Winner -- Krayz1e B1zzy --~ ~~~~~~ Scar Appletondon

[Vega/Set]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started



Appletondon you are lower on the list then Krayz1e B1zzy so you must go first

You have 48 hours to post -- good luck to you both








--P.s. before u start battle'n make sure u have at least voted on battles that need to have been voted on.....thank u and good lucc

[AppletonDon]

Times up this bum nigga hit me up for the rematch/
what up wit all these garbage niggas challengin i need a new batch/
went eazy on you the first round cause i know you an ametuer/
took the kindness for weakness so fake MC its time that I Hammer ya/
Claim you from the BX but put the M in the middle and thats how ima ride on u/(BMX)
Yours truly originally from the BX but give it 5 min ill have the whole southside on u/
The .40 cal will have u runnin and DIPpin lookin for yo SET/
Im like a NY KNICK lower record but still get more respect cause u a jersey NET/
better hope i dont get assessed with the Tech cause it wont be no flagrant foul/
shots will stain up yo chest leave u smellin foul/
wishin you was Boning the thugs with krayzie all ova ya sig/
while im bizzy bustin nuts all krayzie all ova ya girls wig/
Yea son you might be ranked a little higher on the battle ladder/
but you just a rung im using on my way to the top of the ladder/
You soft as mash potatoes bust shots in your direction have you leaking gravy/
Aight no more battling lessons for now fuck you pay me/

[Vega/Set]

ok well stop tha votes here bcuz i want sal to see this idk wut he wants to do but imo tha battle shood have another round cuz kray bizz went way over tha limit of bars......read my first post at tha top it states how many bars this battle shood b

[~Longway~JNC Records]

I agree -- I will not punish appleton though -- I will delete Kraz1es verse and he can have the opportunity to repost a verse under the that in which the rules say is appropriate.

Appleton does keep his one vote and the voter that gave it to him may vote again after Kray puts down his verse

[Vega/Set]

good enough 4 me

[Darkchild]

How long does krayzie have to post his verse?

[Vega/Set]

sumtime today would be great

[WAR CHIEF]

What I miss?

[AppletonDon]

i appreciate ya letting me keep my vote but i really dont think thats fair because hes getting 2 chances against my 1

[~Longway~JNC Records]

he has 48 hours from the time I posted

[AppletonDon]

aight i guess rules is rules

[krayz1e b1zzy]

ok, i realize that i have to relax at it//
i spazzed at him/ i aint mad at him/but this fag's braggin//
when he knows i got more pumps then a room full of asthmatics//
acting an ass, talkin shit his raps is gassed/ we all passed at it//
i laugh at him , he sucks at mathmatics,how fuk you gonna put a 4 to a 9//
send a boy to do a crime/in due time/ he'll be fiend out puttin straws to my
lines//
my fist'll put it on his teeth/ ill put him on the street//
the only pump he held was the ones he was puttin on his feet//
he's use to runnin shit/so i eliminated his crew that he's use to runnin wit//
he's use duckin shit/made him my prostitue becuz he's use to suckin dick//
everyone thought im a gynocolagist, this pussy thought he was gettin open//
ill play the fence, this immigrant thought he was gettin over//
but nah im a fireman scailing the ladder wit his hoes over my shoulder//
he's like a thorn in my side, imma off this prick /this skywalker has to force his shit//
remember me?, "im your father",hey yall, i taught this bitch//
i spit awesome shit, got mad n99as tellin me im fire like they my boss n shit//
i flipped this out/when put the metal to your teeth i wont miss your mouth/one hit youre out//
mike jones ass ni99a ill even swish -ya- house//

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Thanks M8 we can start votes now


Appleton up currently 1-0

[Vega/Set]

Appletondon~

Times up this bum nigga hit me up for the rematch/
what up wit all these garbage niggas challengin i need a new batch/
1/2 a weak opener plus it wasnt really towards your opponet, more of a slef hype
went eazy on you the first round cause i know you an ametuer/
took the kindness for weakness so fake MC its time that I Hammer ya/
1/2 i like where u were goin with this but it was jus worded wrong
Claim you from the BX but put the M in the middle and thats how ima ride on u/(BMX)
Yours truly originally from the BX but give it 5 min ill have the whole southside on u/
2/2 i gave u 2 jus cause u got personal
The .40 cal will have u runnin and DIPpin lookin for yo SET/
Im like a NY KNICK lower record but still get more respect cause u a jersey NET/
2/2 again worded wrong but i still gave u tha 2 points for knick line
better hope i dont get assessed with the Tech cause it wont be no flagrant foul/
shots will stain up yo chest leave u smellin foul/
1/2 eh average
wishin you was Boning the thugs with krayzie all ova ya sig/
while im bizzy bustin nuts all krayzie all ova ya girls wig/
0/2 the most played line in this section of the board
Yea son you might be ranked a little higher on the battle ladder/
but you just a rung im using on my way to the top of the ladder/
1/2 i gave u tha point cuz u got a lil personal
You soft as mash potatoes bust shots in your direction have you leaking gravy/
Aight no more battling lessons for now fuck you pay me/
1/2 not a strong closer

