Winner -- Matty Bone -- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Scar Revolutionary

[Vega/Set]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started



Matty Bone you are lower on the list then Rev. so you must go first

You have 48 hours to post -- good luck to you both
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[Matty_Bone]

Rev betta run when he come up against me//
his shit so bad someone lock him up in a penitentiary//
i come rollin in using Guerilla warefare//
im the real revolutionary you just a copycat from nowhere//
i'll burn your flag and spit on your grave//
no one will care cos you the one who got played//
your just like bush, everyone laughs in your face//
as you stumble your words, hey try using verbs//
or i'll stop typing now cos i know i won wit this verse//
i can already see what the fuck your gonna say//
your just like everyone else when the come up in my face//
"havent i beat you like 5 or 6 times"//
heres an ideatry something else that rhymes//
i battled you cos i felt sorry, that no one else wanted to battle this fake Irv Gotti//
come on nigga what you got for me//
im 6'4" you must be 2'3"//
cos everytime you battle, your verses come up shorter than mini me//
now sit down and think hard about what you gotta say//
cos theres rumours on the board sayin that Revs gay..

Aiiight im done.
Your turn Rev.
(nothin meant by the gay thang mayne)

[Revolutionary]

ok matty more pussy than a cats vagina/
and u always get raped in battles, u giv up ur pussy to tha kat behind ya/
dont come at me wit played punchlines/
my skill is big time, and u unsinged/
u mc only to ya self/
but u fuckin wit revolutionary see, thas bad for ya health/
my rhymes will give u a heart attack/
fuck wit me and u get smoked harder than crack/
my rhymes sick, like they got aids/
matty could relate cuz he leads the gay parade/(gay ppl have aids a lot)
3-0 K.O thas my prediction/
cuz niggaz love my raps like they got an addiction/
my rhymes is reality n urs is fiction/
so call my shit "True life"/(reality show)
i kill niggas wit my rhymes like i use a knife/
this shits over now, n ya kno i abused ya rite?

[~Longway~JNC Records]

before this battle gets any votes you two need to go vote on the pringle/Alias battle. Tks

[sikwitit]

Ayo, I got my vote all broken down but Matty, you need to go vote on the Pringle-Alias battle. C'mon dawg!

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Accepting votes now :)

[sikwitit]

Matty Bone-<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
Rev betta run when he come up against me//
his shit so bad someone lock him up in a penitentiary//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Both the setup and the punchline were weak, especially for an opener.
i come rollin in using Guerilla warefare//
im the real revolutionary you just a copycat from nowhere//
1/2- Again, pretty weak but I like that you tried to be personal.<o:p></o:p>
i'll burn your flag and spit on your grave//
no one will care cos you the one who got played//
1/2- Sorry, dude. I’ll give ya a point for attempting but you gotta come harder than this for 2.<o:p></o:p>
your just like bush, everyone laughs in your face//
as you stumble your words, hey try using verbs//
or i'll stop typing now cos i know i won wit this verse//
1/2- Not bad, I’ll give ya a point cause I laugh at bush tooJ<o:p></o:p>
i can already see what the fuck your gonna say//
your just like everyone else when the come up in my face//
1/2- need to be more creative man.<o:p></o:p>
"havent i beat you like 5 or 6 times"//
heres an idea try something else that rhymes//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- One point for trying.
i battled you cos i felt sorry, that no one else wanted to battle this fake Irv Gotti//
come on nigga what you got for me//
1/2- see last comment…<o:p></o:p>
im 6'4" you must be 2'3"//
cos everytime you battle, your verses come up shorter than mini me//
2/2- There you go fucker, that was your best line…good humor!<o:p></o:p>
now sit down and think hard about what you gotta say//
cos theres rumours on the board sayin that Revs gay..<o:p></o:p>
1/1- You have one line too many so I can only score you for one.<o:p></o:p>
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10/18= 55.5%<o:p></o:p>
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Rev-<o:p></o:p>
ok matty more pussy than a cats vagina/
and u always get raped in battles, u giv up <?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">ur</st1:City></st1:place> pussy to tha kat behind ya/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Not a very strong opener
dont come at me wit played punchlines/
my skill is big time, and u unsinged/
1/2- I think you can come hard than this man. Neither bar was very strong.<o:p></o:p>
u mc only to ya self/
but u fuckin wit revolutionary see, thas bad for ya health/
1/2- too basic for me.<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes will give u a heart attack/
fuck wit me and u get smoked harder than crack/
2/2- lacks personal direction but it’s more creative and stronger than the others<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes sick, like they got aids/
matty could relate cuz he leads the gay parade/(gay ppl have aids a lot)
2/2- Not sure if it flowed but it was personal and pretty funny.<o:p></o:p>
3-0 K.O thas my prediction/
cuz niggaz love my raps like they got an addiction/
1/2- The punchline was all about you and not Matty. If you switched ‘em around I may have given ya 2.<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes is reality n urs is fiction/
so call my shit "True life"/(reality show)
1/2 – No real punchline here. Seem more like you are setting up for the next two lines.<o:p></o:p>
i kill niggas wit my rhymes like i use a knife/
this shits over now, n ya kno i abused ya rite?<o:p></o:p>
<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->1/2- weak finisher, ya gotta finish strong mayn!<o:p></o:p>
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10/16= 62.5%<o:p></o:p>
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VOTE- REV<o:p></o:p>
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I think that both of yall need to work on you punches a lot. I didn’t really see any personals, word play, or even humor. At some point, both of yalls flow was a little off too. I think you guys should take more time with you verse as well. And not to belittle you but maybe yall should look at some of the other cats on here and how they use word play and personals. That’s what it’s gonna take to win. Keep battlin and ya shit will get better, no doubt!<o:p></o:p>

