View Full Version : Winner Sikwitit-- ~~~~~~~~~~~ Scar Two Face
Vega/Set
07-16-2006, 06:47 PM
House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started
I'll have 48 hours to post my verse, i will drop first since you are higher than me on tha ladder
Good Lucc to you!
you have 24hours to drop after mine is dropped
sikwitit
07-16-2006, 07:24 PM
Thanks, you too brutha!
Vega/Set
07-16-2006, 07:57 PM
This ni66a lost to me last battle...... now he's sweatin as he peeps this//
sikwitit shoodnt even show his flow he shood b like victoria n keep it a secret//
Cuz against me sik's like shaq wit punchlines, even wen givin a free throw//
think of me as johnny knoxville, i dont feel wut u givin,
.................................................. ..........so that makes u tha title show//
sikwitit beat me wit tha flow? shiiittt only wen he stops wettin his bed//
your rhymes only deep once i take em down to earth and you layin dead//
prayin instead is wut you shood b doin like monks lookin to score//
sayin u beat me is misinterpreted by others but i kno whose really tha whore//
gettin raped everytime u battle me so what tha fucc is this ni66a good for//
i woondt ever carry your lines, so to make this a brief case, your now jus ignored//
you shood b glad i dropped first now u can see real talent without diggin into your purse//
you a hitman? i guess so if u think your wacc lyrics assassinates us of seein a decent verse//
you cant stay up wit me like u a scuba man wit cement on his feet//
sik like mini me wen he tries to punch ouija, he jus outta his reach//
about to teach you tha school of hard knoccs since u think u can rhyme//
hit u in tha head wit my jar of cents so i can jus change your mind//
after this battle you'll be at a loss of words soundin like deaf mutes//
but at least they spit more sik shit than sum1 who takes it 2 tha head like salutes//
sikwitit
07-16-2006, 10:38 PM
I’m at the top of this, 1117 and countin/<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
The only place you been on top at is “<?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:PlaceName w:st="on">Brokeback</st1:PlaceName> <st1:PlaceType w:st="on">Mountain</st1:PlaceType></st1:place>”/<o:p></o:p>
I'm flowin like fountains, annihilatin’ hoes by the thousands/<o:p></o:p>
You try to get up in my flow but you keep on drownin/<o:p></o:p>
Countin on killin you, a villain like my name’s Lex Luther/<o:p></o:p>
Another “Scar” for you nigga, be lookin like Fred Kruger/<o:p></o:p>
Do it to ya wit punches blastin like shots from the ruger/ <o:p></o:p>
By the time I’m through wit ya you’ll prolly beg me to shoot ya/<o:p></o:p>
And what’s ya name- Is it Two Face, Vega, or Ouija/<o:p></o:p>
Nigga got 3 personalities and they all wanna be me/<o:p></o:p>
None of ‘em can see me like Stevie, nigga ya better believe me/<o:p></o:p>
Splatter all 3 to where they have to scrape ‘em up wit a squeegee/<o:p></o:p>
Battle me, you ain’t ready like a premature baby/<o:p></o:p>
Might be a Mod now but ya lookin more like the First Lady/<o:p></o:p>
I think I’ll call you SHADY cuz ya chance of winnin is SLIM/<o:p></o:p>
“Wit no PROOF” of ya last win, lets see you do it again/
Haha. Nice drop brutha! Let's get some votes!
Good luck!<o:p></o:p>
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Vega/Set
07-17-2006, 06:48 AM
LOL..nice verse, uppin for sum votes
sikwitit
07-17-2006, 08:56 AM
LOL..nice verse, uppin for sum votes
Same to you brutha, nice job! I think some people may not be so quick to vote now because they don't wanna have to break the battle down. It takes too much time for some people. We'll see!
