Winner---------->Hollow vs Boss Smoke<-----------Scar

[~Longway~JNC Records]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started

Hollow you are lower on the ladder then Boss Smoke so you go first

you have 48 hours to reply
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[Hollow]

I'll leave this bitch cock-choked an' give him a raw throat/
"Stop! No!" the last thing he said 'fore I left his jaw broke/
Swallowin' piss's the only way ya mouth gotta "hot flow"/
An' quittin' coke is the only way you could ever "drop dope"/
You couldn't spit a "clean verse" if ya stepped to the stage an' brought soap/
An' you couldn't "come across as the best" even if you had God's stroke/
Skills? I got loads; You'll stay nameless, I'll call you John Doe/
Pick up the glock, load, then really leave the "boss smoked"/
No one's ever gonna see you in lights, you're a ghost in the industry/
An' you couldn't beat me in a battle, if you tried throwin' ya sig at me/
The way it's runnin' away, I'd swear you were victory's enemy/
Listen, B, if you smart, you wouldn't even attempt to spit at me/
Cause if for even a single second, you think you're rippin' me/
One o' two things: you're either stupid or drunk from hennacy/
'Cause everyone here knows you couldn't even begin to beat/
Me if God actually did allow miracles to happen in the street/
So shut up, log out, an' shut down. Learn to walk away/
Or I can fuckin' kill you now; to me, it's all the same/
'Cause I can "spit fire at you," have you "swallow flame"/
An' it's nothin' to do wit' rappin', when my "magnums call ya name"/
An' the newspapers confirm it. Headline: "Smoke out"-The Boss was slain/
There were two shots involved: He popped his jaws, I popped his brain/
I don't mean to be mean, dawg; sorry, I'm jus' fond o' rage/
An' when it comes to you, I could go non-stop for days/
This is a full scale assault, made to break defense-lines/
An' even Jesus couldn't "save you" if he gave you his life/
So if I decide to come attack you, prepare for hits, a'ight?/
'Cause my spittin's like pornos: Not made for kids eyes/
So take a break an' watch. Dawg, ya too fake to spit right/
I could kill you at any time, middle of the day or midnight/
So walk away while you can, or you can stay an' sit tight/
Either way, you wouldn't be the "bigger man" wit' a case o' Enzyte/

I only quotation-ed off word-play that used metaphores, not self-describing similies. If you got any questions about 'em, go ahead and ask before voting.

Anyway.. Yo, Boss... Get at me, dawg.

[Boss_Smoke]

^^^accidently posted before it was finished.

Ayo,

'Hollow' needs to 'Follow the Leader' like 'Rakim'/
Or end up 'Sleepy' in the 'Depps' of Hell screaming sin/
Your rhymes are fake, imagaination figmental/
"Pull out my glock, kill you" wow, that's original/
How in the world could someone come up with that?/
Give him a Nobel Peace Prize for them generic raps/
You think you bad but ain't yet attacked/
Just gave me a few bars of mindless crap/
Right now you sounding like a bad 'Ice Cube' and you about to freeze/
And then I'ma put you in the 'tray' with the rest of the wannabe-G MC's/
Cause right now you coming off old and corny/
Tired old rhymes are beginning to bore me/ (zzzzzzzz)
Heard em many times, but lost count at four-hundred-forty/
And anyone who calls them real rhymes/
Needs to notice he ended with "me" three times/
Talk about repeating, this cat takes the cake/
Not just generic rhymes but literally words, proving he fake/
For Heaven's sake, his name is Hollow/
Empty, cold, and won't hesistate to swallow/
But moving away from your 'gay ways', lyrical 'Lance Bass'/
We'll move back to your attempted skill so you can rest that 'pain in ya ass'/
So to all you voters I need to ask one thing/
How many times have you heard a bitch claim they were king?/
And how many songs have you heard swans sing?/
It's all the same shit that's coming out of his mouth/
"I'm a gangter, I'm a G, and I run this house!/
Fuck with me and I'll hit you with my glock!/
Hit you with some generic rhymes then talk about my cock!"/
I think I got the whole "Hollow" vibe with those bars/
Empty, lifeless, and better heard from afar, like on Mars/
And if all you voters think this generic Ice-T was winning/
And if you call that new, and not usual gangsta spitting/
Then you just like Hollow over here needs to evaluate yourself/
Him being General Generic rhymes and you needing some mental help/

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[Boss_Smoke]

votes

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[Hollow]

CURRENTLY:
Hollow: 0;
3-Piece Rhymer: 0;

