Winner -- Slippy the Pimp ~~~~~~~~~ Scar C-Toby (Great Battle MUST SEE)

[~Longway~JNC Records]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started



Ctoby you are lower on the list then Slippy the Pimp so you must go first

You have 48 hours to post

[~Longway~JNC Records]

test

[c-toby]

yo let me get the dutch im bout ta fuck this kid up...
slippy trippin, thats a prison shank in ur gut...this prissy lil puss done pushed me to far
...witness ta what i do to a pimp wit jus ten bars...hit u wit the facelift uppercut punchline,no need ta do it twice my nigga just one time...
k-o no mo slippin on his pimpin, if i gave u my lyrics man u still shouldnt be spitten,
u cant rap u cant rhyme an u damn sure cant flow,jus give it up nigga, cuz im in control...i coulda told u before my victory was in store, see u a sensual bitch
and i define hardcore,...ill rip u a new ass with a bar at a car port,
see who is far more o.g. to the heart whore...see im a teacher an u aint even softmor
whos flow cost more see u freestyle...i get payed jus ta lay heat-down, once im done yall see a great beat-down...from a real pimp to a fake-street-clown...named slippy,
u aint shit nigga...(ha) u cant get me, bitch u cant see me, you are not at my level
an ya neva gon be g... get wit da p.g., before i get the a.k....
you say u pimpin then dont hate play k,cuz i stay away from fake ass rappers...
there shit rubs off an makes straight gay actors,like this nigga im battling,
it dont matter man... im just badder mann...thats what this whole verse shows...
im the bigger man... with alot bigger nutz pimpin dont believe me ask ur hoes(oh)

[~Longway~JNC Records]

very nice I like -- you must been saving up for this toby cause that is a awesome verse-- Slippy homie you got 48 to reply

[c-toby]

thanx dude...im real stoned:aim-bigsmile:

[Darkchild]

Ohhhhhhhhh

That was pretty nice c, flow was off at some points, but the shit hit hard :krazy:

lookin forward to slippy reply, Never know we might have a new #1 after this :biggrin:

[WAR CHIEF]

Comparing himself to hardcore porno bitches, now I know Toby’s high-
how can you be hard when your Vivid girl Kobe Thai? Homey why?-
Are you so quick to get another lyrical thrashing-
you’ll feel the unholy hand of god, receive a miracle bashing-
mashing on this clit like the mushroom tip of my flow-
stomp this faggot out so bad they nick named me Super Mario-
running through your bario, spitting fire on this goomba-
so ill, I’ll have your man dancing La Rhumba-
with rhymes that’ll move ya, murder your Nick jr. Jabber-
hit you that swagger, you backyardigans couldn’t hammer-
like napoleon, I’m taking this bitch out for glamour shots-
have you beggin the God for mercy when this Grammar drops-
I clamor spots, have your whole gay club in frenzy-
watch toby get trampled on the floor when his mens’ leave-
your naive if you believe you achieve a better flow then mine-
I believe I should be arrested because molesting little boys is a crime-
fuck your pimp slaps Slip Pimp holds the crown for bruising bitches-
came back for seconds now your just loosening stitches..........

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Lets get some votes guys

[~Longway~JNC Records]

well I guess I should go ahead and vote. You both came real strong both of you should hold your head up high no matter win or lose. I read both verses and the punches were on point for both of you -- I would even say a draw. Toby came stronger with the opening and Slippy came stronger with the close so your equal there. The only thing that is different between the verses is how they flow and I have to give the upper hand there to Slippy.


Therefore my votes goes to

Slippy Da Pimp

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Codename (Work on your structure, it was difficult breaking your shit down and if I actually seperate them into rhyming bars, it's way over 16-18 bars, your verse, when broken down, went 10 bars beyond the bar limit)

