Winner---------------->Vega vs. Hollow<----------------------Scar

[Hollow]

Vega already accepted this battle earlier, so I'm jus' makin' the thread.

House rules, we both know 'em.

I'm lower (for now), so I'ma start it off.


Your verse ain't "bringin' more musical talent," if you "brought a sympony wit' it"/
So I'ma have a "Guilty Conscience" like "Eminem" for killin' this "Jiminy Cricket"/
I must gotta thirty-six inch dick, the way my shit's always rippin' these bitches/
Spittin' viciousness; shit's like slit wrists, the way I'm endin' ya filthy existance/
Fuck Two-Face, I'ma call ya "Face" for short/
So "gimme face", an' face fate, watch ya brains contort/
I got more word-play than "Doc. Dre" has bass to snort/ (bass = crack)
So I'm give ya the "minimum sentence" it'd be a waste o' more/ *
But unfortunately, the minimum sentence is "Death Row"/ (goes back to Dr. Dre)
So good night, Sug(ar); if I wanna finish this, I'ma spit to ya head-stone/ (Suge Knight)
Your verse wouldn't be worth shit, written from blood in ya skin, if you split it an' bled gold/
I'm winnin' wit' this "stone cold" verse; why? 'Cause, nigga, I said so/
I let go, an' unload on this "Rabbit" while he "runs" to get his boys/
Come on Two-Face, flip the coin, bitch; come get destroyed/ **
His lips are void, silent; stay that way! Don't even rip no noise/
Make a sound or secrete a gasp or I'll end ya voice/
Come at me, dawg: Hollow vs. Face, let's do it, bitch/
I'm gettin' that number one spot, almost like my name was Ludacris/***
Your game is ludicrous, no joke an' ya fame is humorous/
Laughable; practically-- no literally everything you say is foolishness/
My verse scatters off like scatter-shot, 'cause I my spit's like a gauge/
I'ma light a fire up under your ass, like you was sittin' in flames/
Your entire life's work isn't worth two cents, if you worked for minumum wage/
Actually youwouldn't be worth two cents if I gave you a penny per face/
Your last battle sure as fuck wasn't sick, but it succeeded in makin' me vomit/
But you couldn't blow up in front of a crowd, if you hit the stage wit' a rocket/
You could tell me "2 plus 2 is 4" an' I'd doubt it, everything seems fake when you talkin'/
Maybe you got the effect on things; or, maybe you jus' need placed in a coffin/
My rhymes shine like polished platinum, yours couldn't if they were lined in gold/
An' you're "livin' on borrowed time," like your existance was a "life-time-loan"/
Anyway, I'ma end this shit, it's time to finish it, I'm outty an' it's time to roll/
Besides your verses couldn't "hold my interest" if you had "mind control"/

* (Minimum sentence is death row, *and* is referring to the minimum bar limit)
** (That's part of a "Run, Rabbit Run" line. And, two-face always flipped a coin to decide what to do in the bat-man series)
*** (Ludacris - Number One Spot)

[Vega/Set]

yo hold up...i didnt accept like that..i said i had to see if i had another battle...which i do, i had promised slippy id battle him after syxx..and besides i aint gon b here much these couple days....but i guess since ur so fuccn impatient i'll drop as soon as i can...next time wait for either me or sal to sanction these battles hollow..this is your last warning

[Vega/Set]

