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SimpleMan
03-28-2004, 08:33 AM
Why
are you crying, Is there something thats wrong?
Do you cry because life is no more then a
song?
Could it be that you see what fools overlook?
Is it not just the wars but the mens
lives it took?
But why do you cry? What good will it do?
Do you think the world might
stop and listen to you?
Do the teardrops that fall have a meaning at all?
Tell me why
you allow those teardrops to fall.
Why do you cry, I ask you once more
as yet another
teardrop hits the floor
Answer me if you please, and then he turned his head
and my
heart came to life when that crying man said,

"For each teardrop that falls from my
cheeks rosy red
lie a hundred tears for the tortured, the dead
and my father in heaven,
well he hears me you see
and he answers my tears because he loves me
a hundred
people are saved for each teardrop I cry
a hundred people who otherwise would have
died
you see, I love people and I want them to live
and my prayers and my tears are all I
have to give.
You ask me a question, "Why do I cry?"
So that people may laugh, my
friend, that is why.

SimpleMan
03-28-2004, 01:57 PM
tight deep poem

Thanks,
I haven't thought about it in ages, I wrote it about 10 years or so ago. I think I might try to dig
through my poem writing days (in my mind) and see what else I might have up there. Of course,
I only can remember the really good ones :)

ladybonethugs
03-28-2004, 02:40 PM
Thuggish Ruggish!!!
HOTT!!! TIGHT!!! BUTTA!!! Keep that Thuggish Shit COMING!!! WE LUV
IT!!!
-Harmony

Luv
03-28-2004, 06:44 PM
WOW...THAT WAS
DEEP...

MAKES ME WANT TO GET BACK INTO WRITING..

Layzielh02
03-29-2004, 04:26 PM
WOW...THAT WAS DEEP...

MAKES ME WANT TO
GET BACK INTO WRITING..

~BayBeeLoQuIta~
04-03-2004, 12:43 PM
wow that was really
good it reminds me of this book i read the simple life of bees

REIGNsWrath
04-03-2004, 03:56 PM
mane tight poem, i
liked it, keep doing your thing mane...peace