Bone Thugs - Independence Day poster

[Seven1/2Designs]

Just saved it as it is so far... i'm not even sure if i'll even label it as "not finished",
but i'm not sure what I wanna add to it. It's not original size, so when I made it smaller in
dimensions, the quality suffered because of it.

Here is what I have so far... :shock:

[Dillahmac]

It's tight, but I think u need to
make Independence day stick out more.

[Salidbar]

yeah man I'm feelin this pic... u
choose tha background well, tha buildin looks tight in it.. I like wat ya done 2 Eazy too...
overall this is nyce work man, nuthin 2 be ashamed of 8)

[LilRipsta4life]

good job seven shit lookz
tite
is dat a billboard with a pic of Kray on it
on left side around da middle

[G®åfhïkúl]

the names are too close to the
top, the name font doesnt appeal to me, also the Bone Thug logo and Independance day
type is too dark and lifeless in my opinion. And if it is Bone Thugs N Harmony
INDEPENDANCE DAY" Then why is Krayzie singled out in the background, that makes it
seem one-sided in a way, because it is suggesting Krayzie as a focal point. Also I think if Bone
is standing in that direction you would need a ground shadow because there is nothing to
absolutely justify the placement of feet to ground, so it seems like they are just floating slightly
above ground level. Beyond all of this nice concept, and I also wish that you post completed
works only, seems you have never posted anything complete just half/third ways completed
material, do you ever apply yourself to finish or is that all you got?



Ps: I want to
see this image in its entirety so I can evaluate the amout of actual work put into this piece
along with the amount of details.

[Newport990]

some black or
chrome lookin color would look aight up in the letters

[angle4eva]

http://img30.photobucket.com/albums/v91/camilevelasco/junk/goodpost.
gif- try using navy blue in the background :grin:

[Quidjinn]

you can do
waaaaaaaaay better!

[.:.Lyl Sin.:.]

i love it reds my fav
color.... i would buy that if it was a poster speakin of i how can i get my hands on dat one
poster grafikul....?

[silenced_thug]

yo it looks good i like
that dark type look u put into it