Winner-------->Krayz1y B1zzy vs. Appletondon<--------Scar

[~Longway~JNC Records]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started



Appletondon you are lower on the list then Krayz1e B1zzy so you must go first

You have 48 hours to post -- good luck to you both

[AppletonDon]

fine by me

[krayz1e b1zzy]

lol wow again thats 3 times, but lets do it my n99 ( sal u spelled the name wrong...but i forgive u lol)

[~Longway~JNC Records]

sorry guys I just realized you have battled before but until you guys make some progress in the standings then it will be like this

[krayz1e b1zzy]

sorry guys I just realized you have battled before but until you guys make some progress in the standings then it will be like this i understand but dudes dont respond to call outs or pm's ... can i just battle myself for some points??:biggrin:

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Appletondon your up mang

[krayz1e b1zzy]

u want me to drop 1st??

[krayz1e b1zzy]

fuQ it since im ready and u not ill drop:

time to let him have it/ this lil faggot/ i already gave him one scar to the chest like sagat////
you'll never scar me/ spit heat/ to leave chard leaves////
...guess the apple didnt fall too far from the tree////
ima lay him out like a matt i know how to cut a rug/ bust a gun/ the semi is sem-i tucked/ like stomach bulge/when i lunge my slugs////
you'd thought me and my bullets were breakin up the way im dumpin them////
punk youre done/ puncture lungs/ your functions fuck////
fuck a round/ if you fuck around imma give him a heat wave like the summer does////
he's baffled by my mastery/ he dont think he can be touched////
...remember youre battlin me/ matter fact ima touch this kid like a catholic priest////
all the fussin/u claim u got guns/... u dont bust em////
your guns are as useless as buyin a turban for a headless muslim////
ill put him.../ so far in the gravel/ he'll be pickin worms out his apple////
i got a new magnum/ to toe tag him////
i feel sorry for anybody that new this faggot////
cause i make sure my bullets is " in" like the newest fashion.... bitch////

(no harm meant by the bitch part it just sounded right)lol

[AppletonDon]

ok da don bout to get back on his grizzly but i aint from memphis/
squeeze the shots in your face til its peeling like paint chips/
dont fuck around boy im kinda off and a little bit psycho/
ill runup jack son and kidnap yo kids like my first name was micheal/
we rep the same borough but dont get it twisted for a NY minute/
the bullets in the chamber of the revolver and i wont hesitate to spin it/
This dudes all ova krayzies nuts just check the flow in his bars/
you must of been one of the clones bone was talking about on art of war/
Call me the tech n9ne spitter with the absolute power/
I crush ya weak mothug flow and make u dissapear like powder/
keep talkin my nine will do the thunder clap i aint talkin bout no dance/
this aint like last round u aint biggie u dont get 1 more chance/ (check our last battle 2 verses to my 1)
You keep your semi semi-tucked i roll with the AK in the trunk/
It has part that attach like voltron but it brings the funk/
Taliban style cut your throat and bradcast all ova the internet/
I know my flows and lyrics got u hot this bitch got his panties wet/
if u real fuck the rappin get to clappin and lets get the war on/
I run the eastide boy in my world u just exist as a lil jon/

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

BX

time to let him have it/ this lil faggot/ i already gave him one scar to the chest like sagat////
1/2 - punch attempt, rhyme scheme corruption (sagat pronounce "suh-got")***i'm sure***
you'll never scar me/ spit heat/ to leave chard leaves////
...guess the apple didnt fall too far from the tree////
2/2 - complete punch, 2 line association, attempts
ima lay him out like a matt i know how to cut a rug/ bust a gun/ the semi is sem-i tucked/ like stomach bulge/when i lunge my slugs////
1/2 - point for first line attempt and metaphor usage
you'd thought me and my bullets were breakin up the way im dumpin them////
punk youre done/ puncture lungs/ your functions fuck////
1/2 - forced multis, metaphor usage, punch attempt
fuck a round/ if you fuck around imma give him a heat wave like the summer does////
he's baffled by my mastery/ he dont think he can be touched////
1/2 - point for first line punch attempt, 2nd = filler
...remember youre battlin me/ matter fact ima touch this kid like a catholic priest////
1/1 - punch attempt and multi usage
all the fussin/u claim u got guns/... u dont bust em////
your guns are as useless as buyin a turban for a headless muslim////
1/2 - point for 2nd line punch attempt and humor
ill put him.../ so far in the gravel/ he'll be pickin worms out his apple////
i got a new magnum/ to toe tag him////
1/2 - first line punch attempt (very grimey i might say, that line is sick)
i feel sorry for anybody that new this faggot////
cause i make sure my bullets is " in" like the newest fashion.... bitch////
1/2 - 2nd line punch attempt gets point