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Lyric Killer

I'll leave this bitch cock-choked an' give him a raw throat/
"Stop! No!" the last thing he said 'fore I left his jaw broke/
1/2 - weak opener, weak punch attempt
Swallowin' piss's the only way ya mouth gotta "hot flow"/
An' quittin' coke is the only way you could ever "drop dope"/
1/2 - point for attempts, no full score because of played concepts
You couldn't spit a "clean verse" if ya stepped to the stage an' brought soap/
An' you couldn't "come across as the best" even if you had God's stroke/
1/2 - first line = played concept, second = ok attempt, almost forced punches
Skills? I got loads; You'll stay nameless, I'll call you John Doe/
Pick up the glock, load, then really leave the "boss smoked"/
2/2 - complete punch, full score for attempt and nameplay/personal in 2nd line***Best Bar
No one's ever gonna see you in lights, you're a ghost in the industry/
An' you couldn't beat me in a battle, if you tried throwin' ya sig at me/
1/2 - first line = filler, 2nd line gets point for personal
The way it's runnin' away, I'd swear you were victory's enemy/
Listen, B, if you smart, you wouldn't even attempt to spit at me/
0/2 - filler
Cause if for even a single second, you think you're rippin' me/
One o' two things: you're either stupid or drunk from hennacy/
1/2 - 1st line associating to 2nd line, weak attempt, almost filler
'Cause everyone here knows you couldn't even begin to beat/
Me if God actually did allow miracles to happen in the street/
1/2 - good concept, weak punch
So shut up, log out, an' shut down. Learn to walk away/
Or I can fuckin' kill you now; to me, it's all the same/
0/2 - filler
'Cause I can "spit fire at you," have you "swallow flame"/
An' it's nothin' to do wit' rappin', when my "magnums call ya name"/
1/2 - 2nd line - nice concept, weak attempt in 1st
An' the newspapers confirm it. Headline: "Smoke out"-The Boss was slain/
There were two shots involved: He popped his jaws, I popped his brain/
2/2 - Concept gets full score for: creativity, association
I don't mean to be mean, dawg; sorry, I'm jus' fond o' rage/
An' when it comes to you, I could go non-stop for days/
0/2 - 1st = self-praising, 2nd = filler
This is a full scale assault, made to break defense-lines/
An' even Jesus couldn't "save you" if he gave you his life/
1/2 - point for attempt, lacked concept creativity
So if I decide to come attack you, prepare for hits, a'ight?/
'Cause my spittin's like pornos: Not made for kids eyes/
1/2 - point for concept but self-praising loses prevents full score
So take a break an' watch. Dawg, ya too fake to spit right/
I could kill you at any time, middle of the day or midnight/
0/2 - no punch present = filler
So walk away while you can, or you can stay an' sit tight/
Either way, you wouldn't be the "bigger man" wit' a case o' Enzyte/
2/2 - lmao, just had to give ya the full score

15/32 = 46%

G.GE
'Hollow' needs to 'Follow the Leader' like 'Rakim'/
Or end up 'Sleepy' in the 'Depps' of Hell screaming sin/
2/2 - Complete Punch, Both Good Concepts, 2nd = Personal associating the Name***Best Bar
Your rhymes are fake, imagaination figmental/
"Pull out my glock, kill you" wow, that's original/
1/2 - Point for personal
How in the world could someone come up with that?/
Give him a Nobel Peace Prize for them generic raps/
1/2 - Point for attempt of Personal and Concept
You think you bad but ain't yet attacked/
Just gave me a few bars of mindless crap/
0/2 - Filler
Right now you sounding like a bad 'Ice Cube' and you about to freeze/
And then I'ma put you in the 'tray' with the rest of the wannabe-G MC's/
2/2 - Complete Punch, Line-4-Line Association, Concept
Cause right now you coming off old and corny/
Tired old rhymes are beginning to bore me/ (zzzzzzzz) Heard em many times, but lost count at four-hundred-forty/
0/3 - Filler
And anyone who calls them real rhymes/
Needs to notice he ended with "me" three times/
0/2 - Feeding/Flipping
Talk about repeating, this cat takes the cake/
Not just generic rhymes but literally words, proving he fake/
1/2 - Attempt at concept, Point deduction for feeding/flipping
For Heaven's sake, his name is Hollow/
Empty, cold, and won't hesistate to swallow/
2/2 - lmao, Complete Punch, Nameplay/Personal, Line-4-Line association
But moving away from your 'gay ways', lyrical 'Lance Bass'/
We'll move back to your attempted skill so you can rest that 'pain in ya ass'/
2/2 - 2 attempts - Good concepts, Humor
So to all you voters I need to ask one thing/
How many times have you heard a bitch claim they were king?/
And how many songs have you heard swans sing?/
2/3 - Deduction for swaying, point for concept and humor
It's all the same shit that's coming out of his mouth/
"I'm a gangter, I'm a G, and I run this house!/
1/2 - point for personal attempt and concept
Fuck with me and I'll hit you with my glock!/
Hit you with some generic rhymes then talk about my cock!"/
1/2 - Point for humor and personal attempt (coulda scored full but you were talking about him repeating words when you already used the "generic rhyme" concept more than twice already)
I think I got the whole "Hollow" vibe with those bars/
Empty, lifeless, and better heard from afar, like on Mars/
2/2 - Complete Punch, Line-4-Line Association, Nameplay/Personal, Creativity in Concept
And if all you voters think this generic Ice-T was winning/
And if you call that new, and not usual gangsta spitting/
0/2 - Swaying and PLAYED concept (we get it, you think he's generic, sounds like i'm watching the same 8 mile scene over and over again)
Then you just like Hollow over here needs to evaluate yourself/
Him being General Generic rhymes and you needing some mental help/
0/2 - Played concept, weak closer (don't focus on us voters, you're battling hollow)

