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c-toby
07-01-2006, 06:35 PM
one round,16-18 lines


Fixed -- Sal

c-toby
07-01-2006, 07:20 PM
out of every faggot ass wack wanna be emcees,
the leader of the muthafuckas wanna battle me,
i dont think u see,where im cummin from...or hear what im sayin,
no matter how ill u think u are...ur fuckin lame, no playin,
theyres no sayin,theres no tellin, jus how big the swellin gon be,
when im done nailing these,punches ta lunch on 16,
two faced bars...boot legged flaws that two face copped...
ur a blue faced cop,a true fake thug,
u dont throw punches...nigga u give hugs,
so im back ta bat u,ill blow u away like achoo,
by blastin the mack 10 at you ,give back ya raps dude....they aint workin...
mines hurtin...im burnin u on purpose...
two face(batman) got burned in sum acid,so has this, twofaceD,(you)
the acid that Im packin,fa blastin dudes facE,
who Takes sum cartoon netWOrk,and has they Fuckin sig,
ill sAy who...a two faCEd fuckin pig

i had a line about all the bold letters...then i forgot,now i remember but im not gonna put it since i ended it already....put em in order an it says sumtin

Vega/Set
07-03-2006, 03:26 PM
a yo homie i aint ducc'n u or ne thang but i been workin construction wit my uncle, and im goin to tha rest of tha week so idk wen i will have my drop in but plz believe it will drop...lata

Vega/Set
07-09-2006, 02:17 PM
this ni66a really thought he cood beat me but im not his child//
think u sum "hotsauce" but im tha spic bone collector n u only "mild"//
flip tha words on cap'n crunch, and thats wut i been doin to this fool//
always wantin to battle me, but u like a wrench, always gettin called a tool//
u not even a fuccn warm-up for me, shit i jus need a sauna battlin u//
at least that way in my mind i wood think your rhymes were hot dude//
you only got one thang right in your whole shitty verse//
that im a leader which makes u a follower wit my shifty words//
you stucc in park gettin choked out turnin purple like sum wonka nerds//
....absurd....in tha webster's dictionary shows your raps n face//
...preferred...is my lyrics which are bein shoved to u like wraps to fats that embrace//
tryna put a play on words.. on my name but it neva worked//
C twoface owns bitches, Y? i dont kno mayb its jus to ez to merk//
put these lyrics to ya face n u jus speak n studda like a 7-11 clerk//

weak shit im droppin like pennies from tha empire state//
but still enough to fracture ya skull and make it hard to procreate//

c-toby
07-09-2006, 02:21 PM
so are we gonna take votes on this

Vega/Set
07-09-2006, 04:32 PM
uppin for votes on this ppl!!!!!!!!

Syxx_Ten
07-09-2006, 06:36 PM
this was a coo battle i think face could have came off a lil harder then that he had some good creative punches but the flow was kinda weak it wasnt that enjoyable til the end toby u had some good punches wish u would have put that line u were talkin bout in it but i think i gotta give it to toby flow was more enjoyable better punches

aLiAs R.I.P.08
07-09-2006, 07:04 PM
this was a coo battle i think face could have came off a lil harder then that he had some good creative punches but the flow was kinda weak it wasnt that enjoyable til the end toby u had some good punches wish u would have put that line u were talkin bout in it but i think i gotta give it to toby flow was more enjoyable better punches

i agree, except for the "Die Two Face" concept, it was uncreative, it looks like u jus put a random message and find letters and bold them, doesnt give it any creative feel to the verse if it's not done right

and i saw more attempts of punches from two face's side, both sides forced them also

vote- vega

Vega/Set
07-10-2006, 04:55 AM
my last 2 lines explain it all lol

btw i agree wit alias alot.....no offense toby but it jus look like u were talkin shit tha whole time...not alot of effort in your verse for punches...i aint tryna knocc ya style homie its jus wut i noticed...

Die Die Die
07-10-2006, 06:31 AM
Two Face :nod:

~Longway~JNC Records
07-10-2006, 07:32 AM
so it is tied up 1-1

Vega/Set
07-10-2006, 08:26 AM
waitin for more votes

c-toby
07-10-2006, 08:32 AM
i agree, except for the "Die Two Face" concept, it was uncreative, it looks like u jus put a random message and find letters and bold them, doesnt give it any creative feel to the verse if it's not done right

and i saw more attempts of punches from two face's side, both sides forced them also



naw i had a badass closer that sealed off the bold letters thang...i jus forgot ta put the last line an it didnt work out near as good

aLiAs R.I.P.08
07-10-2006, 12:42 PM
naw i had a badass closer that sealed off the bold letters thang...i jus forgot ta put the last line an it didnt work out near as good

/hits toby

u shulda put it:biggrin:

sikwitit
07-10-2006, 03:07 PM
Aight fellas... Not to be an ass but I've seen better from both of yall, especially you, 2Face. Anyway, I thought it was a pretty close battle. I thought C-Toby's had a better flow, easier to follow anyway- as well as some good punches. 2Face, for some reason I had a tougher time following your flow but but with no-doubt, I thought you had better punches. This one was nice, made me laugh...
"u not even a fuccn warm-up for me, shit i jus need a sauna battlin u
at least that way in my mind i wood think your rhymes were hot dude"

It's hard to say... on one hand, battle rappin is all about talkin shit and clownin the other dude (or dudette) lyrically and with creativity. However, I think C-Toby's was more like a diss track on an album versus a battle rap. Meaning you was talkin a lot of shit and it was even put together well. But as far as straight punchlines go I think Face was hittin harder. Just my opinion fellas...

