LOVE HURTS

[The Empress]

HERES SUMFIN I WROTE....ITS A BIT OF A VERSE/POEM....BUT READ ON & U'LL
SEE...BOUT THE DOWNS OF LOVE........

Affected by love
My self identification is
slipping away
I search for guidence from above
But he can't hear a single word that i
say when i pray
Today i lost my belifs along with my mind
My faith was unconcious it's
only hanging on the line
It's hard to find my self esteem when love has you blind
I mean
It's easy to give advice to my girls but i can't seem to help myself
Forgive
turn the
other cheek when i know the same shit will happen in weeks
man this evil reeks
i smell
it coming from a mile away
won't let a man ever hit my face But it's really easy to
say
When it's the person you love your confidence astrays
Do i weaken myself or does
he weaken me
This love bad for my health & i mean this literaly
I pitty me
I got myself
here but i can't get myself out
Keep giving him chances, the same thing happes it's the
never ending round about
How about i don't give up cause i never have & i never
will
Is that a good enogh excuce from stopping me to kill
Maybe i am strong cause i held
on this long
2 years & 7 months now all this shit goes wrong
Do we belong together,
You better hope i'm right about us
I gave you a taste of what will happen to your palm &
your guts
Cause if the palm touches my face at a faster pace Then i'm gonna cut it
up
You know i don't bluff
My whole life is based on truth
I'm trying to be as true as
possible to myself to my feelings for you
I love you
But now i'm lost I'n your love & i
don't know what to do
You love me that's why you hurt me that's getting me
confused
Throbbing head in my bed physically & mentally abused
I refuse to let this
happen again & i choose
To rap the love blues
Cause it's best spoken from the
heart
And I've played my part in that world that nearly tore me apart
But i let my soul
depart from my flesh
Realised i'm blessed
to survive this mess
I ain't gonna let him
get the best of me
Now i'm more cautious of people with insecurities
I may have some
bumps & bruises but the majority of the damage is done internally

[The Empress]

thanks guys... don't
worry too much though..... He knows whats best for him :wink:

[The Empress]

THANKS AGAIN
MAN

PEACE

[prettynikkixx]

aye gurl

that is one tiiiiiiiight ass poem. that is pure emotion and descriptive skill right there

[THUG - Z]

To be really honest that does not represent a poem. It's really an exposition.

The content of a poem has to have imagery, didactic elements, etc.

[Jaquantania]

WOW!! that was real deep, i understand your form of speech..
but dayum that was tightt, i like the presentation of your poem, probly toOk time an it loOks like you been speaking from your mind and heart..i like it, nice..

* ~Peace~ *

[blaqbabi]

Nice. :thumbup: :)

[Floppy]

nice poem `mon

[Mi$ta~Murda]

nice poem !!!

Love HURTS
Hate HEALS!!!!

keep it real!

[Da Derrty]

yea itz pretty awsome

[blaqbabi]

"MUSIC RUNS THROUGH MY VEINS,

PUMPS THROUGH MY HEART THEN STRAIGHT TO MY BRAINS,

MY BRAINS TELL MY HANDS TO THEN PICK UP THE PEN THEN STAIN,

THE PAGE WITH THE ULTIMATE TRUTH THEN TAG IT WITH MY NAME..... THE EMPRESS.....

SIMULAR TO THE WEATHER YOU CAN'T DO NOTHING BUT HIDE WHEN I REIGN"
(Quote from The Empress)

Em, that shit right there^^^ girl is hot, 4 real.

[Twilight]

If love hurts, why does my heart still hurt reading this...