17/34 = 50%

Vote - Boss_Smoke (http://www.btnhboard.com/forums/member.php?u=25231)

***you both had tremendous flaws in those verses, i mean from Fillers, to Feeding to Played Concepts and Self-Praising, the main things you guys should avoid, and Boss, although you got my vote, your verse coulda been waaaay better if you moved on from the 'Generic Rapper' topic, i mean, once was enough and i started to get bored of it, but you came on top because you had more personals, Hollow, not your best, you coulda came waaaay better, remeber guys, PERSONALS will give you better chances to win you're battle, overall though, i enjoyed this event, good job

[Vega/Set]

Opener- Boss
Punches- Boss
Flow- Hollow
Multies- Tie
Wordplay- Hollow
Nameplay- Boss
Similies/Meta's- Hollow
Personals- Boss
Creativity- Boss
Humor- Hollow
Closure- Hollow
Enjoyment- Hollow

Over-All = 6-5 Hollow

Vote = Hollow





I mus say that alias was right...lots of fillers and self-hype...plus a bit of played shit...but still close battle nonetheless

[Hollow]

CURRENTLY:
Hollow: 1;
3-Piece Rhymer: 1;

[~Longway~JNC Records]

This looks like alot of prewritten recycled bullshit with pieced in personals. Just my opinion but neither of you "deserve" to win inho

Opener- Hollow
Punches- Boss
Flow- Hollow
Multies- Boss
Wordplay- Hollow
Nameplay- Boss
Similies/Meta's- Hollow
Personals- Boss
Creativity- Boss
Humor- Hollow
Closure- Hollow
Enjoyment- Hollow

Over-All = 7-5 Hollow

Vote = Hollow

[Vega/Set]

2-1

[Hollow]

Yea, I ain't overly happy with most of it (well, about half of it's actually disappointing to me) , but it wasn't really "recycled" or "prewritten." (At least, on my front.)

[Enzo R.]

i don't think i can vote because of the rules...gotta get my posts up...but that was a good battle...

[Syxx_Ten]

Opener- hollow
Punches- hollow
Flow- hollow
Multies- hollow
Wordplay-boss
Nameplay- boss
Similies/Meta's-hollow
Personals- boss
Creativity-boss
Humor- boss
Closure- hollow
Enjoyment-hollow

7-5 hollow

[~Longway~JNC Records]

3-1 Hollow -- keep em coming

[DZ]

Opener- Boss
Punches- Hollow
Flow- Hollow
Multies- Hollow
Wordplay-Hollow
Nameplay- Boss
Similies/Meta's-Hollow
Personals- Boss
Creativity-Boss
Humor- Hollow
Closure- Hollow
Enjoyment-Hollow

8-4 Hollow ... Overall i felt Hollow`s verse more, his wordplay and multies pretty much gave him teh vote from me ... I didn't really feel when Boss came at teh voters too, kinda forcin` lines in ther imo.

[Vega/Set]

4-1 hollow wins by tko


good job and good battle guys

[Hollow]

Appreciate the votes people. Thanks an' peace easy all.

Good battle, man!

[Vega/Set]

Sal if u hadnt already dun it..i think there status on the ladder needs to change as well