Winner<------------------Krayz1e B1zzy vs. Felix-------------->Scar

[Vega/Set]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started

Felix you are lower on the ladder then Kray Bizz so you go first

you have 48 hours to reply

[Felix Hernandez]

Alright.

Just on checking a few things real quick before work, I'll be back home about 9 hours from now. I'll drop mine then.

[Felix Hernandez]

I hate Macy's day, and I shit on parade's/
I'll have you fucked like Brokeback, leave you stricken with AIDS/
I'll leave your ass trampled by bulls with no legs/
I'm Magic's Showtime you're Chicago with no MJ/
Kid with no Play, it takes you a week just to rhyme for a day/
I say what I mean and I mean what I say/
You're rhymes are so fruity Elton John thinks that you're gay/
You're a paper EMCEE, just a puppet on a string/
You're Lil Wayne's career if he never said "BLING"/
Your pilot light is not lit/
The filament in your lyrics is spent/
You burned out like a candle with no wick/
After it dripped, wax and flame onto the carpet/
In your shitty ass roach infested apartment/
Now that's it, bitch, it's time to get at you/
My 9 I'll spit at you, my dog's I'll sick at you/
We can battle all day and just jaw with the tough talk/
Or we can take it to the streets and you can lay in the chalk/
You look like a "Queen", that's why I'm lettin' my gun bust/
And my slugs never miss so "another one bites the dust"/
I'm Snidely Whiplash, leave you taped to the tracks of a train/
My rhymes are venomous like their Snakes on a Plane/
Just call me Sam Jackson bitch it's 187/
I'll pull the trigger for you just so I can get to Heaven/
I'm not P. Diddy but you're welcome to "Hate Me"/
I'll choke you so hard your breath will escape thee/
And when I see that your body is startin' to twitch/
I'll cut it all up and then tie it to my tow hitch/
Drag you down the road like the black kid in Georgia/
You fucked with the wrong kid, dawg I thought I warned ya/
Now I'll let you swing away, let your punchlines miss me/
Ray Charles sees your whack, so does Clayton Bigsby/

[krayz1e b1zzy]

one bar=//

i laugh at this bench warmer//
before u step in the game this bitch needs to warm up//
think he's up to bat well just stand on up/im like damn for what?//
that "S" on your cap must stand for suck//
this cat keep on swingin but havent got a hit by far//
your biggest fear is crossing the street and getting hit by a car//
when my knife strike you / ill shorten your life cycle//
it'll be hard for u to win like lance armstrong winning those races on a tricycle//
you thought you was the best on this/ to be honest//
ill have u sweatin more than osama at a U.N. press conference//
my first time battlin this cat..fuck the high 5's //
i gotta 9 for each one of your 9 lives //
so quick when the mack BANG!/ slash max payne //
the way i slow down fast frames //
smack this nervous nerd/ im urgin //
to rearrange his face like a plastic seurgeon //
lyrically on the verge of fuckin this verbal virgin //

[Boss_Smoke]