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

M-Dogg<o:p></o:p>
Rev betta run when he come up against me//
his shit so bad someone lock him up in a penitentiary//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- weak setup and punch, no creativity in it
i come rollin in using Guerilla warefare//
im the real revolutionary you just a copycat from nowhere//
1/2- nameplay/personal attempt got the point, but again, weak setup<o:p></o:p>
i'll burn your flag and spit on your grave//
no one will care cos you the one who got played//<o:p></o:p>
your just like bush, everyone laughs in your face//
1/3- nuttin i would call a punch, i call dat a filler for the first 2 lines, the 3rd was weak, but there was an attempt
as you stumble your words, hey try using verbs//
or i'll stop typing now cos i know i won wit this verse//
1/2- the concept had potential, that's wat got da point, but the wording and setup was bad<o:p></o:p>
i can already see what the fuck your gonna say//
your just like everyone else when the come up in my face//
0/2- filler and a half<o:p></o:p>
"havent i beat you like 5 or 6 times"//
heres an idea try something else that rhymes//<o:p></o:p>
0/2- no, no punch there, filler
i battled you cos i felt sorry, that no one else wanted to battle this fake Irv Gotti//
come on nigga what you got for me//
0/2- sounds like ur not tryin on this one, ur losin points because ur not attempting creative punches<o:p></o:p>
im 6'4" you must be 2'3"//
cos everytime you battle, your verses come up shorter than mini me//
2/2- giv ya 2 points because of line connections and humor<o:p></o:p>
now sit down and think hard about what you gotta say//
cos theres rumours on the board sayin that Revs gay..<o:p></o:p>
1/2- not a good closer, the 2nd line was just too simple<o:p></o:p>
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7/18 = 38%<o:p></o:p>
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Rev-<o:p></o:p>
ok matty more pussy than a cats vagina/
and u always get raped in battles, u giv up <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:city w:st="on">ur</st1:city></st1:place> pussy to tha kat behind ya/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- i like the concept, the wordplay is nice, but the setup hurt the punch's effect
dont come at me wit played punchlines/
my skill is big time, and u unsinged/
0/2- i dunt see a punch here, weak lines that seem made as fillers<o:p></o:p>
u mc only to ya self/
but u fuckin wit revolutionary see, thas bad for ya health/
0/2- weak setup, flow is sloppy, by far the worst line u came up wit, wats going on?<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes will give u a heart attack/
fuck wit me and u get smoked harder than crack/
1/2- attempt got the point, but the simplicity hurt the whole thing<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes sick, like they got aids/
matty could relate cuz he leads the gay parade/(gay ppl have aids a lot)
1/2- humor got the point, but u need to set these up better<o:p></o:p>
3-0 K.O thas my prediction/
cuz niggaz love my raps like they got an addiction/
0/2- i give no points if there is self praisin, automatic 0<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes is reality n urs is fiction/
so call my shit "True life"/(reality show)
1/2 – "No real punchline here. Seem more like you are setting up for the next two lines." - sikwitit<o:p></o:p>
i kill niggas wit my rhymes like i use a knife/
this shits over now, n ya kno i abused ya rite?<o:p></o:p>
<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->1/2- weak closer, nuttin strong about it, step it up<o:p></o:p>
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5/16= 31%<o:p></o:p>
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Vote Matty Bone