LET'S GET SOME VOTES PLEEEEASE:thumbup:
Vega/Set
07-17-2006, 09:18 AM
yea i was thinkin that 2...but idk....if people are gonna b that lazy about votin then i jus dont kno nemore
aLiAs R.I.P.08
07-17-2006, 10:27 AM
2 Face
This ni66a lost to me last battle...... now he's sweatin as he peeps this//
sikwitit shoodnt even show his flow he shood b like victoria n keep it a secret//
1/2 - i like you gettin personal, but u didnt create a punch from that, and the other punch was kind of a played concept
Cuz against me sik's like shaq wit punchlines, even wen givin a free throw//
think of me as johnny knoxville, i dont feel wut u givin,
.................................................. ..........so that makes u tha title show//
1/2 - basic punches, not strong enough to actually get the 2nd point, you have to set it up better
sikwitit beat me wit tha flow? shiiittt only wen he stops wettin his bed//
your rhymes only deep once i take em down to earth and you layin dead//
2/2 - not my cup of tea, but you did deliver the punches well, so u deserve that
prayin instead is wut you shood b doin like monks lookin to score//
sayin u beat me is misinterpreted by others but i kno whose really tha whore//
1/2 - the first line had humor, and i laughed, poor monks, lol, but the second wasnt really punch worthy, shoulda created sumtin out of the first
gettin raped everytime u battle me so what tha fucc is this ni66a good for//
i woondt ever carry your lines, so to make this a brief case, your now jus ignored//
1/2 - first shoulda have more depth to it to associate with the next line a,d deliver the punch, i liked the concept of the second line, but you shoulda took out the "now jus" and put like "you'll be" to balance the flow
you shood b glad i dropped first now u can see real talent without diggin into your purse//
you a hitman? i guess so if u think your wacc lyrics assassinates us of seein a decent verse//
2/2 - rofl, both lines were hot, i'll giv u dat
you cant stay up wit me like u a scuba man wit cement on his feet//
sik like mini me wen he tries to punch ouija, he jus outta his reach//
1/2 - the concepts were good, i was feelin dat, but u lacked creativity to actually make the punches effective
about to teach you tha school of hard knoccs since u think u can rhyme//
hit u in tha head wit my jar of cents so i can jus change your mind//
1/2 - again, concepts were good, although the second was a bit played, and you shoulda fed off the concept to create sumthin that would hit either personal or just hard
after this battle you'll be at a loss of words soundin like deaf mutes//
but at least they spit more sik shit than sum1 who takes it 2 tha head like salutes//
2/2 - i was feelin the closer, i was about to take out a point for wrong info sayin he sounds like mutes, ya kno, lol, but i liked both lines overall
12/18 = 2/3 = 66%
Sik
I’m at the top of this, 1117 and countin/<o:p></o:p>
The only place you been on top at is “<st1:place w:st="on"><st1:placename w:st="on">Brokeback</st1:placename> <st1:placetype w:st="on">Mountain</st1:placetype></st1:place>”/
1/2 - first line shoulda been better, but the punch was funny<o:p></o:p>
I'm flowin like fountains, annihilatin’ hoes by the thousands/<o:p></o:p>
You try to get up in my flow but you keep on drownin/
2/2 - nice setup, wit the first you prepared a similie to be used as a punch in the second line<o:p></o:p>
Countin on killin you, a villain like my name’s Lex Luther/<o:p></o:p>
Another “Scar” for you nigga, be lookin like Fred Kruger/
1/2 - eeh, punches werent complex enough for me to give ya a two, attempt got a point<o:p></o:p>
Do it to ya wit punches blastin like shots from the ruger/ <o:p></o:p>
By the time I’m through wit ya you’ll prolly beg me to shoot ya/
1/2 - future calls mixed with a punch, nice shit, i liked that, but not strong enough<o:p></o:p>
And what’s ya name- Is it Two Face, Vega, or Ouija/<o:p></o:p>
Nigga got 3 personalities and they all wanna be me/
2/2 - gettin personal, nice shit, and the punch was funny IMO, that got points<o:p></o:p>
None of ‘em can see me like Stevie, nigga ya better believe me/<o:p></o:p>
Splatter all 3 to where they have to scrape ‘em up wit a squeegee/
1/2 - first line was a filler, second line was alright, coulda been more creative<o:p></o:p>
Battle me, you ain’t ready like a premature baby/<o:p></o:p>
Might be a Mod now but ya lookin more like the First Lady/
2/2 - lmao, again, personals give a higher probabilty of winnin, and mixing it wit a punch full of humor, the strength is much stronger<o:p></o:p>
I think I’ll call you SHADY cuz ya chance of winnin is SLIM/<o:p></o:p>
“Wit no PROOF” of ya last win, lets see you do it again/
1/2 - played concept with the last line, attempt at the punch gets the point, but not a good closer IMO
11/16 = 68%
Vote - Sikwitit
