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POETICAL_THUGGIN'
03-28-2004, 09:21 PM
" POETICAL RAIN "

BEYOND THESE WORDS IS THE STRUGGLE OF A
SOUL.
TORMENTED AND SCARRED,THE BURDEN PAIN CAN HOLD.
A
FORECAST OF EMOTIONS EXPRESSED THROUGH THE TEARS OF
SITUATIONS.
EXCLUSIVE FROM THE FIRE THE CONSEQUENCES OF
EMBRACING.
A PLACE AND TIME THAT ONLY YOUR MIND IS FREE.
A GALAXY
OF YOUR PAST FOR THE FUTURE IS WHAT WE BREATHE.
TO UNDERSTAND THE
PRESSURE OF ME IS ONLY TO EXAMINE INSTEAD OF READ.
A HIGH LIKE NO
OTHER THE MULTIPLICATION OF WEED.
THE SUNSHINE IS BEAUTIFUL YET IM
FOOLED BY AN ILLUSION.
LOST AND CONFUSED THE WORST OF ME IS
INTRUDING.
THE CLOUDS OF A STORM,THE SHIFT IN WIND.
POETICAL IS THE
PAINTING FOR THE RHYTHM IS THE PEN.
MANY DREAM WHILE OTHERS WISH
FOR A BETTER PLACE.
BUT I'M LIVING REALITY,THE RAIN I FACE.
HURRICANE
OF DEPRESSION WITH A TORNADOE'S SUICIDE.
THE POETRY IN ME IS THE
REASON I DIED.

ladybonethugs
03-29-2004, 01:18 PM
Thuggish Ruggish!!!
TIGHT as HELL!!! Keep it coming!!! Holla at ya Gurl!!!
-Harmony

Floppy
06-17-2005, 08:56 PM
VERy niCe

Chick-N-Bone
06-17-2005, 11:38 PM
very good, it sounds like something linkin park would come up with to me.... which is good, and thats also how i read it as...


still, kool....

Floppy
06-19-2005, 11:12 AM
lol