hiphopfan vs Lax vs Set.(Topical) Vote

[hiphopfan]

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First to 5 votes wins
Dead line time: 48 hours

[Lucky D]

Topic: Havin' 15 mintues to convince a record label to sign you..

[hiphopfan]

This seems like a movie of never ending story length.
Competing with a cartoon bear deprived of its natural strength.
Happiness took away his ability to swallow, so now he's of the sleeping kind.
The competence of eating rotten food isn't what you're trying to find.
You're looking for real talent, skills that blow the competition away.
A lyrical deity that even makes the ignostics pray.
I can hear the calling of success in my rhymes, waiting for you to set it free.
Recording masterpieces, exploiting opportunities is the key.
He's useless, you only want the best when second equals last.
This is a battle, but he can't reply to what he can't digest.
I make the know-it-all feel lost, even Google has no results to display.
Acknowledge approval, assent and compliance are also okay.
Trust the truth, I don't even care what he has to say.
You can't escape my bars, just use roman numbers to count each day.
A local hero becoming global too.
I did my part, you know what you have to do.

[Vega/Set]

will since no one is steppin up, and i feel like battling, i'll jump in. hope you dont mind, but i just felt like writing.
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Your given me 15 minutes to convince you of my spits
all i need is 16 lines, fuck the time imma show you my wits
i got more skills then a mexican an more kills then wrists
Fuck the other dudes waitin in the back you can scratch them off the lists
Cause im better then the mainstream, Just me with no lame team
i can sell 100 million copies papi cause i want the fame dream
I'll be on every magazine cover brother, an wen all other dames see,
you too will see that im the most marketable, neva puttin shame to thee
Cause i came to be the best in the business, you all are witness
Im gonna rape the game an produce a bastard to spit sick,
someone just like me so i can have competition to rip shit
someone to bring the game back to its infamy not infancy like a kids dick
And im here to tell you,--get wit me,--cuz im the start of a new era
im fitted for this rap shit in 59 ways, dont even need 50 to kill an show true terror
just tha last number will do, i'll show you im the greatest to grace a mic
Sign me now, and you'll never wonder to another if you misplaced the hype.......

[Lax The...]

"okay kid you got 15min to show me what you can do"
"oh thank you sir, you won't regret it too"
well my name is Lax and i have lyrics so sharp
it's like an ax to your backs, with a twist of harp
I can say that these other rappers are raping the game
because they're the pain in the ass at the sound of their name
don't let the insane fame face fool you, i have plenty of brain
same as nas' unused rhymebook, that was locked up with chains
"stop kid, i don't like it, you wasted my time
come back when you have a ghostwriter with a partner in rhyme"
"these people or gonna witness a crime"
i took out my nine "now who are you gonna sign"
"you must be out of your mind"
"i have an insane face for a reason
you're death will hurt but will go like seasons"
and the record label president was freezing...

EDIT: the structure was bad so i just fixed it, it's the same verse

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[Lax The...]

c'mon guys, vote

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