***great fuckin battle guys, by my breakdown, the percentage was too close to call, but sikwitit managed to get my vote by 2%, and review my breakdown, because this will help you, using personals will give you a better chance of winnin cause those are the punches that really hit, along with creative punches, can't stress that enough, you got to get more creative with the punchlines, that will also up ur chances of victory, setups, flow, those are important as well, don't get lazy on that either, but overall, great battle both of you
~Longway~JNC Records
07-17-2006, 10:55 AM
2 Face
This ni66a lost to me last battle...... now he's sweatin as he peeps this//
sikwitit shoodnt even show his flow he shood b like victoria n keep it a secret//
2/2 - I loved the opener Victoria n keep it a secret -- NICE
Cuz against me sik's like shaq wit punchlines, even wen givin a free throw//
think of me as johnny knoxville, i dont feel wut u givin,
.................................................. ..........so that makes u tha title show//
1/2 - Did not really blow me away -- could have been way stronger
sikwitit beat me wit tha flow? shiiittt only wen he stops wettin his bed//
your rhymes only deep once i take em down to earth and you layin dead//
2/2 - Strong Punch m8 -- I like it
prayin instead is wut you shood b doin like monks lookin to score//
sayin u beat me is misinterpreted by others but i kno whose really tha whore//
1/2 - I am not really feeling this bar-- first like was tight though so gave you 1 point
gettin raped everytime u battle me so what tha fucc is this ni66a good for//
i woondt ever carry your lines, so to make this a brief case, your now jus ignored//
1/2 - I did not feel this bar -- i have no explaination just did not fit in with the verse
you shood b glad i dropped first now u can see real talent without diggin into your purse//
you a hitman? i guess so if u think your wacc lyrics assassinates us of seein a decent verse//
2/2 - I loved it
you cant stay up wit me like u a scuba man wit cement on his feet//
sik like mini me wen he tries to punch ouija, he jus outta his reach//
2/2 - I respectfully disagree with Alias -- Im feeling this bar
about to teach you tha school of hard knoccs since u think u can rhyme//
hit u in tha head wit my jar of cents so i can jus change your mind//
1/2 - it was quiet filler but still did not diminish the verse
after this battle you'll be at a loss of words soundin like deaf mutes//
but at least they spit more sik shit than sum1 who takes it 2 tha head like salutes//
2/2 -
14/18 = 78%
Sik
I’m at the top of this, 1117 and countin/<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
The only place you been on top at is “<?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:placename w:st="on">Brokeback</st1:placename> <st1:placetype w:st="on">Mountain</st1:placetype></st1:place>”/
2/2 - Punch was funny as hell -- although truely a 1/2 I decided to give 2/2 because my gut hurts from laughing-- you owe me a shirt though i spilled coke all over mine
I'm flowin like fountains, annihilatin’ hoes by the thousands/<o:p></o:p>
You try to get up in my flow but you keep on drownin/
2/2 - This bar is strong -- I would like to hear you record cause your verse flow so well
Countin on killin you, a villain like my name’s Lex Luther/<o:p></o:p>
Another “Scar” for you nigga, be lookin like Fred Kruger/
1/2 - it was Blah-- not a filler but a lil blah -- you feel me im sure
Do it to ya wit punches blastin like shots from the ruger/ <o:p></o:p>
By the time I’m through wit ya you’ll prolly beg me to shoot ya/
1/2 - You came tight I liked the punch and concept
And what’s ya name- Is it Two Face, Vega, or Ouija/<o:p></o:p>
Nigga got 3 personalities and they all wanna be me/
2/2 - I LOVED IT -- great punch
None of ‘em can see me like Stevie, nigga ya better believe me/<o:p></o:p>
Splatter all 3 to where they have to scrape ‘em up wit a squeegee/
1/2 - you could have knocked him out after that bar but you let off
Battle me, you ain’t ready like a premature baby/<o:p></o:p>
Might be a Mod now but ya lookin more like the First Lady/
2/2 - Man if you would have came stronger in the middle this battle would have been done
I think I’ll call you SHADY cuz ya chance of winnin is SLIM/<o:p></o:p>
“Wit no PROOF” of ya last win, lets see you do it again/
1/2 - I am in between with this punch-- I think it is very strong but not a closing bar
12/16 = 75%
Vote - Two Face
Man I had this one close-- Both of deserve to win this one
aLiAs R.I.P.08
07-17-2006, 10:58 AM
^^^nice, close percentages also, this is a must see
krayz1e b1zzy
07-17-2006, 10:59 AM
Same to you brutha, nice job! I think some people may not be so quick to vote now because they don't wanna have to break the battle down. It takes too much time for some people. We'll see!