***this is by far both of ur worst battles, i dunno wat happened to u guys, i have seen MUCH better, i mean MUCH better from both of you, it seemed like you guys werent even trying, the punches were forced and simplistic and the setups were horrendous, don't mean to sound cruel but i hope this gives both of you sum motivation if ur plannin on reachin the top, i hope u guys arent slackin, foreal, keep elevating

[Vega/Set]

Matty Bone-<o:p></o:p>
Rev betta run when he come up against me//
his shit so bad someone lock him up in a penitentiary//<o:p></o:p>
1/2
i come rollin in using Guerilla warefare//
im the real revolutionary you just a copycat from nowhere//
1/2- dont hype ya'self aim for your opponet<o:p></o:p>
i'll burn your flag and spit on your grave//
no one will care cos you the one who got played//
1/2- eh<o:p></o:p>
your just like bush, everyone laughs in your face//
as you stumble your words, hey try using verbs//
or i'll stop typing now cos i know i won wit this verse//
1/2- Not bad<o:p></o:p>
i can already see what the fuck your gonna say//
your just like everyone else when the come up in my face//
0/2- filler<o:p></o:p>
"havent i beat you like 5 or 6 times"//
heres an idea try something else that rhymes//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- One point for trying.
i battled you cos i felt sorry, that no one else wanted to battle this fake Irv Gotti//
come on nigga what you got for me//
1/2- see last comment…<o:p></o:p>
im 6'4" you must be 2'3"//
cos everytime you battle, your verses come up shorter than mini me//
2/2- best line u had<o:p></o:p>
now sit down and think hard about what you gotta say//
cos theres rumours on the board sayin that Revs gay..<o:p></o:p>
1/1- cooda been better<o:p></o:p>
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9/18= 50%<o:p></o:p>
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Rev-<o:p></o:p>
ok matty more pussy than a cats vagina/
and u always get raped in battles, u giv up <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:city w:st="on">ur</st1:city></st1:place> pussy to tha kat behind ya/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Not a very strong opener
dont come at me wit played punchlines/
my skill is big time, and u unsinged/
1/2- not strong at all<o:p></o:p>
u mc only to ya self/
but u fuckin wit revolutionary see, thas bad for ya health/
1/2- too basic and kinda a self hype<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes will give u a heart attack/
fuck wit me and u get smoked harder than crack/
1/2- again self hype aim at ya opponet homie<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes sick, like they got aids/
matty could relate cuz he leads the gay parade/(gay ppl have aids a lot)
1/2- played line so 1 point for "Trying" to b personal.<o:p></o:p>
3-0 K.O thas my prediction/
cuz niggaz love my raps like they got an addiction/
1/2- self hype again!<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes is reality n urs is fiction/
so call my shit "True life"/(reality show)
1/2 – see last thang i said<o:p></o:p>
i kill niggas wit my rhymes like i use a knife/
this shits over now, n ya kno i abused ya rite?<o:p></o:p>
<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->1/2- weak<o:p></o:p>
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8/16= 50%




Well since my percentages got u both tied im gonna picc on my own...both were real weak...u guys dont need not to rush into these raps u need to take time n perfect this shit..u got 48 hours use em wisely....since rev basically self-hyped his whole verse im gonna give it to matty bone for less self-hypes and a tit more of attempted punches

