Winner--------------->Syxx_ten vs. Boss Smoke<----------------------Scar

[~Longway~JNC Records]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started

Syxx you are lower on the ladder then Boss Smoke so you go first

you have 48 hours to reply
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[Syxx_Ten]

checkin in ill drop later on tonite when i get off of work

[Syxx_Ten]

come on now smoke im da wrong nigga to fool wit//
they gonna b outlinin yo body wit da blue shit from a pool stick//
u just a lil prick who gets took for a joke//
the only thing boss smoke's is cock he got a deep throat//
put a dot between ya eyes got u leakin like a gravy boat//
make ya momz a fur coat my bullets shaved her snatch//
blow a patch off ya face just to extend yo facial features//
im an allstar in da game u just fan watchin from da bleachers//
you aint welcome back get murdered wit mase and blessed by sum preachers//
u should have listened to yo teachers when they told u wont be shit//
this will be one those beatin yo ass wont forget//
my bullets would turn yo blonde hair into a brunette//
testin me is like playin roulette and betin on blue//
when i hear yo flow its like Who's Line Is It Anyways yo name must be Drew//
treat yo organs like the south and get um chopped and screwed//
u da first nigga in text battlin history to ever got booed//
in every battle u get used like hoopz did flavor flav//
now u got my name engraved on yo brain and all it costed was one stain//

[Boss_Smoke]

Ayo,

You call yourself a gangsta, the one with the big bank/
But your career's a prank, you ain't no big fish, you the guppie in my tank/
You provoke violence '50' times over but it ain't making 'sense'/
Because Syxx 'Tense' won't do shit, he just going with the trends/
Your rhymes are weak and fluffy, not at all vicious/
You ain't an MC, your the Grounds' 'Gangstalicious'/
But I won't 'Free' this 'Man', he stuck out on the 'Boondocks'/
Swooning cocks to come dance with him like Costner with the fox/
Just like 'Jones' on the 'Mic' you reapeating everything Hollow said/
"I'm a G, I'm a thug" and neither said anything good yet/
Probably 'swallowed' Hollow's 'head', and some of it came off on you/
Leaving Syxx to spit generic shit just like the other guy did too/
And because it's all gibberish we should call him Dr. Seuss/
You ain't 'Revolutionary' and you can't 'C' me with them weak attacks/
I was 'B1zzy' but now I'm ready to lay you down on the 'Mat'/
'Syxx' ways to Sunday as I disassemble everything your raps/
Throw them in the container cause all of that shit was trash/

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[Boss_Smoke]

votes

By the way, the end of my verse wasn't dissing the NBM, just so all don't think I'm hating on ya'll.

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[Boss_Smoke]

Ahem....We are open for votes....Still.

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[Vega/Set]

Opener- neither
Punches- Boss
Flow- Syxx
Multies- neither
Wordplay- neither
Nameplay- Boss
Similies/Meta's- Boss
Personals- Boss
Creativity- Syxx
Humor- neither
Closure- Syxx (both were weak, but boss' was not creative)
Enjoyment- neither


Over-All = 4-3 Boss Smoke

Vote = Boss Smoke




This was a very weak battle..i did not enjoy it at all..i actually coodnt wait to finish it..im not tryna b rude thats jus how i feel...keep elevatin n keep battlin

--stay up

[Syxx_Ten]

uppin for votes

[Hollow]

Opener- Syxx: I jus' thought the rhyme itself was better (love the syllables)
Punches- Syxx: Smoke had some nice punches, but half of it was the same shit he used in my battle... Generic, generic, gangster, *cry*... Don't bitch about their verse, Smoke; jus' worry about makin' yours better.
Flow- Syxx: Your flow was just more on point, though not great.
Multies- Tie: Neither of you used an abundance. They were kinda sporatic.
Wordplay- Boss: Neither was overly great, but Boss slipped this one.
Nameplay- Boss: I liked Syxx's name play better, but Boss had more. In this extreme example, quantity beat quality.
Similies/Meta's- Tie: Both had a decent amount, in my eyes.
Personals- Boss: The only one who had "opponent specific" attacks.
Creativity- Syxx: Again, Boss's used the same attacks in his battle with me and Syxx... Completely killing any attempt at this.
Humor- Syxx: The only relatively funny line was the "facial features" line.
Closure- Syxx: Read Vega's reason.
Enjoyment- Syxx: Boss's verse was basically like reading his battle with me over again...


Over-All = 7-3 Syxx

Vote = Syxx

I agree, this battle was nothing spectacular; Boss, dude, use a new strategy. Don't spend half of your battle using one attack that you wore out in a previous battle. Syxx, you just needa come harder. If you're gonna rely on just "vicious" attacks and not "word-play", you needa straight come off like a killer. If you're gonna use more word-play/similies etc., then you needa use something a little more complex instead of basics. In a good battle, you'd pretty much have gotten K.O.ed since you didn't completely destroy your opponent with either, you used a small bit of each... Not overly good strategy unless you've got great skills.

[Syxx_Ten]

1-1 uppin for more votes

[Syxx_Ten]

need more votes folks

[keeburna]

Opener- syxx
Punches- smoke
Flow- syxx
Multies- smoke
Wordplay- smoke
Nameplay- smoke
Similies/Meta's- syxx
Personals- smoke
Creativity- Syxx
Humor- syxx
Closure- syxx
Enjoyment- syxx

5 to 7

ima have to go with syxx on this one

[Syxx_Ten]

Need More Votes

[PIRU'N'BONE]

Opener- boss
Punches- syxx
Flow- Syxx
Multies- syxx
Wordplay- syxx
Nameplay- Boss
Similies/Meta's- syxx
Personals- Boss
Creativity- Syxx
Humor- syxx
Closure- boss
Enjoyment- syxx


ima go wit syxx overall i thought it was better mainly cuz of flow and creativity... but both were weak verses... i know syxx can do better... first time readin a boss verse but good job both

[bad habitz]

Opener- niether
Punches- Boss
Flow- Syxx
Multies- niether
Wordplay- niether
Nameplay- Boss
Similies/Meta's- Boss
Personals- Boss
Creativity- Syxx
Humor- niether
Closure- niether
Enjoyment- niether

Over-All = tie

Vote = syxx

i strongly agree with vega and hollow on this one....y'all really need more complexity to it....but syxx got my vote simply b/c....his was more diverse....with the schemes...

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Opener- None
Punches- Boss
Flow- Boss
Multies- None
Wordplay- Boss
Nameplay- Boss
Similies/Meta's- Syxx
Personals- Boss
Creativity- Syxx
Humor- None
Closure- None
Enjoyment- Boss

Over-All = Boss

Vote = Boss Smoke

***not a very good look from any of you, it looked like you both half-assed ya whole verse, but overall, boss just came with a stronger verse, he proved superior over syxx wen it came to most of the categories, keep elevating guys

[Vega/Set]

im sry alias but your votes doesnt count bcuz the match was over wit the last vote...a 4-1 tko.....good battle guys

--stay up n keep elevating

[Boss_Smoke]

Shit....I'm damn near ashamed of my verse now....Oh well, I'll keep practicing, keep getting better. :thumbup:

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