LET'S GET SOME VOTES PLEEEEASE:thumbup: not for me its just that it was a good battle ....too good of a battle i gotta sit down and analize the shit
~Longway~JNC Records
07-17-2006, 11:07 AM
I can only speak for myself -- I saw it last night and was like damn both of these guys should win and I did not want to take it away from anyone so I said let me look at it with fresh eyes tomorrow and give my point of view. For sure I was not lazy but just wanted to have a clear mind and all.
sikwitit
07-17-2006, 11:57 AM
Definately appreciate you all taking your time with voting. That's what all the battlers deserve out here, so much luv and respect for that.
Let's keep 'em coming
Sal- What size shirt you wear, haha:-) I have about 25 trakcs recorded so if you wanna here some, here's a link http://sikwitit.dmusic.com/ (http://sikwitit.dmusic.com/)That's an awesome compliment too, thanks for that!
Check out "Say Dat Shit" and "Hard Tymez"... they are 2 of my favorites! Le me know what you think!
Vega/Set
07-17-2006, 12:28 PM
thanks for voting guys, its much appriciated
KEEP THA VOTES COMIN!
~Longway~JNC Records
07-17-2006, 02:16 PM
Ill call it for you vega since you in this battle but I think we have put it out there enough what is expected to qualify as a "Sanctioned vote" and that does not cut it. I would not like a battle like this decided by a vote like that. Rev you can surely vote again but that does not count. Look at Alias and I for an example if you want to see what a vote should be like.
Thanks,
Sal
Vega/Set
07-17-2006, 02:23 PM
well i mean im str8 wit tha vote thats how rev feels ya'kno but he shood at least go through in detail like tha rest shood u feel me? his been here long enough to kno how to vote and he shood have read that one thread and since im in this battle sal is tha one callin shots on this and he says it dont count until he goes into detail sooo ya
Darkchild
07-18-2006, 01:12 AM
This ni66a lost to me last battle...... now he's sweatin as he peeps this//
sikwitit shoodnt even show his flow he shood b like victoria n keep it a secret//
1/2 Alright for an opener, I like how you make it personal straight away, but the second line just didn’t cut it for me, heard that one before
Cuz against me sik's like shaq wit punchlines, even wen givin a free throw//
think of me as johnny knoxville, i dont feel wut u givin,
.................................................. ..........so that makes u tha title show//
1/2 Once again, I thought it started off decent, but the second line just wasn’t all that great
sikwitit beat me wit tha flow? shiiittt only wen he stops wettin his bed//
your rhymes only deep once i take em down to earth and you layin dead//
1/2 The best that I have heard so far, still I know you got better, but this came off pretty decent
prayin instead is wut you shood b doin like monks lookin to score//
sayin u beat me is misinterpreted by others but i kno whose really tha whore//
1/2 Liked the concept in the first line, but ONCE AGAIN, you failed to finish it off in the second line
gettin raped everytime u battle me so what tha fucc is this ni66a good for//
i woondt ever carry your lines, so to make this a brief case, your now jus ignored//
2/2 I liked the whole ‘brief case’ thing, it was clever. First line wasn’t my cup of tea, but I think it sorta set up the second line, even if the flow wasn’t 100%
you shood b glad i dropped first now u can see real talent without diggin into your purse//
you a hitman? i guess so if u think your wacc lyrics assassinates us of seein a decent verse//
2/2 Haha. Liked it, doesn’t 100% make sense, but I know what you getting at and it hit, well landed
you cant stay up wit me like u a scuba man wit cement on his feet//
sik like mini me wen he tries to punch ouija, he jus outta his reach//
2/2 This bar flows well, kinda simple, but straight to the point. Liked it
about to teach you tha school of hard knoccs since u think u can rhyme//
hit u in tha head wit my jar of cents so i can jus change your mind//
1/2 Too soft
after this battle you'll be at a loss of words soundin like deaf mutes//
but at least they spit more sik shit than sum1 who takes it 2 tha head like salutes//