yo let me get the dutch im bout ta fuck this kid up
slippy trippin, thats a prison shank in ur gut
1/2 - it was ok, had attack in it
this prissy lil puss done pushed me to far
witness ta what i do to a pimp wit jus ten bars
1/2 - i liked dat second line
hit u wit the facelift uppercut punchline
no need ta do it twice my nigga just one time
1/2 - liked where you were goin wit the first line, shoulda of fed off that to create a more effective second line
k-o no mo slippin on his pimpin
if i gave u my lyrics man u still shouldnt be spitten
1/2 - again, nice first line, but the second is weak for a punch
u cant rap u cant rhyme an u damn sure cant flow
jus give it up nigga, cuz im in control
0/2 - no attempts here, both fillers, unless you made up something for the second line to support the first
i coulda told u before my victory was in store
see u a sensual bitch and i define hardcore
1/2 - second line was ok, that got the point
ill rip u a new ass with a bar at a car port,
see who is far more o.g. to the heart whore
1/2 - really liked the flow connecting the two lines
see im a teacher an u aint even softmor
0/1 - weak
whos flow cost more see u freestyle...i get payed jus ta lay heat-down
once im done yall see a great beat-down...from a real pimp to a fake-street-clown
1/2 - second line, haha, nice shit
named slippy, u aint shit nigga...(ha) u cant get me
bitch u cant see me, you are not at my level
0/2 - weak fillers
an ya neva gon be g... get wit da p.g., before i get the a.k....
you say u pimpin then dont hate play k
1/2 - feeling the first line, but the second fucked it up
cuz i stay away from fake ass rappers
there shit rubs off an makes straight gay actors
0/2 - filler
like this nigga im battling,
it dont matter man... im just badder mann
0/2 - filler
thats what this whole verse shows
im the bigger man... with alot bigger nutz pimpin dont believe me ask ur hoes(oh)
1/2 - ok closer, point for the last line

9/27 = 1/3 = 33%

Child's Play

Comparing himself to hardcore porno bitches, now I know Toby’s high-
how can you be hard when your Vivid girl Kobe Thai? Homey why?-
2/2 - great setup, punch was funny, that got a point
Are you so quick to get another lyrical thrashing-
you’ll feel the unholy hand of god, receive a miracle bashing-
1/2 - second line was hot, first coulda warmed up the mood for the second, if u know what i mean
mashing on this clit like the mushroom tip of my flow-
stomp this faggot out so bad they nick named me Super Mario-
2/2 - nice setup again, and both lines connected well
running through your bario, spitting fire on this goomba-
so ill, I’ll have your man dancing La Rhumba-
1/2 - these were iight, attempt got the point
with rhymes that’ll move ya, murder your Nick jr. Jabber-
hit you that swagger, you backyardigans couldn’t hammer-
1/2 - the punch was kinda weak, but the setup and connection got the point
like napoleon, I’m taking this bitch out for glamour shots-
have you beggin the God for mercy when this Grammar drops-
2/2 - nice flow, nice setup, punch was effective
I clamor spots, have your whole gay club in frenzy-
watch toby get trampled on the floor when his mens’ leave-
2/2 - rofl, like that whole scenario, and humor strengthened the punch
your naive if you believe you achieve a better flow then mine-
I believe I should be arrested because molesting little boys is a crime-
1/2 - punch was so,so, but the flow's quality did it well
fuck your pimp slaps Slip Pimp holds the crown for bruising bitches-
came back for seconds now your just loosening stitches..........
2/2 - nice closer, punch was there, and flow completed it

14/18 = 7/9 = 77%

Vote - Slippy The Pimp

***Toby, you had a good verse, but it wasn't battle worthy IMO because you gotta understand my evaluation techniques is searching for accuracy of setups, structure, flow, connections, and those are the minimals...most importantly PUNCHES, you lacked those, yeah you had the taunting and flow and nice rhyming schemes, but the lack of punches hurt your verse, whether it's Personals, Humor, Nameplay or Metaphoric, punches are important, work on that for your next battle, ALSO, Slippy was more superior when it came to CREATIVITY, expand your horizons on that shit Toby, then I'm sure you'll have shit on lock, good battle guys

[~Longway~JNC Records]

yea -- alias always breaks it down better then I but I think we had the same idea

[Boss_Smoke]

I vote for Slippy, because the flow was pretty much perfect, and the punches were very good. Toby went back to his weak structure, that he had seemingly stayed away from for a while, which made his verse weaker.

VOTE : SLIPPY

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[~Longway~JNC Records]

That is a KO guys-- great battle to both of you

[c-toby]

fuck

[~Longway~JNC Records]

its a tough loss -- that verse would have beat alot of folks -- like I said you keep your head hi nig -- you proved you belong here in this battle and thats me just being real with ya. Was not sure before but you certainly proved it here. With that said Slippy has really come up also and is a force to be reconed with

[c-toby]

^^^thanx dawg....good battle my nig slippy

[WAR CHIEF]

Thanks for the feed back fellas.

I read this verse yesterday, didn't have time to reply last night, then this morning I realized I had to reply to this today before 4:00 or take a loss, so I took a shit, showered, and dropped before work. That time limit's a mother fucker, but it'lll pressure you to drop dirty.

Toby, Thanks for Playing. Remember Winners don't use drugs!:blunt: