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Vega/Set
08-01-2006, 07:11 PM
House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started
Prings you are lower on the ladder then Vega so you go first
you have 48 hours to reply
Darkchild
08-02-2006, 11:06 PM
I spit verbal barrages, your rhymes ‘lamer’ than Christopher Reeve's ‘lower torso’/<o:p></o:p>
By the time this poundings finished you ‘lookin worse’ than ‘Andre 3000's wardrobe’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Do you have the stamina to battle with me, I wouldna thought so/<o:p></o:p>
You come across as a ‘disabled boxer’, or someone who 'fought slow'/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Your style is just a ‘fad’, makes less sense than 50 cent screamin out 'hyphy'/<o:p></o:p>
Only reason i allow you to exist on this board, is cuz i want more pictures of your wifey/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Cuz she likes how my rhymes 'cum harder' than ‘Peter North’/<o:p></o:p>
But, you couldn't ‘fuck with me and her’ even if we had 'textual intercourse'/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
When the knockout punch comes, your gonna ‘fall quicker’ than the ‘Nasdaq post 9-11’/<o:p></o:p>
Leave you dazed and confused, speaking in ‘more languages’ than ‘Gloria Estefan’/ (Ess-Teff-En)<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
I ‘tiger uppercut’ and ‘sonic boom’ on your ‘street fighter’ man/<o:p></o:p>
You best head to ‘ING’ and re-evaluate your ‘retirement plan’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Cuz i flow with ‘greater pressure’ than a fireman can, kid I’m knockin’ you senseless/<o:p></o:p>
You may be pretty quick, but once I ‘knock off your claw’, you’re defenceless/ (Think, Street Fighter)<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
You’re lacking what it takes Vega, just recapping, bitch quit your raps/<o:p></o:p>
Your crowd makes ‘less noise’ than quadriplegics giving ‘soul claps’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Don’t hold back, I beat you to death with a steel wrench tied up with a shoelace/<o:p></o:p>
Displace your ‘head from your neck’, that’s the real meaning of your 2-face/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
I snap necks with a tape deck, bitch have you got a death wish?/<o:p></o:p>
If rapping was ‘invite only’, there’s no way you’d be on the ‘guest list’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Cuz your shit is ‘sloppier’ and more ‘filler’ than a ‘double whopper’/<o:p></o:p>
I’ve seen better ‘bars’ and ‘hooks’ on episodes of ‘American Chopper’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Only way that you will be saved from humility is if you ‘withdrew’/<o:p></o:p>
Cuz I will not sign a ‘cease fire’ like the ‘Arabs versus the Jews’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Death is impending, for you friend and soon your soul will be ‘ascending’/<o:p></o:p>
Like the ‘U.S budget spending’, it is no use to ‘defend it’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
See at the conclusion of this battle, you’ll lose 15 and I’ll gain thirty/<o:p></o:p>
Even if your skills were manifested to infinity, there’s no way that you could hurt me/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
I wish I could read faster than the speed you type, so I wouldn’t have to view your verse/<o:p></o:p>
Sit for 12 hours, while you rehearse, there really couldn’t be much worse/<o:p></o:p>
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Leave you in a hearse, or a black stretched funeral car/<o:p></o:p>
Anyone on the board wanna know what kind of faker you are?/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
Even strapped wit a gat this Vega rat could never be thug/<o:p></o:p>
So gather around fellaz, let’s give this fool an e-hug/
:pringles:
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Vega/Set
08-03-2006, 04:16 AM
Its a bird, its a plane no its me goin against the grounds own dean caine
but his rhymes aint strong enough against this kryptonite--he's slain
Leave him in the dark n lonely-- cryin like a lil child wit noone to mingle
this kid is a bitch, he'd get crunched then canned like a shippment of pringles
you lost goin against me lil boy, i'll jus leave ya down unda-- like austrailia
only to be found as Mj's lil toy, i guess thats y you'll neva-land-- girly genitalia
im tryna tell ya, you aint fit for this-- so get ya fat ass grip off-of- them-chips
these aint meant for you steve-- your lyrics aint gators they wont make me shit
so sit--cuz wut ur seated on resembles how your verse was brought
its soft, like seat cushions--and "dark" child sumthin like "blank thought"
your caught n hooked by these punches-- like fish for trophies or lunches
c'mon kid im more than u can stomach--your words fall off tha page n plummet
so sub-mit, tap out ni66a u kno damn well you've had enough of it
your rhymes is tired-- so your career will b put to sleep legit
and i can even put your record up on mephis bleek's forehead
remember that line—
i switched it up to tell you that your rhymes bleak n u might need 4 heads
cuz before u headed in this you shooda known i'd do my home-work
now its ya fault u gettin schooled-- teachin ya how this noob does a dome-merk
wit lyrical shots thats lettin everyone kno y u aint in c-war
cuz this kid fragile, he'd crumble like a pringle-- so he cant see war
ni66a its funny that only ones that beat u are these c-war soldiers
nothin gonna change here,
i'll jus cough~e in, then a quicc minute your out like a cup of folgers
i usually dont take an inhancement but in your case its closed
tha words bolded out in this battle remind of u-- like mase exposed
suppose i shood thank you though, but im not a generous person
this ez win coodnt be dun with out your magic--now its lyrical cursed fun
you ended his career so like karma wut comes around goes around
you left only wit this kra-hazey spic that'll stomp you out like roaches found
if my style was a fad then ni66a your's is a gimmicc
you cant even get heard of--
cuz like stroke victims, you've reached your limit
your like why ricc flair cant stay out wrestling and he's 70 something
you think you still in the spotlight but your rhymes continue slumping
your lines are like top models missing fashions
and in same ways my last punchline decided to be absent
this kid aint XL he pussy, and these lyrics make him twice as wet
you aint battle'n a vet
but the outcome is gonna b jus like wen u battled tha nig nate tekk
~Explantions to help understand the verse~
dean caine = superman ~ if u look at his pic in tha pic forum everyone says he looks like dean caine the guy who played superman in the series
his aliases are ~ kid pringle, dark child, pringle xl, DC
his from austraila
his only losses were from c-war
mephis bleek was used in one of his lines against nate tekk
lyrical curse was an opponet he beat and right after him he battled a guy now named hazey roach which lost to prings as well
wen he battled nate tekk he lost
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Boss_Smoke
08-03-2006, 06:35 AM
2Face/Vega
Its a bird, its a plane no its me goin against the grounds own dean caine
but his rhymes aint strong enough against this kryptonite--he's slain
2/2 --- good personal opener
Leave him in the dark n lonely-- cryin like a lil child wit noone to mingle
this kid is a bitch, he'd get crunched then canned like a shippment of pringles
2/2 --- pure nameplay
you lost goin against me lil boy, i'll jus leave ya down unda-- like austrailia
only to be found as Mj's lil toy, i guess thats y you'll neva-land-- girly genitalia
2/2 --- good punch
im tryna tell ya, you aint fit for this-- so get ya fat ass grip off-of- them-chips
these aint meant for you steve-- your lyrics aint gators they wont make me shit
1/2 --- 1st was good, 2nd came off weak
so sit--cuz wut ur seated on resembles how your verse was brought
its soft, like seat cushions--and "dark" child sumthin like "blank thought"
0/2 --- didn't like this bar :thumbdown
your caught n hooked by these punches-- like fish for trophies or lunches
c'mon kid im more than u can stomach--your words fall off tha page n plummet
1/2 --- 1st was good, but you ended weakly
so sub-mit, tap out ni66a u kno damn well you've had enough of it
your rhymes is tired-- so your career will b put to sleep legit
0/2 --- this came weak
and i can even put your record up on mephis bleek's forehead
remember that line—
i switched it up to tell you that your rhymes bleak n u might need 4 heads
0/2 --- I dislike this bar
cuz before u headed in this you shooda known i'd do my home-work
now its ya fault u gettin schooled-- teachin ya how this noob does a dome-merk
1/2 --- conecpt was good, but ended the 2nd line with a force
wit lyrical shots thats lettin everyone kno y u aint in c-war
cuz this kid fragile, he'd crumble like a pringle-- so he cant see war
2/2 --- good punch
ni66a its funny that only ones that beat u are these c-war soldiers
nothin gonna change here,
i'll jus cough~e in, then a quicc minute your out like a cup of folgers
1/3 --- 1st was alright, ended with 2 fillers
i usually dont take an inhancement but in your case its closed
tha words bolded out in this battle remind of u-- like mase exposed
2/2 --- good bar
suppose i shood thank you though, but im not a generous person
this ez win coodnt be dun with out your magic--now its lyrical cursed fun
2/2 --- []Dersonal
you ended his career so like karma wut comes around goes around
you left only wit this kra-hazey spic that'll stomp you out like roaches found
1/2 --- 1st was filler, 2nd was good
if my style was a fad then ni66a your's is a gimmicc
you cant even get heard of--
cuz like stroke victims, you've reached your limit
2/3 --- good line/filler/good line
your like why ricc flair cant stay out wrestling and he's 70 something
you think you still in the spotlight but your rhymes continue slumping
1/2 --- an alright attempted punch
your lines are like top models missing fashions
and in same ways my last punchline decided to be absent
0/2 --- the fuck?