2/2 Like it, BUT YOU’RE A CUNT FOR MAKING FUN OF DEAF MUTES :wink: they do sound weird tho aye, lol<o:p></o:p>
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13/18 = 72%<o:p></o:p>
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I’m at the top of this, 1117 and countin/
<u1:p></u1:p>The only place you been on top at is “<st1:place u2:st="on"><st1:placename u2:st="on"></st1:placename></st1:place><st1:place><st1:PlaceName>Brokeback</st1:PlaceName></st1:place> <st1:placetype u2:st="on"></st1:placetype><st1:PlaceType>Mountain</st1:PlaceType>”/<o:p></o:p>
<u1:p></u1:p> 2/2 Like it, bringin the ladder into play + that punch was great, lol
I'm flowin like fountains, annihilatin’ hoes by the thousands/
<u1:p></u1:p>You try to get up in my flow but you keep on drownin/<o:p></o:p>
<u1:p></u1:p> 2/2 Yup, yup flows well, nice wordplay
Countin on killin you, a villain like my name’s Lex Luther/
<u1:p></u1:p>Another “Scar” for you nigga, be lookin like Fred Kruger/<o:p></o:p>
<u1:p></u1:p> 1/2 Ehhhh, not great, but not bad
Do it to ya wit punches blastin like shots from the ruger/
<u1:p></u1:p>By the time I’m through wit ya you’ll prolly beg me to shoot ya/<o:p></o:p>
<u1:p></u1:p> 1/2 Flow is great, but I want more PERSONAL SHEEEEEIT
And what’s ya name- Is it Two Face, Vega, or Ouija/
<u1:p></u1:p>Nigga got 3 personalities and they all wanna be me/<o:p></o:p>
<u1:p></u1:p> 2/2 Fuck yeah, that’s what I’m talking about. I swear I wrote my last comment before I read these 2 lines, fucking psychic bastard
None of ‘em can see me like Stevie, nigga ya better believe me/
<u1:p></u1:p>Splatter all 3 to where they have to scrape ‘em up wit a squeegee/<o:p></o:p>
<u1:p></u1:p> 1/2 First one is kinda played, flow was still good. Failed to leave an impact on me though
Battle me, you ain’t ready like a premature baby/
<u1:p></u1:p>Might be a Mod now but ya lookin more like the First Lady/<o:p></o:p>
<u1:p></u1:p> 2/2 Liking the setup to this, nice concept and the personal, lmao. Nice one
I think I’ll call you SHADY cuz ya chance of winnin is SLIM/
<u1:p></u1:p>“Wit no PROOF” of ya last win, lets see you do it again/<o:p></o:p>
1/2 First bar was decent, second was alright. Was expecting you to shut it out here tho, and you didn’t<o:p></o:p>
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12/16 = 75%<o:p></o:p>
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Vote: Sikwitit<o:p></o:p>
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Nice battle both of ya’ll tho <o:p></o:p>
sikwitit
07-18-2006, 08:23 AM
Thanks for vote Pringz!
Lets keep 'em comin yall. Thanks!
AppletonDon
07-18-2006, 09:30 AM
i vote for sickwit it even though yall were both solid i didnt really see any punchlines that impressed me
for 2face- his flow should be like victoria and kept a secret
- hit u in the head with a jar of cents to change your mind
Sikwitit-the only place you on top is at brokeback mountain
-nigga got 3 personalities and they all want to be me
-I think I’ll call you SHADY cuz ya chance of winnin is SLIM/<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
“Wit no PROOF” of ya last win, lets see you do it again
the last 2 bars put sickwitit over the edge with the wordplay.
Syxx_Ten
07-18-2006, 01:18 PM
this was a good battle i like sik's verse he had good punches and better flow face came off but i think sik had better material so my vote is for sik
~Longway~JNC Records
07-18-2006, 01:22 PM
this was a good battle i like sik's verse he had good punches and better flow face came off but i think sik had better material so my vote is for sik
where you been at bro?
look up the new way we voting -- this will count of course but we are trying to put more effort into the votes
With this though its official
Sik gets the win over Two Face
sikwitit
07-18-2006, 01:32 PM
this was a good battle i like sik's verse he had good punches and better flow face came off but i think sik had better material so my vote is for sik
Thanks for the vote Syxx! I appreciate it... I didn't think this one was ever gonna be over.:thumbup:
Vega/Set
07-18-2006, 02:39 PM
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