Winner Boss Smoke ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Scar -- Revolutionary

[Boss_Smoke]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started

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You're first.

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[Revolutionary]

yo, ima kick in tha door n spit till boss is in a coffin , deceased/
cuz my rhymes colder then steve austin n ya rhymes gayer then a priest/
dont reply ya lost man, u gunna beat me wen wish's album gets released/
ima attack you relentlessly, knock out ya teeth/
fuck rap ya shoulda took up dentistry...y u think u could rap is beyond belief/
cuz u lack the skillz necessary, and u preach about a life u dont lead/
u got in a battle wit me, which is like brushin ya teeth wit a knife u gunna bleed/
get ready 4 ya 1st defeat, cuz i got ya # like the yellow pages/
ya rhymes played out like pagers n u fruity like life savers/
the only time u spit is wen u done suckin a dick/
the way i rhyme make u wanna quit rappin n get ya wrist slit/
commit lyrical suicide, O.D on them verbal pills/
cuz u kno me, i got them verbal skillz wit a punch like murder cuz it killz/
plus a flow that got ya head spinnin like a wind mill/
done wit smoke got em dead, swimmin wit tha fishes cuz he thought he was ill/
jus got lyricaly raped... hes done, played out like the and one mixtape/

[~Longway~JNC Records]

did you guys not want this sanctioned?

[Revolutionary]

cant do it since i spit already, or can u still sanction it?

[Boss_Smoke]

Ayo,

Here we go, another battle with Revolutionary/
And this time, "he's not gonna go easy on me"/
So let me guess, you did go easy on your all your last enemies/
Cause they all kicked your ass bad, from Matty to Kee/
And with all those re-occuring words it seems/
That you have all your fucking rhymes on repeat (repeat)/
Call my lines fruity? Have you read your own damn bars?/
"Suckin' dick, lyrically raped" mothafucka you sicker than SARS/
The only thing that makes me wanna slit is those shitty ass rhymes of yours/
And what's with that gay-as-hell lookin' sig/
Hippie from the 70's looking piece of shit/
Fits your personality, and your level of spit/
Below average savage, you should quit/
Because if you notice none of this kid's lines go anywhere/
From ill, to mixtape, rhyming that bad is rare/
In case you haven't realized this the BatteGrounds, we'll all read your verse/
So before we evaluate it make sure you rhyme your words/

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[Boss_Smoke]

votes

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[~Longway~JNC Records]

Bad Habitz -- votes for sanctioned battles must be explained

[bad habitz]

dammit sal....lol

okay....

opener-niether...nothing made me say dayum
punches-boss'...they were jabs...but they were at least attempted
structure/flow-boss...just a better read for me
closure-niether...didnt get that ouch...out of it
enjoyment-niether...i'd just suggest really that both you step your game up

vote-boss...i really didnt like this battle at all i thought you would have came harder after what alias told you rev.....and boss....your verse in your first battle w/ rev i really liked and was looking to see more of it....but all i got was a dissappointment...dont take this as a hate post though...more like a "I EXPECT MORE OUT OF YOU" type thing

[Boss_Smoke]

alright, 1-0, thanks for voting.

Still need more votes though.

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[krayz1e b1zzy]

REVOLUTIONARY
yo, ima kick in tha door n spit till boss is in a coffin , deceased/
cuz my rhymes colder then steve austin n ya rhymes gayer then a priest/
1/2 u get the point for an attepmt at a punch, ok opener
dont reply ya lost man, u gunna beat me wen wish's album gets released/
ima attack you relentlessly, knock out ya teeth/
0/2 really wasnt feeling these 2 lines
fuck rap ya shoulda took up dentistry...y u think u could rap is beyond belief/
cuz u lack the skillz necessary, and u preach about a life u dont lead/
u got in a battle wit me, which is like brushin ya teeth wit a knife u gunna bleed/
1/3 would have been better if u worded it a lil better
get ready 4 ya 1st defeat, cuz i got ya # like the yellow pages/
ya rhymes played out like pagers n u fruity like life savers/
1/2 was ok until u said "fruity life savers"
the only time u spit is wen u done suckin a dick/
the way i rhyme make u wanna quit rappin n get ya wrist slit/
2/2 pretty decent lines
commit lyrical suicide, O.D on them verbal pills/
cuz u kno me, i got them verbal skillz wit a punch like murder cuz it killz/
2/2 nice flow here^:thumbup:
plus a flow that got ya head spinnin like a wind mill/
done wit smoke got em dead, swimmin wit tha fishes cuz he thought he was ill/
jus got lyricaly raped... hes done, played out like the and one mixtape/
1/3 the 1st line was ok ...could have been a lil better

50.% --IMO you had a couple of good punches in therecould have came a lil stronger though.