10/17 = 58%

Don

ok da don bout to get back on his grizzly but i aint from memphis/
squeeze the shots in your face til its peeling like paint chips/
1/2 - attempts present but weak punches
dont fuck around boy im kinda off and a little bit psycho/
ill runup jack son and kidnap yo kids like my first name was micheal/
1/2 - 1st line = filler/self-praising, 2nd line punch attempt
we rep the same borough but dont get it twisted for a NY minute/
the bullets in the chamber of the revolver and i wont hesitate to spin it/
1/2 - personal attempt gets point
This dudes all ova krayzies nuts just check the flow in his bars/
you must of been one of the clones bone was talking about on art of war/
2/2 - complete punch, personal attempt, finisher in 2nd line associated with the first (although bars and war don't rhyme since war is pronounced "wore")
Call me the tech n9ne spitter with the absolute power/
I crush ya weak mothug flow and make u dissapear like powder/
1/2 - first line = filler/self-praising, point for 2nd line punch attempt
keep talkin my nine will do the thunder clap i aint talkin bout no dance/
this aint like last round u aint biggie u dont get 1 more chance/ (check our last battle 2 verses to my 1)
1/2 - first line = filler, 2nd line gets point for personal attempt
You keep your semi semi-tucked i roll with the AK in the trunk/
It has part that attach like voltron but it brings the funk/
0/2 - first line = feeding/flipping, 2nd line = filler
Taliban style cut your throat and bradcast all ova the internet/
I know my flows and lyrics got u hot this bitch got his panties wet/
1/2 - punch attempt and humor gets point
if u real fuck the rappin get to clappin and lets get the war on/
I run the eastide boy in my world u just exist as a lil jon/
1/2 - first line = filler, point for 2nd line punch attempt

9/18 = 1/2 = 50%

Vote - krayz1e b1zzy

***nice battle guys, not really anything else i culd tell you, keep it up cuz ur both improving, nuttin negative to say bout any of you, BUT there were some fillers there, so watch out for that

[krayz1e b1zzy]

thnx for the votes...1-0

[Hollow]

KB

time to let him have it/ this lil faggot/ i already gave him one scar to the chest like sagat////
None. Not overly impressive punch. Didn't correctly rhyme.
you'll never scar me/ spit heat/ to leave chard leaves////
...guess the apple didnt fall too far from the tree////
1. Givin' a point for the first line.
ima lay him out like a matt i know how to cut a rug/ bust a gun/ the semi is sem-i tucked/ like stomach bulge/when i lunge my slugs////
1. Givin' a point for the punch.
you'd thought me and my bullets were breakin up the way im dumpin them////
punk youre done/ puncture lungs/ your functions fuck////
1. Multi's, though not great. Decent punch attempt.
fuck a round/ if you fuck around imma give him a heat wave like the summer does////
he's baffled by my mastery/ he dont think he can be touched////
1. Givin' a point for the "heat wave" metaphor.
...remember youre battlin me/ matter fact ima touch this kid like a catholic priest////
2. Don't really know why, but I like this line/rhyme/flow.
all the fussin/u claim u got guns/... u dont bust em////
your guns are as useless as buyin a turban for a headless muslim////
2. Funny line! I thought the rhyme scheme in this line far out-shined the rest of your verse.
ill put him.../ so far in the gravel/ he'll be pickin worms out his apple////
i got a new magnum/ to toe tag him////
2. Though I didn't link the combined flow, seperate, I liked them. Effective punch. Viscious.
i feel sorry for anybody that new this faggot////
cause i make sure my bullets is " in" like the newest fashion.... bitch////
1. Thought the punch was decent.

11 points.


