Winner -- Boss Smoke ~~~~~~Scar -- Revolutionary

[Boss_Smoke]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started

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Ayo,

I can guess his verse already, "I'm tough, I got a strap!"/
If that's Revolutionary than what does that say about rap?/
Took a while to get back to me, must've been hiding/
The only reason I lost to him is because he was dick-riding/
I mean litterally mounted like a horse on ya'll dicks striding/
So he got votes against Smoke because he didn't 'choke'/
If you judge by skill this kid is a little joke/
And if you judge correctly I won by the text/
But he won because of his 'gag-reflex'?/
I now know why he was so popular in prison/
Because he couldn't get off his knees like a certain Hilton/
And just like 'Clemens' when he wasn't catchin' he was 'pitchin'/
You've been with all men many types of guys and lads/
So I'ma do you a favor and buy you a pair of kneepads/
Revolutionary, the MC with the generic rhymes that're cheesy/
Wasn't much of a challenge, because he goes down so easy/

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[~Longway~JNC Records]

Rev you have 48 hours to post

[Revolutionary]

"Ayo" lol
i think ima beat dis nigga 4 the 5th or 4th time?/
kids spittin homosexual rhymes/
after dis battle smoke is gunna be a chalk outline/
cuz i go down easy like hard liqour/
ya mom goes down easy,she likes my hard dick-in-her/
u jus dont got the skillz lyricaly/
my shit is ill nigga you dont wanna spit wit me/
i own you son you cant do shit to me/
leave you in the middle of the street twisted cuz i jus dont care/
u spittin 4 fun , im spittin 2 eat, my punches like a fist kid n my flow jus aint fair/
u was done once u started wit ur nursery rhyme verse/
dis niggaz "smoke" cuz i sparked it,i got dis nigga ridin in a hearse, my rhymes put dis nigga in tha earth/
i thought kanabara was bad dis nigga boss even worse/
im done wit dis nigga,burried his career in tha dirt/
boss dont learn,dont kno how many mcs i burned/
like im spittin stds,watch dis nigga go down again got his career in a earn/

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Boss Smoke

I can guess his verse already, "I'm tough, I got a strap!"/
If that's Revolutionary than what does that say about rap?/
---2/2---haha, nice, i like the way u connected both....no flaw
Took a while to get back to me, must've been hiding/
The only reason I lost to him is because he was dick-riding/
I mean litterally mounted like a horse on ya'll dicks striding/
---1/3---pretty good, gettin personal there, and that's wat wins ya points
So he got votes against Smoke because he didn't 'choke'/
If you judge by skill this kid is a little joke/
---2/2---i like the aggressiveness and gettin personal again...and the simple flow balances it all out
And if you judge correctly I won by the text/
But he won because of his 'gag-reflex'?/
---1/2---dat was ok...coulda been more creative
I now know why he was so popular in prison/
Because he couldn't get off his knees like a certain Hilton/
And just like 'Clemens' when he wasn't catchin' he was 'pitchin'/
---2/3---ehh, u attempted a punch, which is good...but wasnt very effective
You've been with all men many types of guys and lads/
So I'ma do you a favor and buy you a pair of kneepads/
---1/2---lol, funny lines, and relating both is good, but coulda hit harder w/ sum revision
Revolutionary, the MC with the generic rhymes that're cheesy/
Wasn't much of a challenge, because he goes down so easy/
---0/2---not feelin this closer, lines were dull