this kid aint XL he pussy, and these lyrics make him twice as wet
you aint battle'n a vet
but the outcome is gonna b jus like wen u battled tha nig nate tekk
2/3 --- good closer, but I'm not sure about the mid-line
2Face/Vega --- 22/39 --- 56%
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Pringles
I spit verbal barrages, your rhymes ‘lamer’ than Christopher Reeve's ‘lower torso’/<?xml:namespace prefix = o /><o:p></o:p>
By the time this poundings finished you ‘lookin worse’ than ‘Andre 3000's wardrobe’/
<o:p>2/2 --- nice opener</o:p>
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Do you have the stamina to battle with me, I wouldna thought so/<o:p></o:p>
You come across as a ‘disabled boxer’, or someone who 'fought slow'/
1/2 --- not a big fan of that bar<o:p></o:p>
<o:p></o:p>
Your style is just a ‘fad’, makes less sense than 50 cent screamin out 'hyphy'/<o:p></o:p>
Only reason i allow you to exist on this board, is cuz i want more pictures of your wifey/
2/2 --- ha, ha! personal, and a good punch:thumbup: <o:p></o:p>
<o:p></o:p>
Cuz she likes how my rhymes 'cum harder' than ‘Peter North’/<o:p></o:p>
But, you couldn't ‘fuck with me and her’ even if we had 'textual intercourse'/
1/2 --- i've never been a fan of shit like that, but you get a point anyways<o:p></o:p>
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When the knockout punch comes, your gonna ‘fall quicker’ than the ‘Nasdaq post 9-11’/<o:p></o:p>
Leave you dazed and confused, speaking in ‘more languages’ than ‘Gloria Estefan’/ (Ess-Teff-En)
1/2 --- started off good, but ended weakly
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I ‘tiger uppercut’ and ‘sonic boom’ on your ‘street fighter’ man/<o:p></o:p>
You best head to ‘ING’ and re-evaluate your ‘retirement plan’/
2/2 --- personal, and a good punch<o:p></o:p>
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Cuz i flow with ‘greater pressure’ than a fireman can, kid I’m knockin’ you senseless/<o:p></o:p>
You may be pretty quick, but once I ‘knock off your claw’, you’re defenceless/ (Think, Street Fighter)
1/2 --- getting personal, but it just wasn't that strong<o:p></o:p>
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You’re lacking what it takes Vega, just recapping, bitch quit your raps/<o:p></o:p>
Your crowd makes ‘less noise’ than quadriplegics giving ‘soul claps’/
2/2 --- :haha: :haha: :haha: <o:p></o:p>
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Don’t hold back, I beat you to death with a steel wrench tied up with a shoelace/<o:p></o:p>
Displace your ‘head from your neck’, that’s the real meaning of your 2-face/
1/2 --- nameplay, but it wasn't that good<o:p></o:p>
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I snap necks with a tape deck, bitch have you got a death wish?/<o:p></o:p>
If rapping was ‘invite only’, there’s no way you’d be on the ‘guest list’/
0/2 --- weak!<o:p></o:p>
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Cuz your shit is ‘sloppier’ and more ‘filler’ than a ‘double whopper’/<o:p></o:p>
I’ve seen better ‘bars’ and ‘hooks’ on episodes of ‘American Chopper’/
<o:p>2/2 --- good punch</o:p>
<o:p></o:p>
Only way that you will be saved from humility is if you ‘withdrew’/<o:p></o:p>
Cuz I will not sign a ‘cease fire’ like the ‘Arabs versus the Jews’/
1/2 --- 1st was filler, 2nd was alright<o:p></o:p>
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Death is impending, for you friend and soon your soul will be ‘ascending’/<o:p></o:p>
Like the ‘U.S budget spending’, it is no use to ‘defend it’/
2/2 --- good punch
<o:p></o:p>
See at the conclusion of this battle, you’ll lose 15 and I’ll gain thirty/<o:p></o:p>
Even if your skills were manifested to infinity, there’s no way that you could hurt me/
0/2 --- weak filler<o:p></o:p>
<o:p></o:p>
I wish I could read faster than the speed you type, so I wouldn’t have to view your verse/<o:p></o:p>
Sit for 12 hours, while you rehearse, there really couldn’t be much worse/
1/2 --- ehh....you're falling
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Leave you in a hearse, or a black stretched funeral car/<o:p></o:p>
Anyone on the board wanna know what kind of faker you are?/
1/2 --- 1st = filler - 2nd = not sure what
<o:p></o:p>
Even strapped wit a gat this Vega rat could never be thug/<o:p></o:p>
So gather around fellaz, let’s give this fool an e-hug/
2/2 --- good closer, but I don't give out hugs:mad:
Pringles XL --- 22/34 --- 65%
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VOTE : PRINGLES XL
sikwitit
08-03-2006, 08:04 AM
Pringles-<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
I spit verbal barrages, your rhymes ‘lamer’ than Christopher Reeve's ‘lower torso’/
<O:P></O:P>By the time this poundings finished you ‘lookin worse’ than ‘Andre 3000's wardrobe’/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>2/2- Nice open and funny ass hell...lol!
Do you have the stamina to battle with me, I wouldna thought so/
<O:P></O:P>You come across as a ‘disabled boxer’, or someone who 'fought slow'/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>1/2- Some cats on here I might’ve given 2… But you being one of the tightest, it’s not very strong for you.
Your style is just a ‘fad’, makes less sense than 50 cent screamin out 'hyphy'/
<O:P></O:P>Only reason i allow you to exist on this board, is cuz i want more pictures of your wifey/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>2/2- I don’t even know, but I’m rollin
Cuz she likes how my rhymes 'cum harder' than ‘Peter North’/
<O:P></O:P>But, you couldn't ‘fuck with me and her’ even if we had 'textual intercourse'/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>1/2- I love the first line but the punch coulda been stronger
When the knockout punch comes, your gonna ‘fall quicker’ than the ‘Nasdaq post 9-11’/
<O:P></O:P>Leave you dazed and confused, speaking in ‘more languages’ than ‘Gloria Estefan’/ (Ess-Teff-En)
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>1/2- Not bad but the fact that we all know it’s pronounced Ess-Teff-On…hahaJ
I ‘tiger uppercut’ and ‘sonic boom’ on your ‘street fighter’ man/
<O:P></O:P>You best head to ‘ING’ and re-evaluate your ‘retirement plan’/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>2/2- I like it…personal wit the Street Fighter bit and the punch was coo too!
Cuz i flow with ‘greater pressure’ than a fireman can, kid I’m knockin’ you senseless/
<O:P></O:P>You may be pretty quick, but once I ‘knock off your claw’, you’re defenceless/ (Think, Street Fighter)
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>1/2- Ehh... not bad but could be much better.
You’re lacking what it takes Vega, just recapping, bitch quit your raps/
<O:P></O:P>Your crowd makes ‘less noise’ than quadriplegics giving ‘soul claps’/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>2/2- You’ll always get 2 points for making me laughJ
Don’t hold back, I beat you to death with a steel wrench tied up with a shoelace/
<O:P></O:P>Displace your ‘head from your neck’, that’s the real meaning of your 2-face/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>2/2- Nice, personal, good!