Don

ok da don bout to get back on his grizzly but i aint from memphis/
squeeze the shots in your face til its peeling like paint chips/
1. Nice punch and attempt at a metaphoric-punch.
dont fuck around boy im kinda off and a little bit psycho/
ill runup jack son and kidnap yo kids like my first name was micheal/
1. Don't thing the line actually went over right, though it was an attempt.
we rep the same borough but dont get it twisted for a NY minute/
the bullets in the chamber of the revolver and i wont hesitate to spin it/
2. Thought you did good on the line 2 punch.
This dudes all ova krayzies nuts just check the flow in his bars/
you must of been one of the clones bone was talking about on art of war/
None. Just wasn't impressed
Call me the tech n9ne spitter with the absolute power/
I crush ya weak mothug flow and make u dissapear like powder/
1. Decent punch.
keep talkin my nine will do the thunder clap i aint talkin bout no dance/
this aint like last round u aint biggie u dont get 1 more chance/ (check our last battle 2 verses to my 1)
1. Decent punch and attempt at a metaphore.
You keep your semi semi-tucked i roll with the AK in the trunk/
It has part that attach like voltron but it brings the funk/
None. Didn't like this line much.
Taliban style cut your throat and bradcast all ova the internet/
I know my flows and lyrics got u hot this bitch got his panties wet/
2. I think it's your best punch and had a decent, even flow.
if u real fuck the rappin get to clappin and lets get the war on/
I run the eastide boy in my world u just exist as a lil jon/
None. I just didn't find this very good.

8 points.
Vote - KB
KB, you need to work on your structure in my opinion and you both could improve a little on just over-all rhymes. But, it was a nice battle, and I think you both put in a lot of effort.

[Boss_Smoke]

time to let him have it/ this lil faggot/ i already gave him one scar to the chest like sagat////
1/2 --- it's an alright opener
you'll never scar me/ spit heat/ to leave chard leaves////
...guess the apple didnt fall too far from the tree////
2/2 --- it's a good punch, but leave that "spit heat" out next time
ima lay him out like a matt i know how to cut a rug/ bust a gun/ the semi is sem-i tucked/ like stomach bulge/when i lunge my slugs////
1/2 --- started off well, ended self-praising
you'd thought me and my bullets were breakin up the way im dumpin them////
punk youre done/ puncture lungs/ your functions fuck////
1/2 --- rhymes well, not sure about the "rhyme"
fuck a round/ if you fuck around imma give him a heat wave like the summer does////
he's baffled by my mastery/ he dont think he can be touched////
1/2 --- good first line, but ended weak
...remember youre battlin me/ matter fact ima touch this kid like a catholic priest////
0/1 --- never understood why MC's say they're gonna touch the other MC like a priest, besides that, this is a filler
all the fussin/u claim u got guns/... u dont bust em////
your guns are as useless as buyin a turban for a headless muslim////
2/2 --- I like it, flowed well, nice punch
ill put him.../ so far in the gravel/ he'll be pickin worms out his apple////
1/1 --- Good punch
i got a new magnum/ to toe tag him////
i feel sorry for anybody that new this faggot////
cause i make sure my bullets is " in" like the newest fashion.... bitch////
1/3 --- I don't like this closer, it is kind of a punch, so a point fo you

10/17 = 58%

ok da don bout to get back on his grizzly but i aint from memphis/
squeeze the shots in your face til its peeling like paint chips/
0/2 --- weak attempted punch
dont fuck around boy im kinda off and a little bit psycho/
ill runup jack son and kidnap yo kids like my first name was micheal/
1/2 --- second line was alright, first wasn't anything
we rep the same borough but dont get it twisted for a NY minute/
the bullets in the chamber of the revolver and i wont hesitate to spin it/
1/2 --- personal, but not much other than that
This dudes all ova krayzies nuts just check the flow in his bars/
you must of been one of the clones bone was talking about on art of war/
1/2 --- doesn't really rhyme, but other than that it was good
Call me the tech n9ne spitter with the absolute power/
I crush ya weak mothug flow and make u dissapear like powder/
2/2 --- I liked the way this flowed, and it was a good punch
keep talkin my nine will do the thunder clap i aint talkin bout no dance/
this aint like last round u aint biggie u dont get 1 more chance/
1/2 --- not sure about this bar...Not enough of an attack
You keep your semi semi-tucked i roll with the AK in the trunk/
It has part that attach like voltron but it brings the funk/
0/2 --- you're not attacking, just rhyming
Taliban style cut your throat and bradcast all ova the internet/
I know my flows and lyrics got u hot this bitch got his panties wet/
1/2 --- started off good with the first line, but didn't finish
if u real fuck the rappin get to clappin and lets get the war on/
I run the eastide boy in my world u just exist as a lil jon/
1/2 --- the first wasn't anything, but I like the 2nd

7/18 = 39%

Alright, overall, Krayz1e you should break up your bars a bit, because doing your verse was a bitch. And Apple, trying attacking your opponent a little better, because right now your verses have a lot of fillers and bars with self-praising.