My vote- 2Face

Vega/Set
07-11-2006, 03:56 AM
2-1 uppin fo mo votes ppl

Prince Cory
07-11-2006, 04:14 AM
c-toby, your flow was dope man :thumbup:, but more punch lines would have been much better, i see what you were trying to do with the bold shit though.

Two-Face, like the dude a few posts up, you could of came harder, and your flow was as good as it could be. I only really liked the last two lines, they were hella tight.

Vote - c-toby, better flow....sorry Two Face

Vega/Set
07-11-2006, 04:19 AM
lol...u gotta b kiddin me.....i had a hella of alot more punchlines n metaphores n multis than toby...ya'll ni66as aint readin tha shit right or sumn........wut ive been readin from ya'll...its like u nigs is sayin that jus talkin shit wit alil punches will get u a win..hmmmmmm.....i wont speak on it ne more..................2-2 uppin for votes

c-toby
07-11-2006, 04:35 PM
thanx dawg its 2-2

c-toby
07-12-2006, 04:47 PM
thanx dawg its 2-2

:thumbup:

c-toby
07-12-2006, 05:02 PM
thanx for the sticky sal

~Longway~JNC Records
07-12-2006, 05:08 PM
Np if there are no votes by tomorrow -- I will vote and break the tie

c-toby
07-13-2006, 10:14 AM
sal...homie...would u please jus vote on it so we can get it over wit

Vega/Set
07-14-2006, 05:31 AM
......jus waitin for your vote nig

~Longway~JNC Records
07-14-2006, 06:24 AM
you only got one thang right in your whole shitty verse//
that im a leader which makes u a follower wit my shifty words//


^^^ best bar of the battle



You guys really slacked off on this battle in my opinion. Two- Face left himself open to get beat while Ctoby came with a strong verse with some good punches but lacked the flow needed to jump over a worthy competitor. For this reason I did not want to be the deciding vote cause you both deserve to lose and win at the same time if that makes sense. If this were a ladder match I would be down right disappointed actually. I think Two face considering his circumstances was most likely rushed in putting something down that did not need to be. With that said.....

My vote goes to -- Ctoby

I think you put creativity in your verse -- spelling out Two Faces name was tight -- never seen that before on here and it stood out. TF -- Im sorry yo its hard to vote against you but like I said earlier you probally should have waited until you had some real time to put something down.

Vega/Set
07-14-2006, 07:03 AM
well then im glad it aint a ladder match...gj toby...next time i wont rush into tha battle n next time u wont slide wit an ez win....next week you better be open to battle cuz im gonna come strong against u to redeem this shitty battle.....good job

c-toby
07-14-2006, 01:24 PM
nigga u did a good job to...i aint even gon lie im happy as hell i finally beat u...an ta tell u the truth,i thought u had the shit...so uve beat me 3 times an ive beat u once...3-1,ima have ta tie that up lol...good battle dawg

aLiAs R.I.P.08
07-14-2006, 01:35 PM
Wu Tang Clan Aint Nuttin To Fuck Wit

c-toby
07-14-2006, 02:02 PM
fa sho

DZ
07-17-2006, 05:16 PM
since this aint so serious or nuthin .. sumthin i`d like to add ....lol...u gotta b kiddin me.....i had a hella of alot more punchlines n metaphores n multis than toby...ya'll ni66as aint readin tha shit right or sumn........wut ive been readin from ya'll...its like u nigs is sayin that jus talkin shit wit alil punches will get u a win..hmmmmmm.....i wont speak on it ne more..................2-2 uppin for votes
dude, u need to learn to just take wut ppl hav to say, jus my opinion, even if u may not agree with it. i`d just like 2 see a little more respect between ppl, and this showz tha exact opposite on sumwunz opinion

Vega/Set
07-17-2006, 05:20 PM
i respect wut ppl say..its jus sumtimes i dont understand.....sum people vote on that battle that never came to even battle in this section and there tellin me that mine wasnt good enough? na fucc that..if u havent battled here or if u dont battle period then whose to say u even kno wtf u talkin bout...thats y i said wut i said..i respect ppls votes to a certain xtent

Vega/Set
07-17-2006, 05:32 PM
if u reveiw tha whole battle n tha votes...my votes came from cats that have been here for a while and also kno wut they talkin bout...his votes were from new cats here and one that doesnt even come to battle here..so ya u can say i was bitchin u can say w/e but imo i was robbed in tha match...

aLiAs R.I.P.08
07-17-2006, 05:41 PM
^^^good point, but then again, tober-c did get a vote from sal, a dude who knows what he's doin

Vega/Set
07-17-2006, 06:40 PM
yes i kno...and i respect his vote but not the others...dont mean get me wrong i dont hate them or ne thang but i jus dont....idk tha word im lookin for so jus nvm wats dun is dun

Syxx_Ten
07-17-2006, 08:26 PM
yes i kno...and i respect his vote but not the others...dont mean get me wrong i dont hate them or ne thang but i jus dont....idk tha word im lookin for so jus nvm wats dun is dun


so what my vote dont count

Vega/Set
07-17-2006, 08:31 PM
LOL it dont really matta cuz tha battle is ova

DZ
07-19-2006, 01:23 AM
iz all good, jus so everything is cleared up