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Bee
08-02-2004, 10:52 PM
Wont put into detail why i put up with this lame,
he could never
make me happy,
he just chose to put me through pain,
and all the while i didnt know it
was a game,
crazy of me,
should have listened when they said all men were the
same,
But not you,
No, there was something so different,
prolly in the way u treated
me like a person,
how u sat quiet and listened,
things got deep quick,
i knew this
feeling had to be real,
i couldnt keep it a secret,
my feelings i could no longer
conceal,
so i explained to you why i get happy when i hear your voice,
but again this
was a mistake,
another that had nothing to do with me,
it wasnt my choice,
I said
this is the last time i was gonna fall in love,
why put up with someone like that
so out
went my feelings, gone with a shove,
Now i will no longer have trust,
Keep my emotions
locked in,
this is a must,
this happened too much to even give love another try,
dont
question my thesis, no need to ask why,
cant let you see the tears in my eyes,
cant let
you know i find no solace, and would actually love to cry,
my nonchalant behavior shouldnt
even spark a clue,
you would never have an idea im still trippin, or even started gettin all
out of character over you

i dunno if im done with this

Secret Bone
08-05-2004, 12:37 PM
That was pretty
deep. Another good poem from you. Im still waitin' for somethin whack tho. lol. But nah, this
was real good. Not your best cuz I really really liked that one joint u did, but this wasn't far
from it. Well punk, nice job as usual. Keep 'em comin'. Much luv...

Bee
08-05-2004, 12:40 PM
thanks steven
:-)

much love