My angel {a song for my girl}

[Vega/Set]

[chorusx2]
Your my angel, my sweetest love in life
your my angel, i'll treat you more than right
and you shood kno that your my angel----baby your my wife
you cood neva fall from heaven cuz without you, heavens in dark without your light



[Verse]

the blessing in my life progressed into more once u became my wife
the stressing was worth it, the obsession worth it-- n now i cant find the words to write
you give me light, brighten my day wen its in the dark
to live without you might kill me or jus leave me wit no spark
i may not express my love, and its my deepest apologies
your as peaceful as a dove and and to think i dont love u is a hypocrisy
i would do anythang for you, anythang your heart desires
i would kill myself if u wanted-- i wood set my heart on fire
you must not understand how deep these feelings are rooted
im hopin u will one day though baby, then our love will b undisputed
n only now am i fuelin it with feelings i left behind me for reasons goin unnamed
your my angel you shood kno that by now-- it shood b on scriptures framed
pictures famed once people realize that your the most beautiful girl
then licc hurt inflamed wounds once i realize i cant lose u to the world
im selfish in ways others dont understand and that makes me lonely
cuz iikno if i keep tryna keep you from others caged im gonna b left an only
so own me, call me yours, love me till your life devours then soars
your my angel you brighten days more than thousands of flowers across shores
my faded life is now held in yours--i want to make you happy-- so you cant b ignored



[chorusx2]
Your my angel, my sweetest love in life
your my angel, i'll treat you more than right
and you shood kno that your my angel----baby your my wife
you cood neva fall from heaven cuz without you, heavens in dark without your light


[verse]

ive done so many fucced up thangs to you now that im reminising
im apologise baby, an now im missin u here jus to have us kissin
you exsisting in my life is the only thing i need to survive this strife
twisting insides become untangled by your assistance that u provide
n im thankful everyday, wither i express it or not its still spoken aside
ive cried my last tears once i knew that the cheating fear died
cuz now i realize that your my bride and you wouldnt have us live divided
im here for you all over again baby, jus tell me wut to do, i'll try it
anythang u need i'll buy it--
your gods greatest creation--a sensation--one and only, no imitation
the vibrations in my soul is desperation reachin to get out the cold
your the light the heats me up n now my dedication to return tha favor wont stop till we're old
open the book n unfold our story for readin this will neva have u worry
you hold the key to my heart and our hearts together hold our glory
we say its too good to b true but truth be told i woodnt have it ne other way
your my angel-soulmate- and best friend forver- even wen we're 4 hours away...
but regardless i wont hurt you--your love n feelings i wont betray..........


[chorusx2]
Your my angel, my sweetest love in life
your my angel, i'll treat you more than right
and you shood kno that your my angel----baby your my wife
you cood neva fall from heaven cuz without you, heavens in dark without your light









~everythang i wrote was jus thought up n written down, everythang that was said was actual shit....so this is actually pretty deep to me....n my girl told me to write her a letter or a poem so i decided to a bit of both...i jus want ya'lls opinion on it~

[Longway]

i love it homie-- very nice -- you should try to record it

[Vega/Set]

i shood but i probably wont lol.....i dont have that type of resources...thanx for tha feedbacc homie

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

very touchin, i guess veg is goin lovey dubby on us now huh? (lol jk)

nice piece, great descriptions, vocab, overall, good piece boy

[Vega/Set]

lol@boy thanks nig...n no im not gettin soft..it jus shows how versatile i can be wen it comes to teh writing :amigo:


n stop sayin veg.....i understand u wanna shorten teh name but one letter is not gonna do it so jus add bacc in tha a in veg...stop bein so fuccn lazy u bum

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

ok fine, i'll call u ve for now on, easier anyway

/lays on the couch

[Vega/Set]

:stfu:

[Vega/Set]

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[Syn]

i love it homie-- very nice -- you should try to record it
u kno he cant sing, lol jk.
touching mayn :mecry:
:aim-kissing:

[Ronald Resurrection]

nice one ve

[Seven1/2Designs]

Yeah, i'm late. But this is dope. You record it?

[WAR CHIEF]

PUSSY WHIPPED

with that being siad, I can tell it's good from the first few lines, I just couln't bring myself to read the whole mushy thing-

peace

[Seven1/2Designs]

It's more poetic than soft. If more artists would write like this, and make a dope track from it, rap music wouldn't be looked at as bullshit.

[Vega/Set]

slippy jus mad cuz i kno how to write in all ways..im very versatile in the writing game..i can write sumn for everyone....and it doesnt mean im pussy whipped read the whole thang and you'll kno im not

[Seven1/2Designs]

I wouldn't mind being pussy whipped if my girl was beautiful. And yes, my girl is, and I told her to be rough with me, and don't care about how I feel.

[Vega/Set]

lol

[WAR CHIEF]

slippy jus mad cuz i kno how to write in all ways..im very versatile in the writing game..i can write sumn for everyone....and it doesnt mean im pussy whipped read the whole thang and you'll kno im not

Don't get it twisted homey, I can't be mad over a poem. Like I siad, I read the first ten lines and it sounded good, I'm just not the type to read love poems, or love songs for the matter.

I was just playing with that PUSSY WHIPPED comment but since we're on the subject:

Your pussy whipped because you wrote a song for a girl that you love on the internet for strangers to read. It's all good, that's what love is about.

So yes, if you sit there and think about nice things to say about your lady- your pussy whipped. Me, I couldn't bring myself to do that regardless of how much I care for a women, that's more of personal thing for me.

People need to learn not to take me too seriousley on these forums.

[Hollow]

Love the piece, boy.... Already been workin' on a few verses myself for my girl.

[Ronald Resurrection]

i shood but i probably wont lol.....i dont have that type of resources...thanx for tha feedbacc homie

y dont u use a 10 dollar mic, a good program n thaz it?