joey
03-22-2004, 02:11 AM
hey im new at this writing stuff, well not really new but new
to showing my material. i really would apreciate all the feedback i can get. thanks and
enjoy!
STANDING AT THE LEDGE
im standing at the ledge,
looking over
the brink
i take what seems to be my last breath
my heart begins to sink
my body
slowly trembles,
my legs begin to shake
jump and die or live in sorrow, a decision i must
make
my head becomes overwhelmed,
and tears fill cover my face
will i be
remembered,
or will from everyone my memories be erased
the choice becomes
clear,
i wont live in fear
jump off i must,
and death i must near
so i let myself fall,
and now i feel so free
but then i wake up, a dream this must be
so now i lay scared,
not knowing what to think
only to drift off again to look over the brink
to showing my material. i really would apreciate all the feedback i can get. thanks and
enjoy!
STANDING AT THE LEDGE
im standing at the ledge,
looking over
the brink
i take what seems to be my last breath
my heart begins to sink
my body
slowly trembles,
my legs begin to shake
jump and die or live in sorrow, a decision i must
make
my head becomes overwhelmed,
and tears fill cover my face
will i be
remembered,
or will from everyone my memories be erased
the choice becomes
clear,
i wont live in fear
jump off i must,
and death i must near
so i let myself fall,
and now i feel so free
but then i wake up, a dream this must be
so now i lay scared,
not knowing what to think
only to drift off again to look over the brink