Stc188
04-29-2004, 07:16 PM
Hey man, I liked this.
I dont read a lot of poetry bt I did think this was good. I liked the first and last sections the
most. The first because of the imagery with things like "Her beuty was like the first rose in
spring
or the first snowflake on the first winters day". And the last because of the way your
described your heart and the sun isnt shining anymore.
So if you want my oppinion it
was good
I dont read a lot of poetry bt I did think this was good. I liked the first and last sections the
most. The first because of the imagery with things like "Her beuty was like the first rose in
spring
or the first snowflake on the first winters day". And the last because of the way your
described your heart and the sun isnt shining anymore.
So if you want my oppinion it
was good