I snap necks with a tape deck, bitch have you got a death wish?/
<O:P></O:P>If rapping was ‘invite only’, there’s no way you’d be on the ‘guest list’/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>2/2- OUCH!
Cuz your shit is ‘sloppier’ and more ‘filler’ than a ‘double whopper’/
<O:P></O:P>I’ve seen better ‘bars’ and ‘hooks’ on episodes of ‘American Chopper’/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>2/2- Lol… I almost wanna give you 3 for that one!
Only way that you will be saved from humility is if you ‘withdrew’/
<O:P></O:P>Cuz I will not sign a ‘cease fire’ like the ‘Arabs versus the Jews’/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>1/2- It’s aight…
Death is impending, for you friend and soon your soul will be ‘ascending’/
<O:P></O:P>Like the ‘U.S budget spending’, it is no use to ‘defend it’/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>1/2- It feels like a filler… but a good oneJ
See at the conclusion of this battle, you’ll lose 15 and I’ll gain thirty/
<O:P></O:P>Even if your skills were manifested to infinity, there’s no way that you could hurt me/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>1/2- First line was coo but the punch did punch
I wish I could read faster than the speed you type, so I wouldn’t have to view your verse/
<O:P></O:P>Sit for 12 hours, while you rehearse, there really couldn’t be much worse/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>1/2- Funny and had a nice flow but not very strong
Leave you in a hearse, or a black stretched funeral car/
<O:P></O:P>Anyone on the board wanna know what kind of faker you are?/
<O:P></O:P><O:P></O:P>1/2- You can do better pimpin…
Even strapped wit a gat this Vega rat could never be thug/
<O:P></O:P>So gather around fellaz, let’s give this fool an e-hug/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Funny but not a strong closer.<o:p></o:p>
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24/34= 70.5%
2Face-<o:p></o:p>
Its a bird, its a plane no its me goin against the grounds own dean caine
but his rhymes aint strong enough against this kryptonite--he's slain
1/2- I like how the lines go together but it’s not a strong opener
Leave him in the dark n lonely-- cryin like a lil child wit noone to mingle
this kid is a bitch, he'd get crunched then canned like a shippment of pringles
1/2- Not feelin these but the personal in the second line wil get ya a point
you lost goin against me lil boy, i'll jus leave ya down unda-- like austrailia
only to be found as Mj's lil toy, i guess thats y you'll neva-land-- girly genitalia
2/2- Nice word play bro!
im tryna tell ya, you aint fit for this-- so get ya fat ass grip off-of- them-chips
these aint meant for you steve-- your lyrics aint gators they wont make me shit
1/2- You can do better dawg. Not bad but not strong enough for you.
so sit--cuz wut ur seated on resembles how your verse was brought
its soft, like seat cushions--and "dark" child sumthin like "blank thought"
1/2- Ehh, not workin for me
your caught n hooked by these punches-- like fish for trophies or lunches
c'mon kid im more than u can stomach--your words fall off tha page n plummet
1/2- C’mon dawg, you’re not punchin like normal… you’re makin me feel bad, I know you can do better…
so sub-mit, tap out ni66a u kno damn well you've had enough of it
your rhymes is tired-- so your career will b put to sleep legit
1/2- It’s aight mayn
and i can even put your record up on mephis bleek's forehead
remember that line—
i switched it up to tell you that your rhymes bleak n u might need 4 heads
2/2- I’ll give ya two for that one, keep it up!
cuz before u headed in this you shooda known i'd do my home-work
now its ya fault u gettin schooled-- teachin ya how this noob does a dome-merk
2/2- I like it!
wit lyrical shots thats lettin everyone kno y u aint in c-war
cuz this kid fragile, he'd crumble like a pringle-- so he cant see war
2/2- There ya go mayn, I knew you had them in you… Nice personal
ni66a its funny that only ones that beat u are these c-war soldiers
nothin gonna change here,
i'll jus cough~e in, then a quicc minute your out like a cup of folgers
1/2- Got that filler feel to it…
i usually dont take an inhancement but in your case its closed
tha words bolded out in this battle remind of u-- like mase exposed
1/2- Decent punch but set up wasn’t there
suppose i shood thank you though, but im not a generous person
this ez win coodnt be dun with out your magic--now its lyrical cursed fun
0/2- Damn dawg, why you make me do this. This was a filler brutha…
you ended his career so like karma wut comes around goes around
you left only wit this kra-hazey spic that'll stomp you out like roaches found
1/2- Not workin
if my style was a fad then ni66a your's is a gimmicc
you cant even get heard of--
cuz like stroke victims, you've reached your limit<o:p></o:p>
2/2- I like it, it was a good feed off of what he said in his verse.
your like why ricc flair cant stay out wrestling and he's 70 something
you think you still in the spotlight but your rhymes continue slumping
2/2- There you go fucker… you need more of these!!!!
your lines are like top models missing fashions
and in same ways my last punchline decided to be absent
1/2- huh?
this kid aint XL he pussy, and these lyrics make him twice as wet
you aint battle'n a vet
but the outcome is gonna b jus like wen u battled tha nig nate tekk<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Not a strong closer brutha…<o:p></o:p>
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23/36= 63.8%
VOTE- Pringles<o:p></o:p>
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Basically fellas I’ve seen waaaaaaay better from both of yall. You two are some of the best on the board and in some opinions, the best. I think, no I know yall can do better that this. And DAYUM that shit was long, haha! I just felt to me like ya rushed it because I’m not used to seeing fillers with yall and I say a couple from both of you. All in all, it was a very good battle but that’s only because neither of yall brought you’re A-game… If one of yall had though, the othe woulda been crush. Just my opinion but good job fellas!<o:p></o:p>
krayz1e b1zzy
08-03-2006, 08:30 AM
Pringles-<o:p></o:p>
I spit verbal barrages, your rhymes ‘lamer’ than Christopher Reeve's ‘lower torso’/
<o:p></o:p>By the time this poundings finished you ‘lookin worse’ than ‘Andre 3000's wardrobe’/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>2/2- good opener
Do you have the stamina to battle with me, I wouldna thought so/
<o:p></o:p>You come across as a ‘disabled boxer’, or someone who 'fought slow'/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- alright.flowed better than the punch
Your style is just a ‘fad’, makes less sense than 50 cent screamin out 'hyphy'/
<o:p></o:p>Only reason i allow you to exist on this board, is cuz i want more pictures of your wifey/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>2/2- lol i seen vegas wifey...:thumbup:
Cuz she likes how my rhymes 'cum harder' than ‘Peter North’/
<o:p></o:p>But, you couldn't ‘fuck with me and her’ even if we had 'textual intercourse'/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- alright
When the knockout punch comes, your gonna ‘fall quicker’ than the ‘Nasdaq post 9-11’/
<o:p></o:p>Leave you dazed and confused, speaking in ‘more languages’ than ‘Gloria Estefan’/ (Ess-Teff-En)
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- liked the 1st
I ‘tiger uppercut’ and ‘sonic boom’ on your ‘street fighter’ man/
<o:p></o:p>You best head to ‘ING’ and re-evaluate your ‘retirement plan’/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- it was ok
Cuz i flow with ‘greater pressure’ than a fireman can, kid I’m knockin’ you senseless/
<o:p></o:p>You may be pretty quick, but once I ‘knock off your claw’, you’re defenceless/ (Think, Street Fighter)
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- liked the 2nd
You’re lacking what it takes Vega, just recapping, bitch quit your raps/
<o:p></o:p>Your crowd makes ‘less noise’ than quadriplegics giving ‘soul claps’/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- loved the 2nd
Don’t hold back, I beat you to death with a steel wrench tied up with a shoelace/
<o:p></o:p>Displace your ‘head from your neck’, that’s the real meaning of your 2-face/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>2/2- i really loved this one
I snap necks with a tape deck, bitch have you got a death wish?/
<o:p></o:p>If rapping was ‘invite only’, there’s no way you’d be on the ‘guest list’/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- was ok
Cuz your shit is ‘sloppier’ and more ‘filler’ than a ‘double whopper’/
<o:p></o:p>I’ve seen better ‘bars’ and ‘hooks’ on episodes of ‘American Chopper’/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- really like the 2nd line better
Only way that you will be saved from humility is if you ‘withdrew’/
<o:p></o:p>Cuz I will not sign a ‘cease fire’ like the ‘Arabs versus the Jews’/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2-was ok
Death is impending, for you friend and soon your soul will be ‘ascending’/
<o:p></o:p>Like the ‘U.S budget spending’, it is no use to ‘defend it’/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- was alright
See at the conclusion of this battle, you’ll lose 15 and I’ll gain thirty/
<o:p></o:p>Even if your skills were manifested to infinity, there’s no way that you could hurt me/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2- punch was so so
I wish I could read faster than the speed you type, so I wouldn’t have to view your verse/
<o:p></o:p>Sit for 12 hours, while you rehearse, there really couldn’t be much worse/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2-i liked where u were going
Leave you in a hearse, or a black stretched funeral car/
<o:p></o:p>Anyone on the board wanna know what kind of faker you are?/
<o:p></o:p><o:p></o:p>1/2-
Even strapped wit a gat this Vega rat could never be thug/
<o:p></o:p>So gather around fellaz, let’s give this fool an e-hug/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- not a strong closer.<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>
20/34= 59%
2Face-<o:p></o:p>
Its a bird, its a plane no its me goin against the grounds own dean caine
but his rhymes aint strong enough against this kryptonite--he's slain
1/2- liked the scheme
Leave him in the dark n lonely-- cryin like a lil child wit noone to mingle
this kid is a bitch, he'd get crunched then canned like a shippment of pringles
1/2- was ok
you lost goin against me lil boy, i'll jus leave ya down unda-- like austrailia
only to be found as Mj's lil toy, i guess thats y you'll neva-land-- girly genitalia
2/2- i liked the 2nd line the most
im tryna tell ya, you aint fit for this-- so get ya fat ass grip off-of- them-chips
these aint meant for you steve-- your lyrics aint gators they wont make me shit
1/2- it was alright.
so sit--cuz wut ur seated on resembles how your verse was brought
its soft, like seat cushions--and "dark" child sumthin like "blank thought"
1/2- was ok
your caught n hooked by these punches-- like fish for trophies or lunches
c'mon kid im more than u can stomach--your words fall off tha page n plummet
1/2- probably could be worded better
so sub-mit, tap out ni66a u kno damn well you've had enough of it
your rhymes is tired-- so your career will b put to sleep legit
1/2- It’s aight
and i can even put your record up on mephis bleek's forehead
remember that line—
i switched it up to tell you that your rhymes bleak n u might need 4 heads
2/2- lol ^^ great one
cuz before u headed in this you shooda known i'd do my home-work
now its ya fault u gettin schooled-- teachin ya how this noob does a dome-merk
1/2- it was ok
wit lyrical shots thats lettin everyone kno y u aint in c-war
cuz this kid fragile, he'd crumble like a pringle-- so he cant see war
2/2- good onel
ni66a its funny that only ones that beat u are these c-war soldiers
nothin gonna change here,
i'll jus cough~e in, then a quicc minute your out like a cup of folgers
1/2- it was good…
i usually dont take an inhancement but in your case its closed
tha words bolded out in this battle remind of u-- like mase exposed
1/2- ok
suppose i shood thank you though, but im not a generous person
this ez win coodnt be dun with out your magic--now its lyrical cursed fun
0/2- probably could been worded better
you ended his career so like karma wut comes around goes around
you left only wit this kra-hazey spic that'll stomp you out like roaches found
1/2- ok
if my style was a fad then ni66a your's is a gimmicc
you cant even get heard of--
cuz like stroke victims, you've reached your limit<o:p></o:p>
2/2-i liked the 2nd
your like why ricc flair cant stay out wrestling and he's 70 something
you think you still in the spotlight but your rhymes continue slumping
2/2-
your lines are like top models missing fashions
and in same ways my last punchline decided to be absent
1/2- lol i got lost on the 2nd line
this kid aint XL he pussy, and these lyrics make him twice as wet
you aint battle'n a vet
but the outcome is gonna b jus like wen u battled tha nig nate tekk<o:p></o:p>
1/2- so so
vega--61%
ok its like this vega gets the win , i felt his punches a lil more but i also love pringles flow.. in my opinion some of the fillers did what they were supposed to do...fill or support the punch in the next line but then there were some that didnt in each verse..that just the way i feel nothin factual just an opinion good battle on both parts
Enzo R.
08-03-2006, 08:48 AM
VEGA
Its a bird, its a plane no its me goin against the grounds own dean caine
but his rhymes aint strong enough against this kryptonite--he's slain
da dean caine line is funny, but the follow through line coulda flowed better, nice opener overall but the follow through culda hit harder...2/3...
Leave him in the dark n lonely-- cryin like a lil child wit noone to mingle
this kid is a bitch, he'd get crunched then canned like a shippment of pringles
a whole bar with nuttin but nameplay, not that's how the get personal...nice job...3/3...
you lost goin against me lil boy, i'll jus leave ya down unda-- like austrailia
only to be found as Mj's lil toy, i guess thats y you'll neva-land-- girly genitalia
lmao...usin his location as a personal was solid, and the follow through had humor written allover...it...already written...yeah....3/3...
im tryna tell ya, you aint fit for this-- so get ya fat ass grip off-of- them-chips
these aint meant for you steve-- your lyrics aint gators they wont make me shit
you had the lines going, but ended it off weak...but the creativity was there so that deserves a solid...2/3...
so sit--cuz wut ur seated on resembles how your verse was brought
its soft, like seat cushions--and "dark" child sumthin like "blank thought"
ah man...it was pretty good til that seat cushion part came in...coulda been more offensive, da nameplay was alright...1/3...
your caught n hooked by these punches-- like fish for trophies or lunches
c'mon kid im more than u can stomach--your words fall off tha page n plummet
concept wise, and flow, it was nice...follow-up culda hit harder...2/3...
so sub-mit, tap out ni66a u kno damn well you've had enough of it
your rhymes is tired-- so your career will b put to sleep legit
came off creative, but the rhyme scheme was messed up in the end...1/3...
and i can even put your record up on mephis bleek's forehead
remember that line—
i switched it up to tell you that your rhymes bleak n u might need 4 heads
tryna get personal, that got a point, but the whole switching up an opponents line is almost similar to feeding...1/3...
cuz before u headed in this you shooda known i'd do my home-work
now its ya fault u gettin schooled-- teachin ya how this noob does a dome-merk
meh...looked good, flow was nice, but the "dome-merk" part comes out forced and lacks some sense because of it...2/3...
wit lyrical shots thats lettin everyone kno y u aint in c-war
cuz this kid fragile, he'd crumble like a pringle-- so he cant see war
ehh, two points because u mixed two personals in there, but the delivery was weak...2/3...
ni66a its funny that only ones that beat u are these c-war soldiers
nothin gonna change here,
i'll jus cough~e in, then a quicc minute your out like a cup of folgers
i'll giv ya the personal attempt, but the follow up was very weak delivery, sounded forced...1/3...
i usually dont take an inhancement but in your case its closed
tha words bolded out in this battle remind of u-- like mase exposed
nice concept, follow-up was a bit forced IMO...coulda flowed more smoother with the wording...2/3...
suppose i shood thank you though, but im not a generous person
this ez win coodnt be dun with out your magic--now its lyrical cursed fun
i liked the whole concept, u deserve the full score with dat personal added in the follow-thru...3/3...
you ended his career so like karma wut comes around goes around
you left only wit this kra-hazey spic that'll stomp you out like roaches found
you mixed the concepts together, nice approach...the personal was fine, first line coulda been better...2/3...
if my style was a fad then ni66a your's is a gimmicc
you cant even get heard of--
cuz like stroke victims, you've reached your limit
nice mixing of concepts, nice delivery, flowed right...nice bar...3/3...
your like why ricc flair cant stay out wrestling and he's 70 something
you think you still in the spotlight but your rhymes continue slumping
concept was nice, but u forced the hell out off the first line...second line came out good...2/3...
your lines are like top models missing fashions
and in same ways my last punchline decided to be absent
i get it...pretty good concept, not too stretched of lines so it sounded well...culda set it up better though...2/3...
this kid aint XL he pussy, and these lyrics make him twice as wet
you aint battle'n a vet
but the outcome is gonna b jus like wen u battled tha nig nate tekk
great personal, set up culd be better, but overall i think this closer went real with the whole verse...3/3...
