For Sharod...

[Bee]

im
having a withdrawl from u like a addict from crack,
crazy of me to ever want u back,
u
told me lies,
made me cry,
then to wipe the tears from my eyes,
you lied and
promised there would never be a goodbye,
yes im a complete fool to believe my love could
hold you,
i was a dummy to think my kindness would mold u,
u moved now ur gone but
ur memory still haunts me,
u never wanted me to be your girl,
you only wanted to flaunt
me


...not done...

[Secret Bone]

Yo girl, ur poems are
tight. I really like this one. Some deep shit. I like how u ended it too, its nice. Keep 'em
comin'. U always leavin peeps eager to see more. Nice job.

[Mista Skelah]

wow your tallented
you should send this in to teen people maybe they will put it in the magazine? 8)

[Secret Bone]

As usual, good shit. I
like it. Its about time u finished it tho. lol. But on tha real, its really good. From tha heart, das
what makes shit tha best. Anywayz, keep em comin' cuz das wus sup.

[Bee]

u always make fun of
my procrastination, its all good tho

thanks for the feed back