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Hollow
08-11-2006, 06:08 PM
He already accepted this in the "Table Thread"

HOUSE RULES, you know 'em.

I spit first cause I'm lower on the ladder. Here it is...

Alright, I'ma "school" this bitch, Rap 101; I'm the professor to him/
So sit down, pay attention, listen an' let's let this lesson begin/
Syxx Ten, big as a midget on his knees wit' my "head" on his chin/
That's the only time we "face-to-face," so you know I'm gettin' the win/
The only time he's comin' on top, is when he's pleasurin' men/
I'ma "cut Thurddy Five down to size" when I connect his neck to his shin/
The only "prayer you got" is if your verse ends with "Lord in Heaven, amen"/
An' playin' frisbee wit' ya CD is the only way that ya record could spin/
I barely started the slaughter, yet it's already ready to end/
'Cause when I fuck this Humpty Dumpty up, won't be no puttin' him together again/
Wit' a handful o' paramedics an' twenty-five surgeons/
Three instruction booklets an' nine licensed nurses/
I guess that sorta makes me some form of a violent person/
While Syxx's more of a bitch than drag-queens wit' violet purses/*
My lines' so hurtful, I'm re-readin' 'em an' my eyes are hurtin'/
But his are like a waiter on the first day-he's jus' tryin' to serve 'em/
They say talk is cheap, but to me yours don't gotta price: it's worthless/
So how the fuck you gonna compete wit' me when my rhymes are perfect/
I'll treat every letter ya postin' like a paper shredder an' slice ya verses/
Shows over, motha'fucker; I'm shuttin' an' closin' the lights an' curtains/
You think ya somethin' great, dawg; don't think no-one'll swallow that/
When ya ass no-showed the first time you ever saw one o' Hollows raps/**
So come on, let's see you respond to me wit' ya fuckin' constant crap/
You call a rap but most people would respond wit' lots o' laughs/
I'll leave you punch-drunk like my verse was servin' shot's o' Jack/
Leave him lookin' at me like "Oh my God, wow! 'Pac is back!"/
He's fallin' back down the latter like someone popped his ass/
How you gonna come in first place wit' a dawg this fast/
That jumps a fense an' runs too quick for the cops to catch/
That spits so much fire, it's like his verse was dropped in gas/
So go ahead, an' come spittin' fiction, even though this is all jus' fact/
I don't care if you tell me a fairy-tell; this time, at least be respondin' back/**

*Violet is considered the color that represents homo-sexuality.
** These are jus' plays on the fact that he never responded back to me the first time (even though he said he would)



Anything you don't get, let me know.


Get at me, syxx...

Vega/Set
08-11-2006, 07:14 PM
hollow ikno ur an anxious man but nex time have only one battle at a time....thanks

Hollow
08-11-2006, 07:28 PM
Ahhh.... That's harsh, man. You know I'm good enough for multiple battles. Besides, you backed out on me an' you.

Syxx_Ten
08-11-2006, 10:03 PM
ill drop in a lil bit

Hollow
08-13-2006, 01:59 PM
Please get on here within' the next.... 4 hours... an' post your verse, man.

I'ma play by the rules, but I don't want a K.O. by no-show.

Syxx_Ten
08-13-2006, 06:48 PM
i spit these hollow tips quick bet they hollow dudes lips//
nigga u'll get broken in half like dat titanic ship and u wont be found//
im backin u down like shaq snatchin all yo hopes like a rebound//
come around my town and catch a flesh wound between yo eyes//
say yo goodbyes cuz lyrical killer died wit yo body found hollow//
swallow my kids nigga thats the only way u'll be sick//
the only way u spittin words is if i had a dictionary tatted on my dick//
come back to this site and start callin me out like some kind of groupie chick//
i was yo numba one draft pick just call me king james//
ill have yop ass flippin mo trcks da the X games//
i dont wanna be da blame you lost u so called claim to fame//
im renamin hollow to keenan cuz his flow is a low down dirty shame//
quit playin yo games dawg u know the aftermath's gonna be shady//
instead of u losin dis battle make it easy fuck u just pay me//
u take trips to hawaii askin the da locals please just lay me//
hollow u must be crazy thinkin my shit wont catch a spin//
i think u just jealous cuz u just cant catch a win//
leave yo chest all hollow now u aint got no heart like da man of tin//

Syxx_Ten
08-13-2006, 06:50 PM
my bad it took so long we had to put my dog to sleep yesterday so ive been busy

Hollow
08-13-2006, 06:53 PM
Ah, I see. You were like 45 minutes past time, I was gettin' worried.

WE NEED SOME VOTES!