37/54 = 68%
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Pringles
I spit verbal barrages, your rhymes ‘lamer’ than Christopher Reeve's ‘lower torso’/<o:p></o:p>
By the time this poundings finished you ‘lookin worse’ than ‘Andre 3000's wardrobe’/
<o:p>"i spit verbal barrages" - that culd be left out...the christopher reeves line is a bit played of a concept, funny though, u delivered it well...next line was funnier..nice delivery...ok opener...2/3...</o:p>
Do you have the stamina to battle with me, I wouldna thought so/<o:p></o:p>
You come across as a ‘disabled boxer’, or someone who 'fought slow'/
ehh...concept culda been used more creatively...1/3...<o:p></o:p>
Your style is just a ‘fad’, makes less sense than 50 cent screamin out 'hyphy'/<o:p></o:p>
Only reason i allow you to exist on this board, is cuz i want more pictures of your wifey/
ah man, great follow-thru, but the first line was kinda feeding, i dunno if dats allowed, but still...nice freakin 2nd line though...2/3...<o:p></o:p>
Cuz she likes how my rhymes 'cum harder' than ‘Peter North’/<o:p></o:p>
But, you couldn't ‘fuck with me and her’ even if we had 'textual intercourse'/
the talkin about opponents girl thing...i usually dont really give too many points to cuz too many heads use it...but the second line was funny...1/3...<o:p></o:p>
When the knockout punch comes, your gonna ‘fall quicker’ than the ‘Nasdaq post 9-11’/<o:p></o:p>
Leave you dazed and confused, speaking in ‘more languages’ than ‘Gloria Estefan’/ (Ess-Teff-En)
a bit basic in both lines, coulda set it up and delivered it better...overall a 1/3...
I ‘tiger uppercut’ and ‘sonic boom’ on your ‘street fighter’ man/<o:p></o:p>
You best head to ‘ING’ and re-evaluate your ‘retirement plan’/
haha, great delivery, funny concept against his identity, love da second line...3/3...<o:p></o:p>
Cuz i flow with ‘greater pressure’ than a fireman can, kid I’m knockin’ you senseless/<o:p></o:p>
You may be pretty quick, but once I ‘knock off your claw’, you’re defenceless/ (Think, Street Fighter)
first line culda led better into the follow-thru...i like the personal attempt though...2/3...<o:p></o:p>
You’re lacking what it takes Vega, just recapping, bitch quit your raps/<o:p></o:p>
Your crowd makes ‘less noise’ than quadriplegics giving ‘soul claps’/
first line flowed great, but there wasnt anythin dat wuld make a great set up for the second, which was a funny ass punch i wuld say...2/3...<o:p></o:p>
Don’t hold back, I beat you to death with a steel wrench tied up with a shoelace/<o:p></o:p>
Displace your ‘head from your neck’, that’s the real meaning of your 2-face/
first line aint hav anything to it...need sum more spice..second was a nice personal attempt, but not done quite creatively as it culda been...1/3...<o:p></o:p>
I snap necks with a tape deck, bitch have you got a death wish?/<o:p></o:p>
If rapping was ‘invite only’, there’s no way you’d be on the ‘guest list’/
lol, i like dat follow-thru...first line was ehh, good for the flow...2/3...<o:p></o:p>
Cuz your shit is ‘sloppier’ and more ‘filler’ than a ‘double whopper’/<o:p></o:p>
I’ve seen better ‘bars’ and ‘hooks’ on episodes of ‘American Chopper’/
<o:p>lmao...a bit basic delivery, but u delivered the punches good enough for a solid...2/3...</o:p>
Only way that you will be saved from humility is if you ‘withdrew’/<o:p></o:p>
Cuz I will not sign a ‘cease fire’ like the ‘Arabs versus the Jews’/
first line really didnt HIT like it shoulda, and second wasnt really a direct attack at him...1/3...<o:p></o:p>
Death is impending, for you friend and soon your soul will be ‘ascending’/<o:p></o:p>
Like the ‘U.S budget spending’, it is no use to ‘defend it’/
lovin da flow to dis bar...both had multis, delivery was great, no complaint...3/3...
See at the conclusion of this battle, you’ll lose 15 and I’ll gain thirty/<o:p></o:p>
Even if your skills were manifested to infinity, there’s no way that you could hurt me/
not much punch that would hit hard...not a filler, but just not stong a punch...1/3...<o:p></o:p>
I wish I could read faster than the speed you type, so I wouldn’t have to view your verse/<o:p></o:p>
Sit for 12 hours, while you rehearse, there really couldn’t be much worse/
i see some lazyiness man...lol...so far, the flow is nice, but the punches are just not hittin...1/3...
Leave you in a hearse, or a black stretched funeral car/<o:p></o:p>
Anyone on the board wanna know what kind of faker you are?/
nah man...first was filler, second was filler...0/3...
Even strapped wit a gat this Vega rat could never be thug/<o:p></o:p>
So gather around fellaz, let’s give this fool an e-hug/
the follow-thru shulda hit harder...but the concept of thug and e-thug kinda thing was creative...2/3...
27/51 = 52%
VOTE : VEGA...
overall, hell of a battle, i think wat really hurt pringle was he started to lose it at the end, there was a set that jus didnt delivery his punches, if any, well...if he kept it consistent like where he started, he woulda ended up victorious...i just think vega came all-in-all more aggressive in his verse...his wording, delivery, was stronger and more offensive compared to pringle's...great battle guys....and good luck...
~Longway~JNC Records
08-03-2006, 08:51 AM
overall, hell of a battle, i think wat really hurt pringle was he started to lose it at the end, there was a set that jus didnt delivery his punches, if any, well...if he kept it consistent like where he started, he woulda ended up victorious...i just think vega came all-in-all more aggressive in his verse...his wording, delivery, was stronger and more offensive compared to pringle's...great battle guys....and good luck...
you are part of the ladder now your vote will count now
Enzo R.
08-03-2006, 08:56 AM
oh sorry about that...forgot about the rules...if there's any problem, u guys can change it...thanks though...
Vega/Set
08-03-2006, 11:09 AM
2-2 keep votin fellas
bad habitz
08-03-2006, 11:20 AM
PRINGZ-
I spit verbal barrages, your rhymes ‘lamer’ than Christopher Reeve's ‘lower torso’/<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
By the time this poundings finished you ‘lookin worse’ than ‘Andre 3000's wardrobe’/<o:p></o:p>
1/2 LINE WASN'T BAD JUST NOT MUCH OF AN OPENER
Do you have the stamina to battle with me, I wouldna thought so/<o:p></o:p>
You come across as a ‘disabled boxer’, or someone who 'fought slow'/<o:p></o:p>
1/2 AGAIN NOT TOO BAD BUT DAYUM PRINGZ WHERE'S THE HEAT
Your style is just a ‘fad’, makes less sense than 50 cent screamin out 'hyphy'/<o:p></o:p>
Only reason i allow you to exist on this board, is cuz i want more pictures of your wifey/<o:p></o:p>
2/2 HAHAHAHA....NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKIN ABOUT I LOVED THIS LINE....YOU DIRTY FOR ATTACKIN HIS WIFE(SHE'S HOT)LOL
Cuz she likes how my rhymes 'cum harder' than ‘Peter North’/<o:p></o:p>
But, you couldn't ‘fuck with me and her’ even if we had 'textual intercourse'/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p></o:p>1/2 NICE TRY SNEAKIN THAT ONE IN PRINGZ....BUT SOUNDED MORE AS AN APPROACH TO HIS LADIEH
When the knockout punch comes, your gonna ‘fall quicker’ than the ‘Nasdaq post 9-11’/<o:p></o:p>
Leave you dazed and confused, speaking in ‘more languages’ than ‘Gloria Estefan’/ (Ess-Teff-En)<o:p></o:p>
2/2 SETUP AND PUNCH I LIKED IT.....GOOD STUFF
I ‘tiger uppercut’ and ‘sonic boom’ on your ‘street fighter’ man/<o:p></o:p>
You best head to ‘ING’ and re-evaluate your ‘retirement plan’/<o:p></o:p>
2/2 ATTACKING HIS AVATAR....I LIKE IT.....
