Winner---------Appletondon vs Riotz----------Scarr

[riotz]

you go first

[AppletonDon]

aight kool

[AppletonDon]

Riotz u a bitch every line has you decreasin in the ranks/
gimme my next mc i got a hunger for more but dont call me banks/
how u gon call me out to battle then ur sig reading u offline/
new u wasnt ready for da don and changed ur mind/
if I was to let the shots fire they would be the caliber of nine/
When it comes to the tools niggas call me home depot/
Im on point with the shots call my gat free throw/
Kentucky ass nigga fry yo ass like the kernels chicken/(dude from kentucky for yall not in the know)
Ill send 3 to each side of yo chest like scottie pippen/
Riotz u jus like the spelling of your name u not real/
So monkey ass nigga do like a bannana and peel/
I treat u like my condoms bust on u and then dispose/
My lyrics is like the white stuff fiends love to put up they nose/
After battling me niggas will forget about you like they did canibus/
after going against me youll be asking yourself Can-I-Bus?/
Man im just getting started runnin thru RIOTZ like im lookin for rodney king/
Mayne im thru with this bitch sorry kid it was just a 1 time fling/

[AppletonDon]

check me out nigga

[riotz]

u might think u won but get that smirk of your face/
u tryin to rap is a complete disgrace/
i already kno im gonna be the winner/
u aint nothin but a pussy ass beginner/
im on my way to being the #1 contender/
and in the end u still just a pretender/
i challenged u hear wat u got/
were all gonna realize my lyrics are to hot/
u say my name is wack but im the real don/
when im done ur crew is gonna be fond/
so fuck u and the very few/
who aint down or pretend that they true/
causing more drama then the bad weed blues/
leave ur ass dead on the evening news/
ima hit u harder then a blunt rolled tight/
its the end of the fight so trick say goodnight/

[riotz]

need some votes ppl

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

my vote goes to appletondon because he had more creativity and pretty much a better verse, keep elevatin guys

[Vega/Set]

^agreed

[sikwitit]

Sorry Riotz but your verse is still a bit elementary for me. There's nothing wrong with a verse being simple but you gotta make them punchlines hurt with a good set up and a nasty ass punchline.

My vote is going to the Don simply because his flow was better and punchlines were way harder!

"Ill send 3 to each side of yo chest like scottie pippen"

Was this second line here a reference to Philip Banks (Uncle Phil, Fresh Prince)? If so, that's fuckin halarious, haha!

"Riotz u a bitch every line has you decreasin in the ranks/
gimme my next mc i got a hunger for more but dont call me banks/"

My vote- The Don

[AppletonDon]

actually it was a reference lloyd banks his first album was called hunger for more

[sikwitit]

actually it was a reference lloyd banks his first album was called hunger for more

lol... oh yeah! Well that makes the punchline waaaay tighter but the Fresh Prince reference would've been funny as hell, haha! Good job pimp!

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

it actually woulda been, lol

/writes it down

VOTE YOU PANSEYS!!!

[WAR CHIEF]

Vote=Appleton don

There was more going on line for line, in regards to wordplay and punches.

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Vote=Appleton don

There was more going on line for line, in regards to wordplay and punches.



:nod:

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

than riotz has been scarred, put that sal, or i shall beat you, :)

[AppletonDon]

has a winner been declared yet.

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Dont know about Two Face but I do not monitor these battles because they are not in the ladder so its up to you guys to decide who wins and lost

[Vega/Set]

i will help monitor these battles to help ya'll ni66as out....but this doesnt count as apart of tha ladder matches, this is jus a regular old battle....so ya appletondon won...

[~Longway~JNC Records]

please no more pms asking me to moderate your battles. You guys set up rules when the battle starts -- YOU SHOULD KNOW who wins and who loses you do not need a moderator to come in and tell you. Sorry to be rude dawg I dont mean to come across like that but understand I just got like 12 pms in the last 20 min

[Vega/Set]

u talkin to me?

[~Longway~JNC Records]

no appleton -- I love your pms :)

[Vega/Set]

:gay:your so sweet

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

kool, appletondon wins, official call by me :)

vega, do that nice "~~~~~~~~Scar" thing now :thumbup:

[AppletonDon]

ok my fault how do i get on the ladder

[~Longway~JNC Records]

yea im waiting for pringles to get you all set up

[AppletonDon]

aight good lookin out