NOBODY ELSE VOTE UNTIL I LAY MY VOTE DOWN, cuz mine matters the most :)
jk, but i like voting, dats y, lol, i'll edit this post wit my break down
SIK
You high up on the ladder now wit ya points and shit/<o:p></o:p>
I'm bout to bring ya down a bit by takin 30%/
2/2 - great way of connecting everthing together so that both lines associate with each other, the punch was nice too, getting personal<o:p></o:p>
I'll murder you quick…in fact I never heard of you bitch/<o:p></o:p>
Slippy the Pimp? Maybe if da S and P were to switch/
1/2 - ehh, the nameplay was weak and the punch was basic, point for attempt though<o:p></o:p>
Pippy the Simp…yeah I think I like it better like this/<o:p></o:p>
Cuz I ain't never seen a pimp who gets checked by the tricks /
1/2 - first line was a filler, didnt really start off the second, good punch though<o:p></o:p>
And left wit the bitch you supposed to be collectin from which …/<o:p></o:p>
Means that you respected bout as much as her infectionous itch /
2/2 - again, associating both bars is a plus, ending it a punch that has humor, another plus<o:p></o:p>
I'm killin you snitch and leavin you merked on the pavement /<o:p></o:p>
I'm certain to get on ya nerves like a deadly nerve agent/ ß (biological warefare)
1/2 - woulda gave ya a 2 because of the punch, but u messed up the flow and rhyme scheme when the two green parts dont actually rhyme wit ur attempt of wordplay because of syllable count, watch out for that, that hurst the effect of everything<o:p></o:p>
And it was worth waitin for me to come and battle<script><!--D(["mb","you now /
\nYou scare to come around or even peep the "call out lounge"/
\nMy punchlines pound… you get up then fall back down/
\nLike Tyson vs Douglas nigga when he lost that crown/
\nKnockin you down off the top like this was king of the hill /
\nTerrifyin Pippy like he was in Amityville/
\nI\'m spittin at will… lyrics at your expence that\'ll kill /
\nI got them high-end skills and you ain\'t fit for the bill/
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\nWhat now? I saw you read that I was callin you out//
\nThe fuck you think bout... readin back to study my style?//
\nYou can\'t prepare for me nigga, I\'m to versitile//
\nYou the first allowed to feel how Sikwitit get down//
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\nPOW!... Nigga act like you know that sound/
\nThat\'s the sound of ya keyboard hittin the ground/
\nDon\'t be sad or mad and turn that frown upside down/
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You scare to come around or even peep the "call-out lounge"/
<o:p></o:p>1/2 - attempt at a punch, but the first was weak, the second was alright, coulda been more creative
My punchlines pound… you get up then fall back down/ <o:p></o:p>
Like Tyson vs Douglas nigga when he lost that crown/
1/2 - no punch, both fillers, you should have started sumthin with the first an then attack wit a punch wit da second, it looks like they are seperate<o:p></o:p>
What now? I saw you read that I was callin you out/<o:p></o:p>
The fuck you think bout... readin back to study my style/
<o:p></o:p>1/2 - getting personal, point, but nuttin worth a strong punch, rhyme scheme is corrupted as well
You can't prepare for me nigga, I'm to versitile/<o:p></o:p>
And you the first allowed to feel how Sikwitit get down/
0/2 - i dunt see an attempt of punch, the first line is self-praising, the second points out wats going to happen, but no attack is present, bad closer
10/16 = 5/8 = 62%
Child's Play
Sikwitit, don’t flatter yourself, yeah I seen you calling me out/
I’m just annoyed with it, like a bear battling a scout/
like comparing the green giant to a sprout-
1/3 - the second was attempted, but when the third is attempted in the same rhyme scheme, it is forced, and both punches were weak
you’re a fucking snack to me, like a dog smacks a flea/
I don’t need to research shit, your whole styles whack to me/
step to me, you’ll get shitted on and rinsed with pee/
0/3 - the first line was weak, the second was feeding, which i don't like, and the third had a played concept and the "rinsed wit pee" fucks up the rhyme scheme since u were connecting it with the two lines b4 it
try and kiss the Frog Prince and see- how I smear a queer/
slice your neck ear to ear, I’ve been severe since my premier/
I’m Simply Pimply, a rhyme engineer, here to end your career/
2/3 - the first two lines, that's wat i like to see from u, nice 2-line combo, but the third was filler, no punch
enuff of the bragging shit, I’m about to bust off on this bitch’s baggy tits/
1/1 - i see where u going at, attempt at punch got the point
fist your scabby slit, and use your clit like a speed bag/
make you bleed bad, you’ll need rags/
1/2 - the first attempt was funny, the second was filler
and that’s how I end your period, for coming off just a little whack/
how you gonna get smacked by Tyson, when you need to work up the ladder like Little Mac?/
1/2 - point for attempt, but overall, weak set-up and lines
Riddle me that, riddle me this, you grasp a mic like your getting sik-wit-a-dick/
Now elevate your game and stick wit it bitch......
2/2 - lol, now that's a strong closer, nice nameplay and punch overall
8/16 = 1/2 = 50%
Vote - sikwitit
***shit, this battle coulda been close, but the way slippy performed in this one, not was i was expectin, i've seen much stronger and clever verse from ya slippy, and the structure/setups/flow really hurt you in this one, but sikwitit also came weak as well, there were alot of mistakes in his verse, don't make the same mistake both of you, good battle though, lol, i enjoyed, keep it up
3-0 K.O. Sikwitit claims the victory on this one