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Lax The...
04-20-2009, 08:07 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GA-lfy5uOm0

It's basically a death story with me as the one dying. Now I believe that this is my best work. Also the verse starts at the end

We only got one life to live yet one minute to die
Because in any one second, you’ll be sleeping in the sky
I’m asking why? Why do I have to be deceased
What have I done to rest in peace
not see my sister give birth to my niece
As I keep on asking, my heart rate starts to decrease
As the machine says zero, my soul will be released
Shot with one bullet to hit one artery
Shot by one killer who felt like harming me
Like soldiers who join the army
At the end of the tunnel I see a white light
Surrounded by darkness, telling me not to fight
As I lay on the bed to die, I say my last words
“I die a day before my birthday on January 23
Mom, dad I love you and thank you for my birth
Thank you for doing your best for keeping me on earth
But it’s my time to leave and I’ll watch over you
And make another baby live, a life has been renew
Alex, my brother, I’m proud of you kid
I know you’ll make something of yourself even though you are sick
Alejandra little sister, I’m not going to see you grow
And I’ll be guarding you wherever you go
To all those who love me I love you right back
And to my killer I forgive you even though I’m attacked
I forgot one person to address, before I say goodbye
(insert three syllable name) I would like to say that… I…”


Comments and feedback are welcome. And Frito, I would love to see your opinion posted on this thread

Lax The...
04-30-2009, 05:44 PM
thanks meng and boston is winning :)

B dot o dot B
05-28-2009, 12:10 AM
wow you have a lot of talent, i love it.. your lyrics are deep.. its like a story every time you write something keep it up!:nod:

Lax The...
05-28-2009, 04:14 PM
wow you have a lot of talent, i love it.. your lyrics are deep.. its like a story every time you write something keep it up!:nod:


thanks meng