luvBONE12
07-30-2004, 01:16 PM
well ummm...wut can i say?
i thought it wuz pretty nice.
nice lil' flow, i read it like a freestyle. i felt wut you were sayin...seemed serious. and as for n e
one, there's always room for improvement.
but man...lol...that colloquial language.
normally i might say that usin that wouldn't be a good idea, but i personally think it wuz great
for this one. lol. i thought it added personality to it, gave it that reality feeling. it's good. good
job.
sorry, it kinda made me laugh jus' a lil' bit, 'cause i wuz jus' imaginin my guy
askin..."where u iz?" :P
you're talented. i read some of your stuff in the freestyle
and lyrics forum, and you're pretty good. keep up the good work. i hope to see more from you.
8)
i thought it wuz pretty nice.
nice lil' flow, i read it like a freestyle. i felt wut you were sayin...seemed serious. and as for n e
one, there's always room for improvement.
but man...lol...that colloquial language.
normally i might say that usin that wouldn't be a good idea, but i personally think it wuz great
for this one. lol. i thought it added personality to it, gave it that reality feeling. it's good. good
job.
sorry, it kinda made me laugh jus' a lil' bit, 'cause i wuz jus' imaginin my guy
askin..."where u iz?" :P
you're talented. i read some of your stuff in the freestyle
and lyrics forum, and you're pretty good. keep up the good work. i hope to see more from you.
8)