--Stay strong and keep battle'n, cuz u guys will elevate wit experince:thumbup:

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

lmao at "a TIT more of attempted punches"

i found dat funny

2-1 Matty

[Vega/Set]

ya i say that alot...LOL.......keep on voting ppl....u2 Mr.Salvatore

[Syxx_Ten]

both of ya'll came kinda weak wit da punches matty u gotta step it up a notch dawg ive seen u come off way harder then that rev u attempted more punches and ur flow was better and just a lil more creative niether of u seemed like u put much effort into ur verses but i gotta give it to rev

[Revolutionary]

yeah i really didnt, i was playin to my opponents abbilities, BIG mistake, wont do it again
no offense matty

[keeburna]

i think both you guys were even throughout the whole battle, i've seen better from both of you but in this i guess i go with rev due to the fact that i enjoyed his flow a little bit more, mattys punches just seemed to plain to me.

vote=rev

[WAR CHIEF]

Vote = Matty Bone

It could of went either way, I would of siad Rev killed it with shorter lines, but Revoulitionary's verse fell off half way through, while Matty stayed consistent with his flows.

[krayz1e b1zzy]

[quote=aLiAs R.I.P.08]<o:p></o:p>
Rev betta run when he come up against me//
his shit so bad someone lock him up in a penitentiary//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- i liked the rev better run part...the 2nd line slacked
i come rollin in using Guerilla warefare//
im the real revolutionary you just a copycat from nowhere//
1/2- ok punch<o:p></o:p>
i'll burn your flag and spit on your grave//
no one will care cos you the one who got played//<o:p></o:p>
your just like bush, everyone laughs in your face//
1/3- i call dat a filler for the first 2 lines, the 3rd was weak, but there was an attempt( agreed)
as you stumble your words, hey try using verbs//
or i'll stop typing now cos i know i won wit this verse//
1/2- the concept had potential, that's wat got da point, but the wording and setup was bad<o:p></o:p>
i can already see what the fuck your gonna say//
your just like everyone else when the come up in my face//
0/2- filler and a half( agreed)
"havent i beat you like 5 or 6 times"//
heres an idea try something else that rhymes//<o:p></o:p>
0/2- no, no punch there, filler( agreed)
i battled you cos i felt sorry, that no one else wanted to battle this fake Irv Gotti//
come on nigga what you got for me//
0/2- weak<o:p></o:p>
im 6'4" you must be 2'3"//
cos everytime you battle, your verses come up shorter than mini me//
2/2- good effort<o:p></o:p>
now sit down and think hard about what you gotta say//
cos theres rumours on the board sayin that Revs gay..<o:p></o:p>
1/2- not a good closer, the 2nd line was just too simple( agreed) weak
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7/18 = 38%<o:p></o:p>
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Rev-<o:p></o:p>
ok matty more pussy than a cats vagina/
and u always get raped in battles, u giv up <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:city w:st="on">ur</st1:city></st1:place> pussy to tha kat behind ya/<o:p></o:p>
2/2-good punch
dont come at me wit played punchlines/
my skill is big time, and u unsinged/
0/2- i dunt see a punch here, weak lines that seem made as fillers ( agreed)<o:p></o:p>
u mc only to ya self/
but u fuckin wit revolutionary see, thas bad for ya health/
0/2- weak setup, flow is sloppy, by far the worst line u came up wit, wats going on? ( agreed)<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes will give u a heart attack/
fuck wit me and u get smoked harder than crack/
1/2- attempt got the point, but the simplicity hurt the whole thing ( agreed)<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes sick, like they got aids/
matty could relate cuz he leads the gay parade/(gay ppl have aids a lot)
0/2-weak<o:p></o:p>
3-0 K.O thas my prediction/
cuz niggaz love my raps like they got an addiction/
0/2- i give no points if there is self praisin, automatic 0( agreed)<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes is reality n urs is fiction/
so call my shit "True life"/(reality show)
1/2 – "No real punchline here. ." - sikwitit( agreed)<o:p></o:p>
i kill niggas wit my rhymes like i use a knife/
this shits over now, n ya kno i abused ya rite?<o:p></o:p>
<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->1/2- weak closer, nuttin strong about it, step it up( agreed) weak
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5/16= 31%<o:p></o:p>
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Vote Matty Bone:i dont need to say that you guys could do better, becuz alot of ppl said it already...but you both know its in yall from what i read previously