9/16 = 56%




Krayz1e B1zzy

ok, i realize that i have to relax at it//
i spazzed at him/ i aint mad at him/but this fag's braggin//
1/2 not a strong opener at all but good flow
when he knows i got more pumps then a room full of asthmatics//
acting an ass, talkin shit his raps is gassed/ we all passed at it//
2/2 the first line is good and the second is a lil more than average so i gave u tha 2nd point neway
i laugh at him , he sucks at mathmatics,how fuk you gonna put a 4 to a 9//
send a boy to do a crime/in due time/ he'll be fiend out puttin straws to my
lines//
1/2 eh
my fist'll put it on his teeth/ ill put him on the street//
the only pump he held was the ones he was puttin on his feet//
1/2 first line was "eh" but tha second i liked
he's use to runnin shit/so i eliminated his crew that he's use to runnin wit//
he's use duckin shit/made him my prostitue becuz he's use to suckin dick//
1/2 i wasnt feelin this at all but it flowed well
everyone thought im a gynocolagist, this pussy thought he was gettin open//
ill play the fence, this immigrant thought he was gettin over//
but nah im a fireman scailing the ladder wit his hoes over my shoulder//
3/3 i liked it all
he's like a thorn in my side, imma off this prick /this skywalker has to force his shit//
remember me?, "im your father",hey yall, i taught this bitch//
i spit awesome shit, got mad n99as tellin me im fire like they my boss n shit//
2/3 it was good but u shoodnt of used the second line
i flipped this out/when put the metal to your teeth i wont miss your mouth/one hit youre out//
mike jones ass ni99a ill even swish -ya- house//
1/2 not a strong closer but a good one

12/18 = 66%




Vote= Krayz1e B1zzy

[~Longway~JNC Records]

1-1

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Don

Times up this bum nigga hit me up for the rematch/
what up wit all these garbage niggas challengin i need a new batch/
1/2 - nice personal, but punch wasnt creative
went eazy on you the first round cause i know you an ametuer/
took the kindness for weakness so fake MC its time that I Hammer ya/
2/2 - personal plus punch got the two points, although they were weak
Claim you from the BX but put the M in the middle and thats how ima ride on u/(BMX)
Yours truly originally from the BX but give it 5 min ill have the whole southside on u/
2/2 - creativity and personal
The .40 cal will have u runnin and DIPpin lookin for yo SET/
Im like a NY KNICK lower record but still get more respect cause u a jersey NET/
1/2 - forced punches, but attempts present
better hope i dont get assessed with the Tech cause it wont be no flagrant foul/
shots will stain up yo chest leave u smellin foul/
2/2 - creative concept, metaphor usage and punch attempt
wishin you was Boning the thugs with krayzie all ova ya sig/
while im bizzy bustin nuts all krayzie all ova ya girls wig/
1/2 - punch attempted, played concept resulted in weak punch
Yea son you might be ranked a little higher on the battle ladder/
but you just a rung im using on my way to the top of the ladder/
1/2 - ladder concept played unless done creatively, punch attempt
You soft as mash potatoes bust shots in your direction have you leaking gravy/
Aight no more battling lessons for now fuck you pay me/
1/2 weak closer, punch attempt got the point

