT DA END OF DA
TUNNEL
EVERYTHING BECUM'Z CLEAR AT DA TOP
THE MARKZ,MY
GRIP,LEAVEZ MEMORIEZ
THOSE THINGZ THAT MAKE ME STRONGER
"PUSH
THROUGH TIL' UR ZTRENGTH HAZ LEFT"
MY MIND TELLZ ME
"THEN U'LL B
READY TO HATCH"
THAT'Z WAT MY MIND ZAYZ
"THEN I CAN BE BORN
AGAIN"
THAT'Z WAT I ZAY :favheart:

[xCasperx]

Why don't you use s as s not as
z. I was hard to read i did not gte some of your lines, but everyone has the own style, try a little
more practice.