[AppletonDon]

i vote for revolutionary his punchlines were a little bit harder even though he finished off kind of weak

[Darkchild]

Matty:<o:p></o:p>
Rev betta run when he come up against me//
his shit so bad someone lock him up in a penitentiary//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Setup was ok, poor execution, second line was very weak
i come rollin in using Guerilla warefare//
im the real revolutionary you just a copycat from nowhere//
1/2- Ok attempt at getting personal, but nothing behind it<o:p></o:p>
i'll burn your flag and spit on your grave//
no one will care cos you the one who got played//<o:p></o:p>
your just like bush, everyone laughs in your face//
0.5/3- This was all filler, the last line was an attempt at getting personal, but it just didn't hit home for me
as you stumble your words, hey try using verbs//
or i'll stop typing now cos i know i won wit this verse//
1/2- Liked the first line, cuz their was some creativity behind it, but the second lines flow was off, poor execution. Coulda made sumn good outta those 2 lines, but failed.<o:p></o:p>
i can already see what the fuck your gonna say//
your just like everyone else when the come up in my face//
0/2- Nothing<o:p></o:p>
"havent i beat you like 5 or 6 times"//
heres an idea try something else that rhymes//<o:p></o:p>
0/2- Poor
i battled you cos i felt sorry, that no one else wanted to battle this fake Irv Gotti//
come on nigga what you got for me//
0/2- Dude, cmon.. You can do better than that<o:p></o:p>
im 6'4" you must be 2'3"//
cos everytime you battle, your verses come up shorter than mini me//
1/2- That was ok, prolly the best bar of your verse, but the concept it kinda played<o:p></o:p>
now sit down and think hard about what you gotta say//
cos theres rumours on the board sayin that Revs gay..<o:p></o:p>
1/2- I liked the setup, but once again execution was off, should've used a simile or sumn, nice trying to end on a humerous note. I woulda ended wit sumn like 'Like Credit Loan Sharks, this verse is gon' make you pay' sumn along those lines<o:p></o:p>
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5.5/18 = 31%<o:p></o:p>
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Rev:<o:p></o:p>
ok matty more pussy than a cats vagina/
and u always get raped in battles, u giv up <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:city w:st="on">ur</st1:city></st1:place> pussy to tha kat behind ya/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Don't like the setup at all, overall it was an ok punch, not great.
dont come at me wit played punchlines/
my skill is big time, and u unsinged/
0/2- Not feelin it at all <o:p></o:p>
u mc only to ya self/
but u fuckin wit revolutionary see, thas bad for ya health/
0/2- Extremely weak setup, played execution, not good mate.<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes will give u a heart attack/
fuck wit me and u get smoked harder than crack/
1/2- Setup sucked, you pulled it off ok. <o:p></o:p>
my rhymes sick, like they got aids/
matty could relate cuz he leads the gay parade/(gay ppl have aids a lot)
0.5/2- Yeah, it was ok, i know what you tryin to do, but just didn't do it in my eyes. <o:p></o:p>
3-0 K.O thas my prediction/
cuz niggaz love my raps like they got an addiction/
0/2- Filler<o:p></o:p>
my rhymes is reality n urs is fiction/
so call my shit "True life"/(reality show)
0/2 – More filler<o:p></o:p>
i kill niggas wit my rhymes like i use a knife/
this shits over now, n ya kno i abused ya rite?<o:p></o:p>
<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->1/2- Setup was ok, execution was piss poor..<o:p></o:p>
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3.5/16= 22%<o:p></o:p>
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Vote: Matty Bone

Weak battle guys, you both need to step it up. I've seen ALOT better from both of you

[~Longway~JNC Records]

That makes a winner-- but as most have said none of you should feel proud about what you did here. Step your game up


Winner Matty