Syxx_Ten
08-13-2006, 06:55 PM
yeah my b

Hollow
08-13-2006, 06:59 PM
It's all Jesus

Boss_Smoke
08-14-2006, 05:52 AM
Hollow
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Alright, I'ma "school" this bitch, Rap 101; I'm the professor to him/
So sit down, pay attention, listen an' let's let this lesson begin/
1/2 --- not too much of an attack
Syxx Ten, big as a midget on his knees wit' my "head" on his chin/
That's the only time we "face-to-face," so you know I'm gettin' the win/
1/2 --- still, not much of an attack
The only time he's comin' on top, is when he's pleasurin' men/
I'ma "cut Thurddy Five down to size" when I connect his neck to his shin/
2/2 --- good punch, with the flow and the attack
The only "prayer you got" is if your verse ends with "Lord in Heaven, amen"/
An' playin' frisbee wit' ya CD is the only way that ya record could spin/
2/2 --- funny punch = points
I barely started the slaughter, yet it's already ready to end/
'Cause when I fuck this Humpty Dumpty up, won't be no puttin' him together again/
Wit' a handful o' paramedics an' twenty-five surgeons/
Three instruction booklets an' nine licensed nurses/
3/4 --- 1st = filler, the last 3 were a complete punch
I guess that sorta makes me some form of a violent person/
While Syxx's more of a bitch than drag-queens wit' violet purses/*
1/2 --- 1st filler, 2nd was a good idea, but not executed right
My lines' so hurtful, I'm re-readin' 'em an' my eyes are hurtin'/
But his are like a waiter on the first day-he's jus' tryin' to serve 'em/
1/2 --- 1st was self-prasing, 2nd was good though
They say talk is cheap, but to me yours don't gotta price: it's worthless/
So how the fuck you gonna compete wit' me when my rhymes are perfect/
1/2 --- coulda worded it better, because you ended praising yourself
I'll treat every letter ya postin' like a paper shredder an' slice ya verses/
Shows over, motha'fucker; I'm shuttin' an' closin' the lights an' curtains/
2/2 --- this was a good, simpleton, punch
You think ya somethin' great, dawg; don't think no-one'll swallow that/
When ya ass no-showed the first time you ever saw one o' Hollows raps/**
1/2 --- nothing special, but it's personal
So come on, let's see you respond to me wit' ya fuckin' constant crap/
You call a rap but most people would respond wit' lots o' laughs/
2/2 --- good, creative punch
I'll leave you punch-drunk like my verse was servin' shot's o' Jack/
Leave him lookin' at me like "Oh my God, wow! 'Pac is back!"/
1/2 --- 1st was good, 1nd was "meh"
He's fallin' back down the latter like someone popped his ass/
How you gonna come in first place wit' a dawg this fast/
0/2 --- I didn't like this bar, 1st was pretty wack, 2nd was self-praising
That jumps a fense an' runs too quick for the cops to catch/
That spits so much fire, it's like his verse was dropped in gas/
0/2 --- Entirely self-praising
So go ahead, an' come spittin' fiction, even though this is all jus' fact/
I don't care if you tell me a fairy-tell; this time, at least be respondin' back/**
2/2 --- This was a good closer, and again with the personal
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Hollow --- 21/32 --- 66%
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Syxx_Ten
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i spit these hollow tips quick bet they hollow dudes lips//
nigga u'll get broken in half like dat titanic ship and u wont be found//
im backin u down like shaq snatchin all yo hopes like a rebound//
2/3 --- This was a good opener, but the 1st line was a filler
come around my town and catch a flesh wound between yo eyes//
say yo goodbyes cuz lyrical killer died wit yo body found hollow//
0/2 --- doesn't rhyme, the internal ones do, but not the ends
swallow my kids nigga thats the only way u'll be sick//
the only way u spittin words is if i had a dictionary tatted on my dick//
come back to this site and start callin me out like some kind of groupie chick//
2/3 --- 1st two were good, last wasn't anything special
i was yo numba one draft pick just call me king james//
ill have yop ass flippin mo trcks da the X games//
1/2 --- ehh, flow was off, and the 1st was self-praising, 2nd was alright
i dont wanna be da blame you lost u so called claim to fame//
im renamin hollow to keenan cuz his flow is a low down dirty shame//
1/2 --- it sounded like a filler, but it was a slight punch
quit playin yo games dawg u know the aftermath's gonna be shady//
instead of u losin dis battle make it easy fuck u just pay me//
u take trips to hawaii askin the da locals please just lay me//
2/3 --- I liked the 1st two, last was a filler
hollow u must be crazy thinkin my shit wont catch a spin//
i think u just jealous cuz u just cant catch a win//
leave yo chest all hollow now u aint got no heart like da man of tin//
3/3 --- This was a good closer, and a complete punch
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Syxx_Ten --- 11/18 --- 56%
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VOTE : HOLLOW
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Syxx_Ten
08-14-2006, 08:07 PM
uppin for more votes

Syxx_Ten
08-15-2006, 01:17 PM
lets get some more votes folks

TheLegazY
08-15-2006, 01:53 PM
Opener- Syxx (yes first line was a filler)
Punches- hollow (felt them hit harder)
Flow- Hollow
Multies- none worth mention
Wordplay- Hollow
Nameplay- neither worth
Similies/Meta's- niether
Personals- Hollow (especially at the end)
Creativity- Syxx
Humor- Hollow
Closure- Syxx
Enjoyment- Both

Favorite Lines:

I barely started the slaughter, yet it's already ready to end/
'Cause when I fuck this Humpty Dumpty up, won't be no puttin' him together again/
Wit' a handful o' paramedics an' twenty-five surgeons/
Three instruction booklets an' nine licensed nurses/


quit playin yo games dawg u know the aftermath's gonna be shady//
instead of u losin dis battle make it easy fuck u just pay me//

Decent


Vote = HOLLOW

you both can do batter!


GWF <3.
God Bless <3.

Hollow
08-15-2006, 02:19 PM
2 -to- 0, Hollow. Keep votin' peepz!

Vega/Set
08-15-2006, 02:37 PM
Opener- Syxx
Punches- hollow
Flow- Hollow
Multies- Hollow
Wordplay- Hollow
Nameplay- none
Similies/Meta's- none
Personals- none
Creativity- Syxx
Humor- Hollow
Closure- Syxx
Enjoyment- Both


overall- 5-3
Vote= Hollow

Next time syxx dont rush into ya shit...cuz i kno u can do better than this...dont wait till last minute to drop, ight nig....nice battle nonetheless

Vega/Set
08-15-2006, 02:38 PM
3-0 k.o

Syxx_Ten
08-15-2006, 03:18 PM
good battle nigga

~Longway~JNC Records
08-15-2006, 03:53 PM
points have been updated. This puts hollow at the #2 spot. Sxxt you need to end this slide your on

Syxx_Ten
08-15-2006, 04:01 PM
i know