~BayBeeLoQuIta~
07-19-2004, 01:46 PM
[quote:5e5f965c3a="~BayBeeLoQuIta~"]similes?[/quote:5
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similes.....as in comparisons usin the
words "like" or "as."
ex. "silence breaks through the glass like a
foghorn"
taken from my poem "Alone"
ex.
"your touch is as soft as pink roses and as congenial as a breeze in
March."
taken from my poem
"Infatuation"
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n e who...the
poem wuz ok, but i really think you could've used some more poetic devices such as similes
and metaphors. it wuz still good though. 8)
oooo
mmm i aint really in to all that i
like to keep my shit simple
guess im not a real poet! lolz
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similes.....as in comparisons usin the
words "like" or "as."
ex. "silence breaks through the glass like a
foghorn"
taken from my poem "Alone"
ex.
"your touch is as soft as pink roses and as congenial as a breeze in
March."
taken from my poem
"Infatuation"
--------------------------------------------------------
n e who...the
poem wuz ok, but i really think you could've used some more poetic devices such as similes
and metaphors. it wuz still good though. 8)
oooo
mmm i aint really in to all that i
like to keep my shit simple
guess im not a real poet! lolz