Cuz i flow with ‘greater pressure’ than a fireman can, kid I’m knockin’ you senseless/<o:p></o:p>
You may be pretty quick, but once I ‘knock off your claw’, you’re defenceless/ (Think, Street Fighter)
2/2 HAHAHAHA.....I LIKE THAT ONE...(I ALWAYS HAD TO KNOCK OFF THE CLAW TO WIN...LOL)
You’re lacking what it takes Vega, just recapping, bitch quit your raps/<o:p></o:p>
Your crowd makes ‘less noise’ than quadriplegics giving ‘soul claps’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p></o:p>2/2 I LIKE I LIKE.....THE THOUGHT OF THAT MAKES ME LAUGH
Don’t hold back, I beat you to death with a steel wrench tied up with a shoelace/<o:p></o:p>
Displace your ‘head from your neck’, that’s the real meaning of your 2-face/<o:p></o:p>
2/2 OOOH....THE NAMEPLAY WAS NICE....
I snap necks with a tape deck, bitch have you got a death wish?/<o:p></o:p>
If rapping was ‘invite only’, there’s no way you’d be on the ‘guest list’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p></o:p>1/2 I GET IT....JUST DIDNT HIT TOO HARD
Cuz your shit is ‘sloppier’ and more ‘filler’ than a ‘double whopper’/<o:p></o:p>
I’ve seen better ‘bars’ and ‘hooks’ on episodes of ‘American Chopper’/<o:p></o:p>
1/2...."CUZ" .....YOU REALLY DIDNT NEED THAT...KINDA WEAKENED THE WHOLE CONCEPT
Only way that you will be saved from humility is if you ‘withdrew’/<o:p></o:p>
Cuz I will not sign a ‘cease fire’ like the ‘Arabs versus the Jews’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p></o:p>1/2....ONCE AGAIN THE "CUZ" THING HURT YA
Death is impending, for you friend and soon your soul will be ‘ascending’/<o:p></o:p>
Like the ‘U.S budget spending’, it is no use to ‘defend it’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p></o:p>2/2 LINE WASNT GREAT BUT GOOD ENOUGH TO GET THE FULL HIT
See at the conclusion of this battle, you’ll lose 15 and I’ll gain thirty/<o:p></o:p>
Even if your skills were manifested to infinity, there’s no way that you could hurt me/<o:p></o:p>
2/2 NICE....USING THE LADDER TO HIT HIM....I LIKE IT
I wish I could read faster than the speed you type, so I wouldn’t have to view your verse/<o:p></o:p>
Sit for 12 hours, while you rehearse, there really couldn’t be much worse/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p></o:p>1/2 DAMMIT THE FIRST LINE WAS NICE.....BUT THE SECOND LINE COULDA OPENED THIS BATTLE UP WIDE HAD YOU COME HARDER
Leave you in a hearse, or a black stretched funeral car/<o:p></o:p>
Anyone on the board wanna know what kind of faker you are?/<o:p></o:p>
1/2 HMMMM.....I'M KINDA GETTIN...JUST NOT REALLY FEELIN IT....MORE OF A FILLER
Even strapped wit a gat this Vega rat could never be thug/<o:p></o:p>
So gather around fellaz, let’s give this fool an e-hug/
1/2 HUMOR IS THERE JUST WEAK FOR A CLOSER
25/32=78%
VEGA
Its a bird, its a plane no its me goin against the grounds own dean caine
but his rhymes aint strong enough against this kryptonite--he's slain
1/2 NOT REALLY FEELIN IT AS AN OPENER
Leave him in the dark n lonely-- cryin like a lil child wit noone to mingle
this kid is a bitch, he'd get crunched then canned like a shippment of pringles
2/2 LOVIN THE NAMEPLAY
you lost goin against me lil boy, i'll jus leave ya down unda-- like austrailia
only to be found as Mj's lil toy, i guess thats y you'll neva-land-- girly genitalia
2/2 HAHAHA...FUNNY GUY
im tryna tell ya, you aint fit for this-- so get ya fat ass grip off-of- them-chips
these aint meant for you steve-- your lyrics aint gators they wont make me shit
1/2 I DONT GET IT TO BE HONEST
so sit--cuz wut ur seated on resembles how your verse was brought
its soft, like seat cushions--and "dark" child sumthin like "blank thought"
1/2 JUST LIKE I TOLD PRING "CUZ" YOU DIDNT NEED IT
your caught n hooked by these punches-- like fish for trophies or lunches
c'mon kid im more than u can stomach--your words fall off tha page n plummet
2/2 LOVIN THIS LINE FLOW AND PUNCH...NICE
so sub-mit, tap out ni66a u kno damn well you've had enough of it
your rhymes is tired-- so your career will b put to sleep legit
1/2 WASNT TOO EFFECTIVE
and i can even put your record up on mephis bleek's forehead
remember that line—
i switched it up to tell you that your rhymes bleak n u might need 4 heads
1/2 CONCEPT IS THERE JUST NOT EFFECTIVE ENOUGH...IMO
cuz before u headed in this you shooda known i'd do my home-work
now its ya fault u gettin schooled-- teachin ya how this noob does a dome-merk
1/2 "CUZ" WEAKENED THE PUNCH
wit lyrical shots thats lettin everyone kno y u aint in c-war
cuz this kid fragile, he'd crumble like a pringle-- so he cant see war
1/2 AGAIN THE "CUZ" THING
ni66a its funny that only ones that beat u are these c-war soldiers
nothin gonna change here,
i'll jus cough~e in, then a quicc minute your out like a cup of folgers
2/2 BARELY THOUGH....THE PERSONAL STRENGTHENED THIS ONE
i usually dont take an inhancement but in your case its closed
tha words bolded out in this battle remind of u-- like mase exposed
1/2....HUH....
suppose i shood thank you though, but im not a generous person
this ez win coodnt be dun with out your magic--now its lyrical cursed fun
1/2 THE FLOW AND RHYME SHEME...DIDNT SEEM SO TOUGH
you ended his career so like karma wut comes around goes around
you left only wit this kra-hazey spic that'll stomp you out like roaches found
2/2 MAINLY FOR THE THOUGHT OF IT BEING A PERSONAL
if my style was a fad then ni66a your's is a gimmicc
you cant even get heard of--
cuz like stroke victims, you've reached your limit
2/3....2ND LINE WAS A FILLER THE REST I GOT IT
your like why ricc flair cant stay out wrestling and he's 70 something
you think you still in the spotlight but your rhymes continue slumping
2/2....I LIKE IT...PERSONAL...IMO
your lines are like top models missing fashions
and in same ways my last punchline decided to be absent
2/2...I GET WHERE YOU'RE GOIN WITH IT....
this kid aint XL he pussy, and these lyrics make him twice as wet
you aint battle'n a vet
but the outcome is gonna b jus like wen u battled tha nig nate tekk
2/2 NICE CLOSER WITH THE PERSONAL.....
27/37=73%
VOTE-PRINGZ
GOOD BATTLE FELLA'S ENJOYED IT....VERY CLOSE IMO....KEEP THE HEAT COMIN...BUT MAYUN....IF THIS WAS ONE LINE WINS IT ALL....THAT NAMEPLAY LINE BY VEGA....KILLED IT....
