Crept and we Came

[reapah_ent.]

Ok Im not finished, and i was hoping to get some pointers, Im using FL studio 7. i know its not exact but its close, I think. if there is another remake of this beat please send me the link, but bare with me Im trying.
Let me know what ya think

Thanks
Muzikal

[123456]

The thing that needs work is the bassline...this one is too deep compared to the original. You need to use a different kick, and that whistle is completely diff than the original.

I think your problem is using FL....you need some real good VSTs if you usin that

[krazy_1]

thanks will check out!

[Ironic]

I like it, its dead on!!!

[FRANK SHAMROCK]

yea put some more work into it and change the bassline to a DARK BASS or a Fundamental Bass Line... Trust me it will work...

[2econd Avenue]

Everything is on point as far as the sequencing.

Most notably, it needs a lot of work: The bassline is too deep (change the bass); the piano is O.K; the whistle is no good: sounds FruityLoopish if you ask me. The drums needs major change. Overall, it's a good try! But it's not close to the remake bro.

[t.money2009]

not bad player keep them coming

[drayzie]

its kool g

[666Mafia]

u should pick a diff kick & whistle. the high hats should be a little faster. and turn the snare down a bit too. the bassline is too deep.

[Dinobot]

cheap whistle, change that shit as well as the bassline and you'll be better

[zassuit]

l think it was okay.

[nativeoneblood]

aye yo that beat is off the hook meng

Ok Im not finished, and i was hoping to get some pointers, Im using FL studio 7. i know its not exact but its close, I think. if there is another remake of this beat please send me the link, but bare with me Im trying.
Let me know what ya think

Thanks
Muzikal