9/16 = 56%

REVOLUTIONARY

i think ima beat dis nigga 4 the 5th or 4th time?/
kids spittin homosexual rhymes/
after dis battle smoke is gunna be a chalk outline/
---0/2---nuttin there that i can consider a punch or nice line
cuz i go down easy like hard liqour/
ya mom goes down easy,she likes my hard dick-in-her/
---1/2---bah, i gave ya point for attempt, but uncreative concept, the whole "ur momma, ur girlfriend" shabang wont cut it
u jus dont got the skillz lyricaly/
my shit is ill nigga you dont wanna spit wit me/
i own you son you cant do shit to me/
---1/3---a point for the flow, but again, nuttin that can be labeled a punch
leave you in the middle of the street twisted cuz i jus dont care/
u spittin 4 fun , im spittin 2 eat, my punches like a fist kid n my flow jus aint fair/
---1/2---the first line was ehh, the second was a bit better
u was done once u started wit ur nursery rhyme verse/
dis niggaz "smoke" cuz i sparked it,i got dis nigga ridin in a hearse, my rhymes put dis nigga in tha earth/
---1/2---nuttin special, but a point for nameplay attempt
i thought kanabara was bad dis nigga boss even worse/
im done wit dis nigga,burried his career in tha dirt/
---2/2---i liked this set, not so "WOW" but it was effective enough for me, lol at kanabara
boss dont learn,dont kno how many mcs i burned/
like im spittin stds,watch dis nigga go down again got his career in a earn/
---1/2---nuttin special, dull set, but da attempt was there, and u mean "urn"

7/16 = 43%

Vote = Boss_Smoke

***rev, i've seen alot better from ya man, don't get lazy on me now, heh, good battle guys

[Matty_Bone]

Yeah i liked Boss Smokes verse better, he kept the one theme throughout but kept improving on each punch, i liked the kneepad line.
I was feeling Revs verse (i think ima beat dis nigga 4 the 5th or 4th time)
but Boss came through in the end.

Vote = Boss

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Boss Smoke

I can guess his verse already, "I'm tough, I got a strap!"/
If that's Revolutionary than what does that say about rap?/
---2/2---Very strong opening
Took a while to get back to me, must've been hiding/
The only reason I lost to him is because he was dick-riding/
I mean litterally mounted like a horse on ya'll dicks striding/
---2/3---I liked it better then alias
So he got votes against Smoke because he didn't 'choke'/
If you judge by skill this kid is a little joke/
---2/2---Verse is staying together nicely
And if you judge correctly I won by the text/
But he won because of his 'gag-reflex'?/
---1/2---Not feeling this bar
I now know why he was so popular in prison/
Because he couldn't get off his knees like a certain Hilton/
And just like 'Clemens' when he wasn't catchin' he was 'pitchin'/
---1/3---this came across very weak and did not fit in with the flow
You've been with all men many types of guys and lads/
So I'ma do you a favor and buy you a pair of kneepads/
---1/2---Not really feeling it but was not a disaster either
Revolutionary, the MC with the generic rhymes that're cheesy/
Wasn't much of a challenge, because he goes down so easy/
---0/2---weakl


REVOLUTIONARY

i think ima beat dis nigga 4 the 5th or 4th time?/
kids spittin homosexual rhymes/
after dis battle smoke is gunna be a chalk outline/
---0/2---terrible opening
cuz i go down easy like hard liqour/
ya mom goes down easy,she likes my hard dick-in-her/
---1/2--- not impressed
u jus dont got the skillz lyricaly/
my shit is ill nigga you dont wanna spit wit me/
i own you son you cant do shit to me/
---1/3---again very weak
leave you in the middle of the street twisted cuz i jus dont care/
u spittin 4 fun , im spittin 2 eat, my punches like a fist kid n my flow jus aint fair/
---2/2--- not bad -- needs work but it works
u was done once u started wit ur nursery rhyme verse/
dis niggaz "smoke" cuz i sparked it,i got dis nigga ridin in a hearse, my rhymes put dis nigga in tha earth/
---1/2---my comments are the same as alias
i thought kanabara was bad dis nigga boss even worse/
im done wit dis nigga,burried his career in tha dirt/
---2/2---i liked this set, not so "WOW" but it was effective enough for me, lol at kanabara (Same for Sal)
boss dont learn,dont kno how many mcs i burned/
like im spittin stds,watch dis nigga go down again got his career in a earn/
---1/2--- You got lazy with this verse




Boss -- 9/16 56%
Rev -- 8/15 53%


Vote = Boss

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Thats a KO fellas Good battle to both of you

Congrats to Boss for the first Win in the new system


Huge upset as well

Points before the battle

Rev -- 900
Boss -- 600



Points after the battle

Boss -- 870 + 30%
Rev -- 810 - 10%