Vega/Set
08-03-2006, 11:32 AM
dont kno which one u talkin bout but thanx for voting..3-2 prings up
and for future voters that dont kno......
suppose i shood thank you though, but im not a generous person
this ez win coodnt be dun with out your magic--now its lyrical cursed fun
that line is considered a personal if u read wut i wrote in my explantions u wood see that, so imo its really retarded to have 0/2 wen we all discussed and stressed how personals help win the battles
aLiAs R.I.P.08
08-03-2006, 02:04 PM
Dark Child
I spit verbal barrages, your rhymes ‘lamer’ than Christopher Reeve's ‘lower torso’/<o:p></o:p>
By the time this poundings finished you ‘lookin worse’ than ‘Andre 3000's wardrobe’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 - Complete Punch, Humor, Flow, 2 Punches
Do you have the stamina to battle with me, I wouldna thought so/<o:p></o:p>
You come across as a ‘disabled boxer’, or someone who 'fought slow'/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 - Line 2 Line association, weak punch and setup
Your style is just a ‘fad’, makes less sense than 50 cent screamin out 'hyphy'/<o:p></o:p>
Only reason i allow you to exist on this board, is cuz i want more pictures of your wifey/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 - Complete Punch, Personal, Humor, Nice Set-up
Cuz she likes how my rhymes 'cum harder' than ‘Peter North’/<o:p></o:p>
But, you couldn't ‘fuck with me and her’ even if we had 'textual intercourse'/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 - First line = Weak, Second = Humor/Attempted Punch
When the knockout punch comes, your gonna ‘fall quicker’ than the ‘Nasdaq post 9-11’/<o:p></o:p>
Leave you dazed and confused, speaking in ‘more languages’ than ‘Gloria Estefan’/ (Ess-Teff-En)<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 - First Punch gets Point, Second = Forced, Weak
I ‘tiger uppercut’ and ‘sonic boom’ on your ‘street fighter’ man/<o:p></o:p>
You best head to ‘ING’ and re-evaluate your ‘retirement plan’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 - Complete Punch, Personal, Set-Up
Cuz i flow with ‘greater pressure’ than a fireman can, kid I’m knockin’ you senseless/<o:p></o:p>
You may be pretty quick, but once I ‘knock off your claw’, you’re defenceless/ (Think, Street Fighter)<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 - Personal Attempt, 1st Line = Weak Attempt
You’re lacking what it takes Vega, just recapping, bitch quit your raps/<o:p></o:p>
Your crowd makes ‘less noise’ than quadriplegics giving ‘soul claps’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 - Humor, Flow, Set-up, Affective Punch
Don’t hold back, I beat you to death with a steel wrench tied up with a shoelace/<o:p></o:p>
Displace your ‘head from your neck’, that’s the real meaning of your 2-face/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 - Weak Setup, Personal Attempt gets Point
I snap necks with a tape deck, bitch have you got a death wish?/<o:p></o:p>
If rapping was ‘invite only’, there’s no way you’d be on the ‘guest list’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 - First line = Filler, Second = Strong Punch, Nice Set-up
Cuz your shit is ‘sloppier’ and more ‘filler’ than a ‘double whopper’/<o:p></o:p>
I’ve seen better ‘bars’ and ‘hooks’ on episodes of ‘American Chopper’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 - Complete Punch, Humor, Battle Worthy Second Line
Only way that you will be saved from humility is if you ‘withdrew’/<o:p></o:p>
Cuz I will not sign a ‘cease fire’ like the ‘Arabs versus the Jews’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 - Punch Attempts gets point
Death is impending, for you friend and soon your soul will be ‘ascending’/<o:p></o:p>
Like the ‘U.S budget spending’, it is no use to ‘defend it’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 - Complete Punch, Flow, Line 2 Line Association, Creativity
See at the conclusion of this battle, you’ll lose 15 and I’ll gain thirty/<o:p></o:p>
Even if your skills were manifested to infinity, there’s no way that you could hurt me/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 - Attempted Punch gets point, Weak Set-up
I wish I could read faster than the speed you type, so I wouldn’t have to view your verse/<o:p></o:p>
Sit for 12 hours, while you rehearse, there really couldn’t be much worse/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 - Attempted Punch gets point
Leave you in a hearse, or a black stretched funeral car/<o:p></o:p>
Anyone on the board wanna know what kind of faker you are?/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>0/2 - Both Lines = Filler
Even strapped wit a gat this Vega rat could never be thug/<o:p></o:p>
So gather around fellaz, let’s give this fool an e-hug/
1/2 - Weak Closer, Attempted Punch gets point
22/34 = 64%
2Face
<o:p></o:p>
Its a bird, its a plane no its me goin against the grounds own dean caine
but his rhymes aint strong enough against this kryptonite--he's slain
1/2 - Weak Opener, Bad Set-up, Weak Attempt
Leave him in the dark n lonely-- cryin like a lil child wit noone to mingle
this kid is a bitch, he'd get crunched then canned like a shippment of pringles
1/2 - Attempted Personal gets point, Weak and Forced Nameplay
you lost goin against me lil boy, i'll jus leave ya down unda-- like austrailia
only to be found as Mj's lil toy, i guess thats y you'll neva-land-- girly genitalia
2/2 - Complete Punch, Humor, Personal, Weak Wordplay
im tryna tell ya, you aint fit for this-- so get ya fat ass grip off-of- them-chips
these aint meant for you steve-- your lyrics aint gators they wont make me shit
1/2 - Attempted Personal gets point, Weak Wordplay, Forced Set-up
so sit--cuz wut ur seated on resembles how your verse was brought
its soft, like seat cushions--and "dark" child sumthin like "blank thought"
1/2 - Forced Punch, Weak Set-up, Attempted Nameplay gets point
your caught n hooked by these punches-- like fish for trophies or lunches
c'mon kid im more than u can stomach--your words fall off tha page n plummet
1/2 - First Line gets point for Flow/Set-up, Second Line = Weak
so sub-mit, tap out ni66a u kno damn well you've had enough of it
your rhymes is tired-- so your career will b put to sleep legit
1/2 - Attempted Punch gets point, Bad Rhyme Scheme
and i can even put your record up on mephis bleek's forehead
remember that line—
i switched it up to tell you that your rhymes bleak n u might need 4 heads
1/2 - Forced Personal, Attempted Personal gets point
cuz before u headed in this you shooda known i'd do my home-work
now its ya fault u gettin schooled-- teachin ya how this noob does a dome-merk
1/2 - 2nd Line = Weak Ender, Point for Attempted Punch and Line 2 Line Association
wit lyrical shots thats lettin everyone kno y u aint in c-war
cuz this kid fragile, he'd crumble like a pringle-- so he cant see war
2/2 - Complete Punch, Line 2 Line Association, Weak Nameplay (not too fond of it since Sal used the "see-war" already, but i got to give points fairly)
ni66a its funny that only ones that beat u are these c-war soldiers
nothin gonna change here,
i'll jus cough~e in, then a quicc minute your out like a cup of folgers
1/2 - Attempted Punch gets point (the first line is actually saying that Pringle is good pointing out he only got beat by these people, not really attacking him)
i usually dont take an inhancement but in your case its closed
tha words bolded out in this battle remind of u-- like mase exposed
1/2 - Forced Punch in 2nd Line, First line = :thumbup:
suppose i shood thank you though, but im not a generous person
this ez win coodnt be dun with out your magic--now its lyrical cursed fun
1/2 - Forced Personal and Punch Attempt ("Person" and "Cursed-Fun" is forced rhyme scheme)
you ended his career so like karma wut comes around goes around
you left only wit this kra-hazey spic that'll stomp you out like roaches found
1/2 - Weak Name/Wordplay and Personal
if my style was a fad then ni66a your's is a gimmicc
you cant even get heard of--
cuz like stroke victims, you've reached your limit<o:p></o:p>
1/2 - Feeding Deducts point, 2nd Line = :thumbup: , (Good feed sik? He's above Pring, he shouldn't even be allowed to feed)
your like why ricc flair cant stay out wrestling and he's 70 something
you think you still in the spotlight but your rhymes continue slumping
1/2 - First Line = Forced Flow/Punch, 2nd Line gets point
your lines are like top models missing fashions
and in same ways my last punchline decided to be absent
1/2 - Weak punch attempt and set-up
this kid aint XL he pussy, and these lyrics make him twice as wet
you aint battle'n a vet
but the outcome is gonna b jus like wen u battled tha nig nate tekk<o:p></o:p>
1/2 - Weak personal attempt, Personal gets point
20/36 = 55%
Vote - Pringle XL
***wat's going on guys??? not the best battle from either of you, you both shall get punished for not ripping up those verse, as a matter of fact, i will purposely be lazy with my next battle :)
Vega/Set
08-03-2006, 02:31 PM
4-2 prings
K.Battlezone
08-03-2006, 03:33 PM
spit verbal barrages, your rhymes ‘lamer’ than Christopher Reeve's ‘lower torso’/<o:p></o:p>
By the time this poundings finished you ‘lookin worse’ than ‘Andre 3000's wardrobe’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 it was all right nothing to see here folks..
Do you have the stamina to battle with me, I wouldna thought so/<o:p></o:p>
You come across as a ‘disabled boxer’, or someone who 'fought slow'/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>ahahahha 2/2 great lines
Your style is just a ‘fad’, makes less sense than 50 cent screamin out 'hyphy'/<o:p></o:p>
Only reason i allow you to exist on this board, is cuz i want more pictures of your wifey/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 , I would've rather said Bob Marley instead of 50 but aight.. and the wifey deal was sweet
Cuz she likes how my rhymes 'cum harder' than ‘Peter North’/<o:p></o:p>
But, you couldn't ‘fuck with me and her’ even if we had 'textual intercourse'/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 You ended the first with peter north and then said fuck with me and her yada yada and textual intercourse is where u failed..
When the knockout punch comes, your gonna ‘fall quicker’ than the ‘Nasdaq post 9-11’/<o:p></o:p>
Leave you dazed and confused, speaking in ‘more languages’ than ‘Gloria Estefan’/ (Ess-Teff-En)<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 I t hink Gloria can speak three languages..
I ‘tiger uppercut’ and ‘sonic boom’ on your ‘street fighter’ man/<o:p></o:p>
You best head to ‘ING’ and re-evaluate your ‘retirement plan’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 not really feelin it
Cuz i flow with ‘greater pressure’ than a fireman can, kid I’m knockin’ you senseless/<o:p></o:p>
You may be pretty quick, but once I ‘knock off your claw’, you’re defenceless/ (Think, Street Fighter)<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 real good wordplay (thanks for the parentheses .. never would've guessed :rofl:)
You’re lacking what it takes Vega, just recapping, bitch quit your raps/<o:p></o:p>
Your crowd makes ‘less noise’ than quadriplegics giving ‘soul claps’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 :rofl:
Don’t hold back, I beat you to death with a steel wrench tied up with a shoelace/<o:p></o:p>
Displace your ‘head from your neck’, that’s the real meaning of your 2-face/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 very nice ..love em both
I snap necks with a tape deck, bitch have you got a death wish?/<o:p></o:p>
If rapping was ‘invite only’, there’s no way you’d be on the ‘guest list’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 DAMMNN...
Cuz your shit is ‘sloppier’ and more ‘filler’ than a ‘double whopper’/<o:p></o:p>
I’ve seen better ‘bars’ and ‘hooks’ on episodes of ‘American Chopper’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 If you're gonna insult him do something dirty like saying u seen better bars in an old rusty motorcycle or some shit
Only way that you will be saved from humility is if you ‘withdrew’/<o:p></o:p>
Cuz I will not sign a ‘cease fire’ like the ‘Arabs versus the Jews’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 .. really all filler
Death is impending, for you friend and soon your soul will be ‘ascending’/<o:p></o:p>
Like the ‘U.S budget spending’, it is no use to ‘defend it’/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2 again filler
See at the conclusion of this battle, you’ll lose 15 and I’ll gain thirty/<o:p></o:p>
Even if your skills were manifested to infinity, there’s no way that you could hurt me/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>2/2 very nice.. again going back to that bars line.. could've done something like this
I wish I could read faster than the speed you type, so I wouldn’t have to view your verse/<o:p></o:p>
Sit for 12 hours, while you rehearse, there really couldn’t be much worse/<o:p></o:p>
<o:p> </o:p>1/2
Leave you in a hearse, or a black stretched funeral car/<o:p></o:p>
Anyone on the board wanna know what kind of faker you are?/<o:p></o:p><o:p>
0 quit with the fillers pringle
</o:p> Even strapped wit a gat this Vega rat could never be thug/<o:p></o:p>
So gather around fellaz, let’s give this fool an e-hug/
1/2 first line was ok but this was the ending aka KILL him.. your ending was horrible sorry
23/34
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Its a bird, its a plane no its me goin against the grounds own dean caine
but his rhymes aint strong enough against this kryptonite--he's slain
2/2 nice opener
Leave him in the dark n lonely-- cryin like a lil child wit noone to mingle
this kid is a bitch, he'd get crunched then canned like a shippment of pringles
1/2 second line is real good
you lost goin against me lil boy, i'll jus leave ya down unda-- like austrailia
only to be found as Mj's lil toy, i guess thats y you'll neva-land-- girly genitalia
2/2 lovely !
im tryna tell ya, you aint fit for this-- so get ya fat ass grip off-of- them-chips
these aint meant for you steve-- your lyrics aint gators they wont make me shit
0 this makes absolutely no sense
so sit--cuz wut ur seated on resembles how your verse was brought
its soft, like seat cushions--and "dark" child sumthin like "blank thought"
0 again no sense
your caught n hooked by these punches-- like fish for trophies or lunches
c'mon kid im more than u can stomach--your words fall off tha page n plummet
1/2 started off ok ended poorly
so sub-mit, tap out ni66a u kno damn well you've had enough of it
your rhymes is tired-- so your career will b put to sleep legit
1/2 seems like you couldn't find anything to rhyme with "of it"
and i can even put your record up on mephis bleek's forehead
remember that line—
i switched it up to tell you that your rhymes bleak n u might need 4 heads
1/2 it was aight
cuz before u headed in this you shooda known i'd do my home-work
now its ya fault u gettin schooled-- teachin ya how this noob does a dome-merk
1/2 now u'r just making up words but blaming him for losing is very nice
wit lyrical shots thats lettin everyone kno y u aint in c-war
cuz this kid fragile, he'd crumble like a pringle-- so he cant see war
2/2 both lines very hot
ni66a its funny that only ones that beat u are these c-war soldiers
nothin gonna change here,
i'll jus cough~e in, then a quicc minute your out like a cup of folgers
0 didn't make sense cuz folgers peps u up
i usually dont take an inhancement but in your case its closed
tha words bolded out in this battle remind of u-- like mase exposed
1/2 it was aight.. last line sealed it
suppose i shood thank you though, but im not a generous person
this ez win coodnt be dun with out your magic--now its lyrical cursed fun
0 what was that ?? seemed forced.. I would've said lyrical cursin. or some shit
you ended his career so like karma wut comes around goes around
you left only wit this kra-hazey spic that'll stomp you out like roaches found
1/2 very nice wordplay but the hazey part was a bit forced
if my style was a fad then ni66a your's is a gimmicc
you cant even get heard of--
cuz like stroke victims, you've reached your limit
1/2 started ok
your like why ricc flair cant stay out wrestling and he's 70 something
you think you still in the spotlight but your rhymes continue slumping
2/2 Ric Flair : WHOOO
your lines are like top models missing fashions
and in same ways my last punchline decided to be absent
0*buzzer noise*
this kid aint XL he pussy, and these lyrics make him twice as wet
you aint battle'n a vet
but the outcome is gonna b jus like wen u battled tha nig nate tekk
2/2 it was pretty good but instead of pussy i would've said " dis kint ain't xl.. he's a petite at best"
18/36
OK let me go ahead and go up and count my shit
Basically Pringle came hard and for some reason Vega didn't come at all.. Vote for pringle..
Vega/Set
08-03-2006, 03:44 PM
....pringles gets the win
~Longway~JNC Records
08-03-2006, 03:58 PM
nice battle both of you -- points have been updated
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