VOTE : KRAZ1E B1ZZY

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[sikwitit]

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time to let him have it/ this lil faggot/ i already gave him one scar to the chest like sagat////
1/2- Good personal in the punchline but not a strong opener. <o:p></o:p>
you'll never scar me/ spit heat/ to leave chard leaves////
...guess the apple didnt fall too far from the tree////<o:p></o:p>
1/2- not workin for me
ima lay him out like a matt i know how to cut a rug/ bust a gun/ the semi is sem-i tucked/ like stomach bulge/when i lunge my slugs////<o:p></o:p>
1/2 – there’s really know puncline here
you'd thought me and my bullets were breakin up the way im dumpin them////
punk youre done/ puncture lungs/ your functions fuck////<o:p></o:p>
1/2 – I really like the first line a lot and I wanted to give ya 2 but the second line fell off.
fuck a round/ if you fuck around imma give him a heat wave like the summer does////
he's baffled by my mastery/ he dont think he can be touched////<o:p></o:p>
1/2 – not much going on here.
...remember youre battlin me/ matter fact ima touch this kid like a catholic priest////<o:p></o:p>
1/2 – I like the punch but the set up shoulda been stronger.
all the fussin/u claim u got guns/... u dont bust em////
your guns are as useless as buyin a turban for a headless muslim////<o:p></o:p>
2/2- That was funny! You need more like this.
ill put him.../ so far in the gravel/ he'll be pickin worms out his apple////
i got a new magnum/ to toe tag him////<o:p></o:p>
1/2 - fillers
i feel sorry for anybody that new this faggot////
cause i make sure my bullets is " in" like the newest fashion.... bitch////<o:p></o:p>
0/2- weak closer dude, I know you can do better<o:p></o:p>
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9/18 = 50% <o:p></o:p>
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The Don-<o:p></o:p>
ok da don bout to get back on his grizzly but i aint from memphis/
squeeze the shots in your face til its peeling like paint chips/<o:p></o:p>
1/2 – Not bad but not a strong opener.
dont fuck around boy im kinda off and a little bit psycho/
ill runup jack son and kidnap yo kids like my first name was micheal/
2/2- I like it, it made me laugh!<o:p></o:p>
we rep the same borough but dont get it twisted for a NY minute/
the bullets in the chamber of the revolver and i wont hesitate to spin it/
2/2- I wish it would’ve been more personal or hit harder but I still like what you said.<o:p></o:p>
This dudes all ova krayzies nuts just check the flow in his bars/
you must of been one of the clones bone was talking about on art of war/
0/2- Not workin for me<o:p></o:p>
Call me the tech n9ne spitter with the absolute power/
I crush ya weak mothug flow and make u dissapear like powder/
2/2- There ya go with another one, funny and true, haha!<o:p></o:p>
keep talkin my nine will do the thunder clap i aint talkin bout no dance/
this aint like last round u aint biggie u dont get 1 more chance/ (check our last battle 2 verses to my 1)
2/2 – Personal, I like it.<o:p></o:p>
You keep your semi semi-tucked i roll with the AK in the trunk/
It has part that attach like voltron but it brings the funk/
1/2- It’s aight<o:p></o:p>
Taliban style cut your throat and bradcast all ova the internet/
I know my flows and lyrics got u hot this bitch got his panties wet/
1/2- punch ain’t hittin man.<o:p></o:p>
if u real fuck the rappin get to clappin and lets get the war on/
I run the eastide boy in my world u just exist as a lil jon/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Not bad but not strong enough as a closer<o:p></o:p>
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12/18 = 66%<o:p></o:p>
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Vote- The Don<o:p></o:p>
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[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

i dunno, i think KB won before sik's vote wit a 3-0 KO, i think it's only fair to giv him the win

[Vega/Set]

ya krayz bizz one before siks vote so he gets tha win...good battle guys

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

son is undefeated, impressive

[krayz1e b1zzy]

thnx for the votes ... yo appleton good battle my n99a u know wat it is

[sikwitit]

i dunno, i think KB won before sik's vote wit a 3-0 KO, i think it's only fair to giv him the win

Yup, there was only 2 votes when I started but I'm at work so it took me a while to finish. Sorry Don! Good battle though yall!:thumbup:

[AppletonDon]

no doubt