11/16 = 68%

BX

ok, i realize that i have to relax at it//
i spazzed at him/ i aint mad at him/but this fag's braggin//
1/2 - flow gets the point, mostly filler
when he knows i got more pumps then a room full of asthmatics//
acting an ass, talkin shit his raps is gassed/ we all passed at it//
2/2 - good setup, creative concept, similie usage, punch attempted i laugh at him , he sucks at mathmatics,how fuk you gonna put a 4 to a 9//
send a boy to do a crime/in due time/ he'll be fiend out puttin straws to my
lines//
1/2 - punch attempt, weak set-up, bad wording
my fist'll put it on his teeth/ ill put him on the street//
the only pump he held was the ones he was puttin on his feet//
1/2 - weak punch attempts, first line weak
he's use to runnin shit/so i eliminated his crew that he's use to runnin wit//
he's use duckin shit/made him my prostitue becuz he's use to suckin dick//
1/2 - punch attempt weak, humor gets the point
everyone thought im a gynocolagist, this pussy thought he was gettin open//
ill play the fence, this immigrant thought he was gettin over//
but nah im a fireman scailing the ladder wit his hoes over my shoulder//
2/3 - creative concepts, first line weak punch, last two good punches
he's like a thorn in my side, imma off this prick /this skywalker has to force his shit//
remember me?, "im your father",hey yall, i taught this bitch//
i spit awesome shit, got mad n99as tellin me im fire like they my boss n shit//
1/3 - first line, creative punch, last two = weak, third line = self-praising
i flipped this out/when put the metal to your teeth i wont miss your mouth/one hit youre out//
mike jones ass ni99a ill even swish -ya- house//
1/2 - weak concepts, weak closer

10/18 = 5/9 = 55%

Vote Appletondon

***good battle guys, both had their ups and downs and both also attacked strong, set-ups is what hurt u both the most, keep it up, overall i enjoyed this battle

[Vega/Set]

2-1 appletondon is up

[Boss_Smoke]

Well, maybe I'm reading something wrong, but Apple's verse didn't seem that great. He had a lot of attempted punches, but they all seemed weak. And he repeated some words in his rhymes. krayz1e's had overall better rhymes, and I believe his punches hit way harder. So that's why he gets my vote.

VOTE : KRAYZ1E BIZZ1E

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[Vega/Set]

2-2

[sikwitit]

AppletonDon-
Times up this bum nigga hit me up for the rematch/
what up wit all these garbage niggas challengin i need a new batch/
1/2 Not a very strong opener man.
went eazy on you the first round cause i know you an ametuer/
took the kindness for weakness so fake MC its time that I Hammer ya/
1/2- Flowed well but didn’t pack a punch.
Claim you from the BX but put the M in the middle and thats how ima ride on u/(BMX)
Yours truly originally from the BX but give it 5 min ill have the whole southside on u/
1/2- Not bad. I did like that you tried to be creative.
The .40 cal will have u runnin and DIPpin lookin for yo SET/
Im like a NY KNICK lower record but still get more respect cause u a jersey NET/
2/2- Your best line yet pimpin. Need more like it… <?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
better hope i dont get assessed with the Tech cause it wont be no flagrant foul/
shots will stain up yo chest leave u smellin foul/
1/2- don’t like that you used the same word to rhyme.
wishin you was Boning the thugs with krayzie all ova ya sig/
while im bizzy bustin nuts all krayzie all ova ya girls wig/
2/2- Haha, I’ma give you two because it made me laugh <o:p></o:p>
Yea son you might be ranked a little higher on the battle ladder/
but you just a rung im using on my way to the top of the ladder/
1/2 again, having the same word at the makes your vocab “seem” weak
You soft as mash potatoes bust shots in your direction have you leaking gravy/
Aight no more battling lessons for now fuck you pay me/
1/2- Need to come harder on both the opener and closer.

10/16 = 62.5%




KB-
ok, i realize that i have to relax at it//
i spazzed at him/ i aint mad at him/but this fag's braggin//
1/2- Not strong enough for an opener.
when he knows i got more pumps then a room full of asthmatics//
acting an ass, talkin shit his raps is gassed/ we all passed at it//
2/2- That’s nice, real nice. Flowed nice, first line was sick and the 2<SUP>nd</SUP> followed it well.
i laugh at him , he sucks at mathmatics,how fuk you gonna put a 4 to a 9//
send a boy to do a crime/in due time/ he'll be fiend out puttin straws to my
lines//
1/2- sorry, not workin for me. Didn’t really make since to me.
my fist'll put it on his teeth/ ill put him on the street//
the only pump he held was the ones he was puttin on his feet//
1/2 – Had potential for 2 points if the first line was better. <o:p></o:p>
he's use to runnin shit/so i eliminated his crew that he's use to runnin wit//
he's use duckin shit/made him my prostitue becuz he's use to suckin dick//
2/2- That was pretty nice and I like the flow…
everyone thought im a gynocolagist, this pussy thought he was gettin open//
ill play the fence, this immigrant thought he was gettin over//
but nah im a fireman scailing the ladder wit his hoes over my shoulder//
3/3 – That was I pretty nice set . Need more lines like this in the future.
he's like a thorn in my side, imma off this prick /this skywalker has to force his shit//
remember me?, "im your father",hey yall, i taught this bitch//
i spit awesome shit, got mad n99as tellin me im fire like they my boss n shit//
2/3 Not bad but not too good either. I like where you were going but I think you should’ve worded it differently<o:p></o:p>
i flipped this out/when put the metal to your teeth i wont miss your mouth/one hit youre out//
mike jones ass ni99a ill even swish -ya- house//
1/2 – Not feelin the closer man. Needs to be stronger.<o:p></o:p>
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13/18= 72.2<o:p></o:p>
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Vote- KB<o:p></o:p>
Good job guys!<o:p></o:p>

[Vega/Set]

3-2

[~Longway~JNC Records]

AppletonDon-
Times up this bum nigga hit me up for the rematch/
what up wit all these garbage niggas challengin i need a new batch/
0/2 Not sure what you were trying to do here but a very weak opener
went eazy on you the first round cause i know you an ametuer/
took the kindness for weakness so fake MC its time that I Hammer ya/
1/2- Flowed well but didn’t pack a punch. I agree
Claim you from the BX but put the M in the middle and thats how ima ride on u/(BMX)
Yours truly originally from the BX but give it 5 min ill have the whole southside on u/
1/2- I liked the flow but the punch was very weak
The .40 cal will have u runnin and DIPpin lookin for yo SET/
Im like a NY KNICK lower record but still get more respect cause u a jersey NET/
2/2- Not bad at all -- becareful not to throw off the flow with a long line like that though
better hope i dont get assessed with the Tech cause it wont be no flagrant foul/
shots will stain up yo chest leave u smellin foul/
0/2- very weak -- flow was bad and punch was worse
wishin you was Boning the thugs with krayzie all ova ya sig/
while im bizzy bustin nuts all krayzie all ova ya girls wig/
0/2- It was funny but you need to attack this guy and the punches are more like lil jabs <?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
Yea son you might be ranked a little higher on the battle ladder/
but you just a rung im using on my way to the top of the ladder/
0/2 Man you gonna need a lot of work to get up from that low ladder position
You soft as mash potatoes bust shots in your direction have you leaking gravy/
Aight no more battling lessons for now fuck you pay me/
1/2- It was ok but more of a pity score-- I can only be honest enough to say I am very disappointed in this verse

5/16 = 31.3%




KB-
ok, i realize that i have to relax at it//
i spazzed at him/ i aint mad at him/but this fag's braggin//
0/2- Knowing you were starting 1-0 I would have thought you would bring fire. Your opener sets the tone for scoring as well as your flow. YOu need to come harder then this m8
when he knows i got more pumps then a room full of asthmatics//
acting an ass, talkin shit his raps is gassed/ we all passed at it//
2/2- very strong -- now we are talking
i laugh at him , he sucks at mathmatics,how fuk you gonna put a 4 to a 9//
send a boy to do a crime/in due time/ he'll be fiend out puttin straws to my
lines//
0/2- all those words what the hell did you say? I didnt get it
my fist'll put it on his teeth/ ill put him on the street//
the only pump he held was the ones he was puttin on his feet//
1/2 – Where I think you were going this could have been a knockout punch but you blew it <o:p></o:p>
he's use to runnin shit/so i eliminated his crew that he's use to runnin wit//
he's use duckin shit/made him my prostitue becuz he's use to suckin dick//
1/2- Flow was nice but I suspect this was a prewritten bar that has nothing to do with this battle. What crew does this guy have? What exactly is he running-- This guy just got here so I am not putting the two together
everyone thought im a gynocolagist, this pussy thought he was gettin open//
ill play the fence, this immigrant thought he was gettin over//
but nah im a fireman scailing the ladder wit his hoes over my shoulder//
3/3 – Very nice -- probally won you the battle
he's like a thorn in my side, imma off this prick /this skywalker has to force his shit//
remember me?, "im your father",hey yall, i taught this bitch//
i spit awesome shit, got mad n99as tellin me im fire like they my boss n shit//
3/3 k-- you know my weakness for starwars so this gets you a full set lol
i flipped this out/when put the metal to your teeth i wont miss your mouth/one hit youre out//
mike jones ass ni99a ill even swish -ya- house//
0/2 – after 2 nice bars you did not close this strong at all
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10/18= 55.6
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Vote- KB<o:p></o:p>




You two nigs need to get back to the drawing board and read some other battles to know what it means to battle rap--- your punches were weak and not personal at all --- step it up yall -- you both have very rough talant but you need to work on these two areas
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[~Longway~JNC Records]

Thats a wrap --- KB takes the battle