for you....

[Bee]

Everyone
says i miss you,
they all said they care,
but they do not realize what im going
thru,
living life and your not there,
that night i went crazy,
lost all senses,
where is
my baby,
who shot u,
who dropped u,
no one can tell me what who did it,
so i
place it in the back of my mind,
for real,
just forget it,
i would kill for you,
blood
spill for you,

not done

[luvBONE12]

i think you're off to a great start with this one.

make
sure you post the rest when you're finished. 8)

[Bee]

no doubt ma

u
got some hott poems too

keep up the good work babygirl

[8ball]

very nice, im likin it
:)

[Whatever]

really good, keep it
coming!

[Bee]

thanks for all the
good feedback and saying you liked it, that means lot to me becuz the poem means alot to
me

[Secret Bone]

Damn yo, Hot shit all
around! Like it a lot. Tight azz poem, I can tell it means a lot cuz its deep. Good shyt. Keep it
up

[Bee]

thank you thank
you:)

[Mista Skelah]

I dont like it sounds
like some weak female rap artists lyrics is it an eve song?

[Bee]

no its not an eve
song

its not even a rap

[Bee]

i was very skepticle
on finishing this one
but ima write a few lines cuz it has to be done, even if it is garbage...its
not gonna collide with the one i already posted like i usually do, but its gonna be like a
pt.2


I dont even see how im gonna gain the strength to just let you go,
a years
been gone,
and you probably already know,
its about time i move on,
the process
has been slow,
i took time to sit down and think it all out,
im never gonna know what
that night was about,
no need for me to worry,
i gotta pick up
you know id give up
my life just to see you in a hurry,
but now i have to give up,
its a waste of time
contemplating what to do,
but u wouldnt want me to be frantic,
you wouldnt want me
stressed over you,
ima have to end this and put it away,
just remember as every hour
passes in the day,
i wish i can see your smile,
you were my heart when u were here for a
little while,
it broke my heart when u died,
im not even gonna front, couldnt count the
tears i cried,
i miss you baby,
but shit, i been drivin myself crazy,
couldnt think
straight for weeks,
every time ur name was mentioned my heart would skip beats,
im
sorry what happend,
im sorry ur life is thru,
but thats not even the sad part,
im sorry i
cant see u

[Secret Bone]

Mad tight Bee. It's
a lot better than tha previous versions of tha poem. I like this one a lot. Nice ending as well.
Good shit like alwayz. Keep this one! lol, its tight.

[Bee]

thats cuz this time i
thought about what i was writing insted of trying to flow with it :smile:

thanks for the
feedback tho

this time i wont put u on blast steven

[Bee]

thanks
man

appretiate it

much love

[*~Ruthless Ryda~*]

Damn that was a
hella tight. Makes me wanna cry :(

[Bee]

Thanks ma^