Felix

I hate Macy's day, and I shit on parade's/
I'll have you fucked like Brokeback, leave you stricken with AIDS/
1/2 --- 1st was filler, 2nd was a good line
I'll leave your ass trampled by bulls with no legs/
I'm Magic's Showtime you're Chicago with no MJ/
2/2 --- good punch
Kid with no Play, it takes you a week just to rhyme for a day/
I say what I mean and I mean what I say/
You're rhymes are so fruity Elton John thinks that you're gay/
0/3 --- that was weak as fuck
You're a paper EMCEE, just a puppet on a string/
You're Lil Wayne's career if he never said "BLING"/
2/2 --- DAAAAAAMN, great punch (lol @ Wayne)
Your pilot light is not lit/
The filament in your lyrics is spent/
You burned out like a candle with no wick/
2/3 --- ended well, but not enough for 3
After it dripped, wax and flame onto the carpet/
In your shitty ass roach infested apartment/
0/2 --- Don't like this bar, not a punch, not a personal
Now that's it, bitch, it's time to get at you/
My 9 I'll spit at you, my dog's I'll sick at you/
0/2 --- talking about your dog and guns
We can battle all day and just jaw with the tough talk/
Or we can take it to the streets and you can lay in the chalk/
0/2 --- not punch/personal/good
You look like a "Queen", that's why I'm lettin' my gun bust/
And my slugs never miss so "another one bites the dust"/
2/2 --- good punch
I'm Snidely Whiplash, leave you taped to the tracks of a train/
My rhymes are venomous like their Snakes on a Plane/
1/2 --- the next line would've made this one good, but I judge bar-by-bar
Just call me Sam Jackson bitch it's 187/
I'll pull the trigger for you just so I can get to Heaven/
1/2 --- not sure what you wanted out of this
I'm not P. Diddy but you're welcome to "Hate Me"/
I'll choke you so hard your breath will escape thee/
1/2 --- 2nd line = filler
And when I see that your body is startin' to twitch/
I'll cut it all up and then tie it to my tow hitch/
0/2 --- cut down on that
Drag you down the road like the black kid in Georgia/
You fucked with the wrong kid, dawg I thought I warned ya/
0/2 --- filler!
Now I'll let you swing away, let your punchlines miss me/
Ray Charles sees your whack, so does Clayton Bigsby/
2/2 --- good closer

Felix --- 14/32 --- 44%

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Kraz1e


i laugh at this bench warmer//
before u step in the game this bitch needs to warm up//
0/2 --- weak opener
think he's up to bat well just stand on up/im like damn for what?//
that "S" on your cap must stand for suck//
1/2 --- ehh.....personal, but weak
this cat keep on swingin but havent got a hit by far//
your biggest fear is crossing the street and getting hit by a car//
1/2 --- fillerish bar
when my knife strike you / ill shorten your life cycle//
it'll be hard for u to win like lance armstrong winning those races on a tricycle//
1/2 --- weak!
you thought you was the best on this/ to be honest//
ill have u sweatin more than osama at a U.N. press conference//
2/2 --- good line
my first time battlin this cat..fuck the high 5's //
i gotta 9 for each one of your 9 lives //
1/2 --- filler, followed by an alright line
so quick when the mack BANG!/ slash max payne //
the way i slow down fast frames //
1/2 --- coulda set up the 2nd line waaay better
smack this nervous nerd/ im urgin //
to rearrange his face like a plastic seurgeon //
lyrically on the verge of fuckin this verbal virgin //
2/3 --- a pretty good closer

Krayz1e --- 9/17 --- 53%

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OVERALL, I think this was an alright battle if you ask me. And it was hard to judge because of the fact that both competitors have different length bars. As you can see by the bar analysis', Felix had better bars at times. But because his verse was so long, he also had more bad bars. So the length issue should probably be adressed in every battle or something, so the battlers can make sure they know how many bars to post.

VOTE : KRAYZ1E

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[AppletonDon]

Felix

I hate Macy's day, and I shit on parade's/
I'll have you fucked like Brokeback, leave you stricken with AIDS/
1/2 --- 1st was filler, 2nd was a good line
I'll leave your ass trampled by bulls with no legs/
I'm Magic's Showtime you're Chicago with no MJ/
1/2 1st line was weak 2nd was alright
Kid with no Play, it takes you a week just to rhyme for a day/
I say what I mean and I mean what I say/
You're rhymes are so fruity Elton John thinks that you're gay/
0/3 --- started strong with kid and play then fucked up on rest
You're a paper EMCEE, just a puppet on a string/
You're Lil Wayne's career if he never said "BLING"/
1/2 --- first line was weak 2nd was nice
Your pilot light is not lit/
The filament in your lyrics is spent/
You burned out like a candle with no wick/
0/3 --- wasnt feelin this at all bunch of fillers
After it dripped, wax and flame onto the carpet/
In your shitty ass roach infested apartment/
0/2 --- more fillers
Now that's it, bitch, it's time to get at you/
My 9 I'll spit at you, my dog's I'll sick at you/
1/2 --- first line nothin special 2nd line was decent
We can battle all day and just jaw with the tough talk/
Or we can take it to the streets and you can lay in the chalk/
0/2 --- more fillers
You look like a "Queen", that's why I'm lettin' my gun bust/
And my slugs never miss so "another one bites the dust"/
1/2 --- 1 st line had no relation 2nd line was decent
I'm Snidely Whiplash, leave you taped to the tracks of a train/
My rhymes are venomous like their Snakes on a Plane/
0/2 --- just wasnt feelin it
Just call me Sam Jackson bitch it's 187/
I'll pull the trigger for you just so I can get to Heaven/
1/2 --- 1st line was ok 2nd line just didnt make much sense to me
I'm not P. Diddy but you're welcome to "Hate Me"/
I'll choke you so hard your breath will escape thee/
1/2 --- 1st line was alright 2nd line was filler
And when I see that your body is startin' to twitch/
I'll cut it all up and then tie it to my tow hitch/
0/2 --- more filler
Drag you down the road like the black kid in Georgia/
You fucked with the wrong kid, dawg I thought I warned ya/
0/2 --- filler!
Now I'll let you swing away, let your punchlines miss me/
Ray Charles sees your whack, so does Clayton Bigsby/
2/2 --- very good closer rest of verse should have been like this
Felix --- 9/32 --- 28%

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Kraz1e


i laugh at this bench warmer//
before u step in the game this bitch needs to warm up//
0/2 --- weak opener
think he's up to bat well just stand on up/im like damn for what?//
that "S" on your cap must stand for suck//
0/2 --- didnt like this one 2nd line was definetely filler
this cat keep on swingin but havent got a hit by far//
your biggest fear is crossing the street and getting hit by a car//
1/2 --- 1st line was decent 2nd line was just unecessary
when my knife strike you / ill shorten your life cycle//
it'll be hard for u to win like lance armstrong winning those races on a tricycle//
1/2 --- weak!
you thought you was the best on this/ to be honest//
ill have u sweatin more than osama at a U.N. press conference//
2/2 --- very good punch
my first time battlin this cat..fuck the high 5's //
i gotta 9 for each one of your 9 lives //
1/2 --- filler, followed by an alright line
so quick when the mack BANG!/ slash max payne //
the way i slow down fast frames //
1/2 --- started off really strong 2nd line blew this one
smack this nervous nerd/ im urgin //
to rearrange his face like a plastic seurgeon //
lyrically on the verge of fuckin this verbal virgin //
3/3 ---decent closer
Krayz1e --- 9/17 --- 53%

vote = krayzie


honestly i think this wasnt a good battle at all ive never seen felix spit so i dont know ur full potential but u had way too many fillers need more punchlines and krayzie even though i voted for u i know u can spit much better than this verse wasnt really feelin it at all when u battle me u always come much harder better punchlines whats good man?

[krayz1e b1zzy]

lol i was tryin to do too many things @ once ( posting in the freestlye section while writin this) no excuses though i gotta get focused

[sikwitit]

Felix-<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>
I hate Macy's day, and I shit on parade's/
I'll have you fucked like Brokeback, leave you stricken with AIDS/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- first line was definitely a filler
I'll leave your ass trampled by bulls with no legs/
I'm Magic's Showtime you're Chicago with no MJ/
0/2- not feeling this one <o:p></o:p>
Kid with no Play, it takes you a week just to rhyme for a day/
I say what I mean and I mean what I say/
You're rhymes are so fruity Elton John thinks that you're gay/
1/3- first line was nice, puncline fell way off<o:p></o:p>
You're a paper EMCEE, just a puppet on a string/
You're Lil Wayne's career if he never said "BLING"/
1/2- I really liked the second line but the first was a filler<o:p></o:p>
Your pilot light is not lit/
The filament in your lyrics is spent/
You burned out like a candle with no wick/
1/3- not much goin on here<o:p></o:p>
After it dripped, wax and flame onto the carpet/
In your shitty ass roach infested apartment/
0/2- need to have more direct punches…make it personal<o:p></o:p>
Now that's it, bitch, it's time to get at you/
My 9 I'll spit at you, my dog's I'll sick at you/
1/2- Nice flow but the punch ain’t hittin<o:p></o:p>
We can battle all day and just jaw with the tough talk/
Or we can take it to the streets and you can lay in the chalk/
0/2- nothin happin here<o:p></o:p>
You look like a "Queen", that's why I'm lettin' my gun bust/
And my slugs never miss so "another one bites the dust"/
1/2- work on the punched mayn<o:p></o:p>
I'm Snidely Whiplash, leave you taped to the tracks of a train/
My rhymes are venomous like their Snakes on a Plane/
0/2- huh?<o:p></o:p>
Just call me Sam Jackson bitch it's 187/
I'll pull the trigger for you just so I can get to Heaven/
1/2- I like the first line but the second made no sense to me<o:p></o:p>
I'm not P. Diddy but you're welcome to "Hate Me"/
I'll choke you so hard your breath will escape thee/
0/2- sorry<o:p></o:p>
And when I see that your body is startin' to twitch/
I'll cut it all up and then tie it to my tow hitch/
0/2- fillers <o:p></o:p>
Drag you down the road like the black kid in <?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:country-region w:st="on">Georgia</st1:country-region></st1:place>/
You fucked with the wrong kid, dawg I thought I warned ya/
1/2- I’ll give ya one point just cause the first line was fucked up!<o:p></o:p>
Now I'll let you swing away, let your punchlines miss me/
Ray Charles sees your whack, so does Clayton Bigsby/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- It’s aight but a weak closer<o:p></o:p>
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9/32= 28%<o:p></o:p>
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KB-<o:p></o:p>
i laugh at this bench warmer//
before u step in the game this bitch needs to warm up//
0/2- weak opener, come on dawg you can do better<o:p></o:p>
think he's up to bat well just stand on up/im like damn for what?//
that "S" on your cap must stand for suck//
2/2- lol… fuck halarious since you’re talkin bout his pic, haha!<o:p></o:p>
this cat keep on swingin but havent got a hit by far//
your biggest fear is crossing the street and getting hit by a car//
0/2- empty bars<o:p></o:p>
when my knife strike you / ill shorten your life cycle//
it'll be hard for u to win like lance armstrong winning those races on a tricycle//
2/2- I pictured it and it was fuckin halarious to me, haha! I’ll give ya two for makin me laugh!<o:p></o:p>
you thought you was the best on this/ to be honest//
ill have u sweatin more than osama at a U.N. press conference//<o:p></o:p>
2/2- Nice job! And very true, haha
my first time battlin this cat..fuck the high 5's //
i gotta 9 for each one of your 9 lives //
2/2- There you go man, that was hot!<o:p></o:p>
so quick when the mack BANG!/ slash max payne //
the way i slow down fast frames //
1/2- It’s aight<o:p></o:p>
smack this nervous nerd/ im urgin //
to rearrange his face like a plastic seurgeon //
lyrically on the verge of fuckin this verbal virgin //<o:p></o:p>
2/3- The last too lines were good. Not a bad closer.<o:p></o:p>
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11/17= 64.7%<o:p></o:p>
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VOTE- KB
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Good job guys! Felix mayn, you need to work on you punches big time man. Don’t take this as an insult, just take it as friendly advise. Keep battlin and you’ll keep getting better. Honestly, while your battlin skills ain't quite up to par, by your flow and what you say, I bett you can freestyle your ass of. That whole verse seemed like a freestyle more than a battle rap. Aight fellas…<o:p></o:p>

[krayz1e b1zzy]

thnx for the votes guys 3-0 ko good battle felix

[Felix Hernandez]

Nice job KB.

And to those judging: yeah, I have a habit of just kind of going off on tangents, more merely freestyling than battling. I'll try and work on that next time.

[Vega/Set]

Good battle guys




..Sal fix there points on the ladder