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Lost Soul
03-10-2004, 09:24 PM
like i said the other post im pretty fucked up and still
drinking but this is some shit i wrote the other day drunk and pissed as hell, angry about
shit

nightmare

I was raised in hell, thats why i got this story to tell
you
see
first one
VERSE ONE
I was raised by a demon,
who appears in the shape
of a step dad
cause i aint spawned by his semen
thought u had it bad?
my life
would have the average mad
n i aint even talkin anger
Im talkin bout
sanity
wonderin if you could share some
in a minute i might have none
is god up in
heavin mad at me?
like im stuck in a bad dream
fuck that a crazy nightmare
or thats
how it might seem
wish i could die and set my soul free
but for some reason i
cant
must be here for a reason
but why the constant rain season?
is it somethin i did
in a past life
cause i havent lived this one that trife
VERSE 2
lookin back at when i
was seven
shit seems like it was heaven
even though i wanted to be eleven
or just
older, sumthin like 19
but when i was 19
always thirstin for cream
even though i've
worked since i was 15
yeah broke though i wasnt a fiend
straight bummin off the
homies
yup, for gas trees and brew
and only the homie pat really know me
only that
thug could understand the shit i been through

but now i gotta deal with it solo

cause my homie beat down some punk ho
and got got by the po-po
yeah my dogg
was soon off probation
now he in a jail cell waitin
wonderin if my dogg is bout to go
loco
am i? ireally dont know
one thing i do know is true though
if i had a fo-fo i might
go straigh fo heavens dow
but nah, aint no straps round here
shit happens for strange
reasons
thats why im still here, cause lord knows
if i had a strap i wouldnt come
back
because of one week moment
but thats how i want it, final everlastin peace,
seems like a bad dream dont it? maybe im here to fight the beast. cause it cant just be a faze
but for sure this can be the last days

next verses comin in a minute

Lost Soul
03-10-2004, 10:04 PM
like pac said, its like
the twilight zone
everytime the rain stops it starts
like the worlds peeps are losin their
hearts
and i only want into my true home
amd thats called heaven
cause im in
hell
got more stories to tell
than dollas you would need for my best friends bail
-n- he
used to sleep atop 7-11
he like me, another lost soul
you are too, if you feel like ir
insides are bein sucked into a black hole
everytime i go all out and win- i lose
this life is
nothin noone would choose
and now i cant smoke gotta stick to brews
or by gettin
locked in a jail cell
like my dogg, Ill lose
to violation of probation
you know them
P.O.'s and po-po hoes be hatin
yea soon this country will be ruled by the hand of
satin
my birthday wish was to die
shit i aint scared to ride
on anyone and that
includes myself
just that suicide would make my moms cry
its my pain
my moms dont
deserve it either man
somehow im still sain
slowly waitin for the train
the one driven
by the reaper
and i cant wait to see her
but it wont be a death self inflicted
if it would
i woulda already did it
half because these pigs are crooked

angle4eva
03-12-2004, 05:43 PM
dam thatz long
but very
original
very
long but its a nice original poem :grin: :grin: