Winner -- Matty Bone ~~~~~~Scar - Keeburna

[keeburna]

yeah well i guess were gonna fallow the house rules. I'm a lil buisy right now but i'll drop before the day ends peace.

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started

[~Longway~JNC Records]

sounds coo

[~Longway~JNC Records]

You guys have 48 hours from now to post-- Keeburna is up first

[keeburna]

lets get this going then,

its time for me to ride out, matty try to hide out/
he'll be finished there's no doubt, i'ma about to show you what i'm all about/
i really don't no who this chump think he be/
but he aint breaking keeburna no not me, i float like a butterfly sting like a bee/
next thing you know...poof... matty's gone he's history/
yeah i've been gone they thought i would retire/
well after reading this fools shit i knew i needed to bring back the fire/
plus at night matty's dreaming bout me i'm the one he desire/
so da arsonist return, you bout to get burned, betterl ive and learn/
don't try to test me, i read your thoughts like telepathy/
i bring the verbal demise of this fool claiming that he got skill/
well you lied to me boy so i guess i'm the only one who's real/
i'm not a killa but i think i might become one tonight/
seeing the look on your face as i end your life brings me sick delight/
i am the darkness fallow the light, if you wish to see heaven/
rebuke now and pray for a blessen, unlike Jesus you'll see no ressurection/
or are you a false believer, then i will deliver you/
i'll annoint your body after i'm finished killing you....


i'm out da arsonist

[~Longway~JNC Records]

nice spit -- matty your up next

[Matty_Bone]

find the lock and turn the kee//
unlock my lyrics to burn you seriuosly//
the coroner will look at you and say he got burned to the third degree//
by one Matty Bone with my flame thrower and chrome//
buck shots in your dome, the arsonist is gone//
come on you like a tidal wave//
I put out your flame like candles on a birthday cake//
i may have lost a few, but i wont lose to you//
i only agreed to this battle cos i had nothin better to do//
and after i kill you i'll kill myself to//
so i can follow you for eternity and kill you whenever i want to//
you better get used to it cos i aint goin nowhere//
if you run i'll find you, theres no where you can hide fool//
im in the trees and the air hell even your mommas swimming pool//
so next time you battle, think twice about who you call out//
i'll knock you out in around half a bout//

Im out.

Lets get the votes going

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

time to use a breakdown techinque one of my relatives showed me(lol)
i count each bar as two points, and i count 1 bar=1 line, and break down a verse into couplets, ok, and jus use the highest percentage to determine my vote, sooooooooooo

Arsonist
its time for me to ride out, matty try to hide out/
he'll be finished there's no doubt, i'ma about to show you what i'm all about/
---1/2----the flow is good, but there really wasnt any punch in this set
i really don't no who this chump think he be/
but he aint breaking keeburna no not me, i float like a butterfly sting like a bee/
---0/2---not feelin anything here, jus rhymin words wit a sloppy flow
next thing you know...poof... matty's gone he's history/
yeah i've been gone they thought i would retire/
---0/2---again, no punch attempted, and the other line has no relation to da first, and there is a disturbance in rhyme scheme
well after reading this fools shit i knew i needed to bring back the fire/
plus at night matty's dreaming bout me i'm the one he desire/
---1/2---nuttin much here that can be considered a hard hitter
so da arsonist return, you bout to get burned, betterl ive and learn/
don't try to test me, i read your thoughts like telepathy/
---1/2---again, nuttin serious, but the flow was pretty good, which earned ya da points
i bring the verbal demise of this fool claiming that he got skill/
well you lied to me boy so i guess i'm the only one who's real/
---1/2---first line was a nice opener for a great punchline, but the second one messed it up
i'm not a killa but i think i might become one tonight/
seeing the look on your face as i end your life brings me sick delight/
---1/2---i liked where u were goin wit dis, but the word "sick" fucked up da flow, and no punch really
i am the darkness fallow the light, if you wish to see heaven/
rebuke now and pray for a blessen, unlike Jesus you'll see no ressurection/
---2/2---i'll jus giv ya da points cuz of the flow and a small attempt at a punch
or are you a false believer, then i will deliver you/
i'll annoint your body after i'm finished killing you....
---1/2---looked creative, but didnt end as hard as i wanted it to

8/18 = 4/9 = 44%

Matty
find the lock and turn the kee//
unlock my lyrics to burn you seriuosly//
---2/2---i liked where u were goin wit dis, simple flow balanced the attempt of a punch
the coroner will look at you and say he got burned to the third degree//
by one Matty Bone with my flame thrower and chrome//
---1/2---ehh, i see where u were goin wit it, yet, didnt come out as effective, plus the scheme got fucked
buck shots in your dome, the arsonist is gone//
come on you like a tidal wave//
I put out your flame like candles on a birthday cake//
---1/3---well, i see u messed up da scheme after that last line throughout, so i had to combine 3 bars, and at least there was attempt, but concept is ancient
i may have lost a few, but i wont lose to you//
i only agreed to this battle cos i had nothin better to do//
---2/2---it was a funny line at da end, it's effective because it ridicules da oponent
and after i kill you i'll kill myself to//
so i can follow you for eternity and kill you whenever i want to//
---1/2---ehh....liked where u were leadin to, but ended it weak
you better get used to it cos i aint goin nowhere//
---0/1---had to make this one line cuz of rhyme scheme corruption
if you run i'll find you, theres no where you can hide fool//
im in the trees and the air hell even your mommas swimming pool//
---0/2---two weak lines, nuttin special
so next time you battle, think twice about who you call out//
i'll knock you out in around half a bout//
---1/2---at least it was an attack, it was just weak though

8/16 = 1/2 = 50%

as it shows

Vote = *Matty_Bone*

p.s. YEAH I LIKE MAKING IT LOOK NICE!!! :)

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Arsonist
its time for me to ride out, matty try to hide out/
he'll be finished there's no doubt, i'ma about to show you what i'm all about/
---0/2----the flow is good, but you lost it with the second line -- no punch
i really don't no who this chump think he be/
but he aint breaking keeburna no not me, i float like a butterfly sting like a bee/
---0/2---not feelin anything here, jus rhymin words wit a sloppy flow
next thing you know...poof... matty's gone he's history/
yeah i've been gone they thought i would retire/
---0/2---again, no punch attempted, and the other line has no relation to da first, and there is a disturbance in rhyme scheme
well after reading this fools shit i knew i needed to bring back the fire/
plus at night matty's dreaming bout me i'm the one he desire/
---0/2---you did it backwards but you used my punch from my itfeeds/limpcity battle. Be original
so da arsonist return, you bout to get burned, betterl ive and learn/
don't try to test me, i read your thoughts like telepathy/
---1/2--- I am unimpressed but better then the prior bars
i bring the verbal demise of this fool claiming that he got skill/
well you lied to me boy so i guess i'm the only one who's real/
---2/2---I like this alot -- nice bar
i'm not a killa but i think i might become one tonight/
seeing the look on your face as i end your life brings me sick delight/
---1/2---you over throught it -- this could have been a knockout punch
i am the darkness fallow the light, if you wish to see heaven/
rebuke now and pray for a blessen, unlike Jesus you'll see no ressurection/
---1/2--- It was ok
or are you a false believer, then i will deliver you/
i'll annoint your body after i'm finished killing you....
---2/2--- Good ending -- strong punch I like it
7/18 = 39%

Matty
find the lock and turn the kee//
unlock my lyrics to burn you seriuosly//
---2/2---Would have been better in the middle of the verse or at the end not as an opener -- strong bar though
the coroner will look at you and say he got burned to the third degree//
by one Matty Bone with my flame thrower and chrome//
---0/2--- Huh -- I dont get it -- this lined just killed the momentum from the first bar. Now where you gonna take it?
buck shots in your dome, the arsonist is gone//
come on you like a tidal wave//
I put out your flame like candles on a birthday cake//
---1/3--- Buck shots to your dome and birthday cake should not be in the same set
i may have lost a few, but i wont lose to you//
i only agreed to this battle cos i had nothin better to do//
---2/2---strong punch -- this was your knockout.
and after i kill you i'll kill myself to//
so i can follow you for eternity and kill you whenever i want to//
---1/2---not sure if this is what you actually wanted from this punch but it worked but could have followed your knockout and put a nail in his coffin
you better get used to it cos i aint goin nowhere//
---0/1---had to make this one line cuz of rhyme scheme corruption
if you run i'll find you, theres no where you can hide fool//
im in the trees and the air hell even your mommas swimming pool//
---0/2---you are showing a bit of greatness and then a line like this that not only messes with your flow but also ruins your momentum again
so next time you battle, think twice about who you call out//
i'll knock you out in around half a bout//
---1/2---at least it was an attack, it was just weak though

7/16 = 44%


Vote = Matty Bone -- by the skin of his teeth

[Boss_Smoke]

Well, neither truly attempted any large punches. kee seemed to be just rhyming in stints of his verse, and not punching at all, while Matty was kinda trying to punch, but it just wasn't that succesful. But, I think Matty had a bit better "punches" though, and his verse was overall better. So he gets my vote.

VOTE : Matty_Bone

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[~Longway~JNC Records]

That is a knockout folks

Another upset


Points before the battle

Matty Bone - 600

Keeburna -- 800


Points after the battle

Matty Bone -- 840 Up 30%

Keeburna -- 720 Down 10%


Nice battle guys

[Matty_Bone]

AY Thanks for voting everyone, man i guess this is my first victory
HELL YEAH!!!!!
Hey Sal so what happens from here? Do i just challeng anyone or do i challenge a winner from the other battles?

[~Longway~JNC Records]

you can challange once during the month and you can be challanged once. All other battles during the month are non-ladder matches -- you can imagine this is kind of time consuming for me atm. Until Two face gets back and I get some help that is