BOSS SMOKE

Here we go, another battle with Revolutionary/
And this time, "he's not gonna go easy on me"/
So let me guess, you did go easy on your all your last enemies/
1/3 i didnt like the opener
Cause they all kicked your ass bad, from Matty to Kee/
And with all those re-occuring words it seems/
That you have all your fucking rhymes on repeat (repeat)/
3/3 nicely flowed here and touchin on some personal info:thumbup:
Call my lines fruity? Have you read your own damn bars?/
"Suckin' dick, lyrically raped" mothafucka you sicker than SARS/
2/2 nice lil punch there flowed ok
The only thing that makes me wanna slit is those shitty ass rhymes of yours/
And what's with that gay-as-hell lookin' sig/
0/2 could have been worded better
Hippie from the 70's looking piece of shit/
Fits your personality, and your level of spit/
Below average savage, you should quit/
2/3 better then the last 2 lines
Because if you notice none of this kid's lines go anywhere/
From ill, to mixtape, rhyming that bad is rare/
1/2 the flow gets it
In case you haven't realized this the BatteGrounds, we'll all read your verse/
So before we evaluate it make sure you rhyme your words/
1/2 nuthing to be said about it...it was ok

59% you had some pretty good punches as well could have been worded a lil better

vote---boss you have over all slightly better lines and flow good job on both accounts though :thumbup::thumbup:

[Boss_Smoke]

Alright, 2-0, thanks for voting.

need at least one more vote though.

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[sikwitit]

Rev-<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
yo, ima kick in tha door n spit till boss is in a coffin , deceased/
cuz my rhymes colder then steve austin n ya rhymes gayer then a priest/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Pretty good line, but not a strong opener.
dont reply ya lost man, u gunna beat me wen wish's album gets released/
ima attack you relentlessly, knock out ya teeth/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Haha, that first line was funny as hell. Shoulda finished stronger on the second though.
fuck rap ya shoulda took up dentistry...y u think u could rap is beyond belief/
cuz u lack the skillz necessary, and u preach about a life u dont lead/<o:p></o:p>
u got in a battle wit me, which is like brushin ya teeth wit a knife u gunna bleed/
1/3- I like the last line a lot but the setup wasn’t right. <o:p></o:p>
get ready 4 ya 1st defeat, cuz i got ya # like the yellow pages/
ya rhymes played out like pagers n u fruity like life savers/
2/2- That was nice man. It made me laugh and that will always get ya points with meJ <o:p></o:p>
the only time u spit is wen u done suckin a dick/
the way i rhyme make u wanna quit rappin n get ya wrist slit/
1/2- Not bad but not very solid either.<o:p></o:p>
commit lyrical suicide, O.D on them verbal pills/
cuz u kno me, i got them verbal skillz wit a punch like murder cuz it killz/
plus a flow that got ya head spinnin like a wind mill/<o:p></o:p>
2/3- Give ya 2 point for the first two lines. Third line was good too but just not for a punch.
done wit smoke got em dead, swimmin wit tha fishes cuz he thought he was ill/
jus got lyricaly raped... hes done, played out like the and one mixtape/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Only one point here bro. You gotta come hard on the closers for 2 points<o:p></o:p>
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9/16= 56.2<o:p></o:p>
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Boss Smoke-<o:p></o:p>
Here we go, another battle with Revolutionary/
And this time, "he's not gonna go easy on me"/<o:p></o:p>
0/2- Not really sayin anything and there was no punch. Weak opener.
So let me guess, you did go easy on your all your last enemies/
Cause they all kicked your ass bad, from Matty to Kee/
1/2- Not much going on here either IMO. Give ya a point for a personal though.<o:p></o:p>
And with all those re-occuring words it seems/
That you have all your fucking rhymes on repeat (repeat)/
2/2- Haha! Very nice and personal!<o:p></o:p>
Call my lines fruity? Have you read your own damn bars?/
"Suckin' dick, lyrically raped" mothafucka you sicker than SARS/
The only thing that makes me wanna slit is those shitty ass rhymes of yours/
2/3- Funny but not quite enough for 3 brutha.<o:p></o:p>
And what's with that gay-as-hell lookin' sig/
Hippie from the 70's looking piece of shit/
Fits your personality, and your level of spit/
Below average savage, you should quit/
4/4- I felt like these all went together well. Nice…funny…personal…4 pointsJ<o:p></o:p>
Because if you notice none of this kid's lines go anywhere/
From ill, to mixtape, rhyming that bad is rare/
0/2- Nuthin happinin there brutha… gotta make that punch hurt!<o:p></o:p>
In case you haven't realized this the BatteGrounds, we'll all read your verse/
So before we evaluate it make sure you rhyme your words/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- This was a good set and pretty funny but not a strong closer. <o:p></o:p>
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10/17= 58.8<o:p></o:p>
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Vote- Boss Smoke<o:p></o:p>

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Boss Smoke gets the win Congrats

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

u kno wat sucks

I MISSED ANOTHER BATTLE!!!

[Boss_Smoke]

3 straight wins with the new system in place, I think I've gotten better.:biggrin:

And I'm still in 4th place?

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[~Longway~JNC Records]

you are closely behind #3 -- looking good though