Winner-- KrayzieBone#1Fan -- ~~~~~~ Scar Who Cares

[EternalSoldier]

KrazieBone#1Fan goes frist

1 round

frist with 4 votes win's

4-0 ko

4-1 tko

16-20 Bar's

[~Longway~JNC Records]

so 4-1 does not catch anyone the win? Do the math lil nig

[DJInnerGee]

lol wtf wuts up wit thsi numbers man just go diss me as good as u can im not in the mood so inspire me to kick ur ass:)

[EternalSoldier]

You a faget rappin prior to your own homicide that's about to happen

you better step quick cuz when the pump comes out you better duck when the shots hit

you take yo last step i blow off one shot and you have no chest left

as you drownin in a puddle of blood of your insanity cuz the sawed off just

left you in agony your morallity's gets you to thinkin about to sexuallity

you a faget suckin dick's talkin shit and i get to bustin clip's

cuz when i pump slug's there ant no love just yo brain's all over the pave

now watch as i dispose of my enimies then i cock back and blast on my advasariy's

lay you down it's time to die reload the ammunition pass me the mack and watch as i spray this lil faget in the back.

[DJInnerGee]

o rite o rite lets go
dawg u dunt even know me so muthafucka u can blow me/ who the fuck are u talkin this shit to/ man ima have to send u to the vet to get ur ass checked/who tha fuck u think ur fuckin wit ima fuckin aztec/ u got problems man and ima bout to solve em / i got a 12 guage in my hand and bullets gonna go threw ur chest like a battleram/ and ill have no remorse as i piss on ur corpse/ and put a bomb on ur hearse and luagh as ur fam wishes for a rebirth/ then ima give ur whole family a curse/ so u better wish u can put ur life in reverse becuz i dun wanna have to disperse this shotgun spray and blow your brain away/ and man u got carried away how tha fuck u gonna rap about sexualtiy in ur verse that just makes it worse then it already iz

[~Longway~JNC Records]

I can tell you both you need to work on your your structure big time

[DJInnerGee]

I can tell you both you need to work on your your structure big timewut u mean?

[~Longway~JNC Records]

wut u mean?

look at any of the sanctioned battles in this section and look at how the structure their verses-- you can tell what bars go with each. Then look at yours -- people will have a hard time rating your verse -- some may not even realize its a verse

[DJInnerGee]

look at any of the sanctioned battles in this section and look at how the structure their verses-- you can tell what bars go with each. Then look at yours -- people will have a hard time rating your verse -- some may not even realize its a versethx for the info man im always open for pointers

[EternalSoldier]

:haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha:

:smilekick: :smilekick: :smilekick: :smilekick: :smilekick:

[bad habitz]

are we votin on this battle?

[~Longway~JNC Records]

yes

[krayz1e b1zzy]

my vote goes to krayziebone#1fan becuz he atempted to have a couple of jab lines as for eternalsoldier i seen not one IMO i think you both need to throw punchlines into your battle becuz its just that....a battle, otherwise you have people reading something that doesnt even make the reader laugh, think, make the opponent try, or even finish reading but thats my 2cent

[Vega/Set]

krayzie bone wins cuz tha other dude aint eva comin bacc..and besides his verse woodnt have won

[~Longway~JNC Records]

krayzie bone wins cuz tha other dude aint eva comin bacc..and besides his verse woodnt have won


haha -- this is true


I love the new avatar :)

[Vega/Set]

lol good...i finally get ur approval.....now send me bacc my pm u beachclit

[~Longway~JNC Records]

sorry between dudes 10 emails about how much of a dick I must have missed it. Now he is banned and we can get back to todays normal programing

[DJInnerGee]

wait lol so i won??

[sikwitit]

Yeah my man. You win! You win by default but even if that dude didn't get banned, your drop was better and you woulda had my vote too. If you wanna battle him again just go call out "357-Killa"... I know that his ass back up in here still tryna battle for my spot on the ladder. Nice try homie! At least his attitude is better!

[DJInnerGee]

Yeah my man. You win! You win by default but even if that dude didn't get banned, your drop was better and you woulda had my vote too. If you wanna battle him again just go call out "357-Killa"... I know that his ass back up in here still tryna battle for my spot on the ladder. Nice try homie! At least his attitude is better!lol yay man haha man yah im tryin to get better at this shit u knoe but wut other way then callin peeps out and shit even if i get my ass kicked shits always fun

[sikwitit]

That's right man! Keep it up and you will get better for sure. You should study the battles of people you think are good. That way you can see how they put their punchlines together as well as their structure. There's nothing wrong with that. Keep it up pimpin!

[Hollow]

Well, he is banned, but the thread title is "Votes needed" so...

Kray's got my vote. He at least had a couple punches to the verse...

[~Longway~JNC Records]

sorry I fixed it

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

lmafo at "who cares"