Your mind must be empty n lifeless wantin to flow against me//
but ya family mus b proud--3 battles at one time,
and im the only one cutting down this hollow tree//
Want ta take my spot? u gotta crawl b4 u walk son...shit u jus follow ouija*//
you got dem baby rhymes and believe me im all on ya ass wit these lines like applied powder//
bitch u aint nothin to vega u get cooked up n served like sum boston chowder//
you anxious and eager to hand me a loss,
but how u gon do that wen i have ya ass on pause//
this aint a game boy im real wit this like hollywood to jaws//
may have high status but im still real enough to kill off all ya flaws//
then have the crowd applause after i throw u ova board//
thinkin u was brave but all i heard was geronimo soar//
you lookin for quicc ways to bring heat but ya rhymes still stucc in the microwave//
pop it out and its not the only thang saved to bring to your grave//
we cood fight for days? na ni66a this round ova like poor drunk dudes//
your sunk in 16 bars but even witout that on the map i still look down on u//
bitch you aint hittin me your stucc shadow boxin a ghost//
your blindy sticcin keys in like blindfolded janitors as hosts//
"C'mon vega i gave u ur winning vote"-- remember that hollow//
well we battlin and all i found out is u cant spit so u mus swallow//
you aint spittin fire either thats jus repeated bombs comin out cha mouth//
look at the words written on them atoms n see my name scratched out//
and with no doubt in my mind that jus more of reason fo u to b like me//
but ni66a i already got 2 faces another one added is jus one spittin wit braces//
believe me your that other tryna spit-- aint nothin comin out cuz ya mouth caged//
im insulted at wut u brought so i sticc keys in a rage like cliccin a gauge--here to tell these ni66as wut u thought up was staged//
so u winnin against me wont happen like fags meant to b engaged//
c'mon hollow jus take ya raps bacc all dey is--is a mystery//
noone will eva understand or get it like a map of lost history//
so at this point im on top of u like im chokin u in the mud//
your a pussy bitch so the only thang u spittin is that blood//
hollow like broken faucets he jus aint flowin, jus a stopped up flood//
your an irritatin lil bitch that hurts my mind like a lead shake//
so i slap my dicc across ya forehead so u kno how it feels to have a headache//

[Vega/Set]

for this battle im tellin u that votes that are broken down will not count....the only votes that count will be the ones that are set up like....

OPENER-
PUNCHES-
MULTI'S-
etc
etc
etc

the only reason i say this is cuz ive been readin all ur votes n im noticin u guys dont kno how to vote, either that or u dont y u voted the way u did..cuz as i read ur explantions there jus plain childish...so for this battle it will b done this way or it wont count...that and because alotta u ppl new here wont understand how i flow so u jus deduct points for not knowin shit....so i want it dun like this.......



YOU DONT UNDERSTAND THE VERSE DONT FUCKING VOTE!

[Enzo R.]

Opener- Vega - didn't go straight to punches, he stated something like an opener should, and ended it well
Punches- Hollow - he kept it consistent, kept hitting with them, sometimes even added punches in beginner lines along with the follow-throughs
Flow- NONE - you both were messed up allover the place, alot of stretched and forced lines
Multies- NONE - didn't see any worthy
Wordplay- Hollow - hardly any, but for the ones he had, he got that
Nameplay- Hollow - nuttin much in vega's verse
Similies/Meta's- TIE - you guys had it equal, plent "likes" and other comparisons
Personals- Vega - yeah, hollow had them, i feel vega just really came aggressive wit his
Creativity- TIE - both had some nice concepts, some were played from both sides, basically even
Humor- Vega - you both seemed pretty angry in both verses, i dunno if there's a fued or w/e, so it was hard to find humor, but this line did it for me: " your an irritatin lil bitch that hurts my mind like a lead shake//
so i slap my dicc across ya forehead so u kno how it feels to have a headache//"--------simple, a lil, but made me crack up
Closure- Vega - just because it had the humor, he set it up nice, hollow's seemed like it ended it with a metaphor that coulda led to a follow through, the punch was weak as well
Enjoyment- TIE - you both came with it, some good stuff from both sides

Favorite Lines:

Hollow:
Spittin' viciousness; shit's like slit wrists, the way I'm endin' ya filthy existance/

Your entire life's work isn't worth two cents, if you worked for minumum wage/
Actually youwouldn't be worth two cents if I gave you a penny per face/

Vega:
you lookin for quicc ways to bring heat but ya rhymes still stucc in the microwave//
pop it out and its not the only thang saved to bring to your grave//

^^^really liked the connection

im insulted at wut u brought so i sticc keys in a rage like cliccin a gauge--here to tell these ni66as wut u thought up was staged//

^^^straight forward with strength

so i slap my dicc across ya forehead so u kno how it feels to have a headache//

Over-All = Vega 4-3

Vote = VEGA

[Vega/Set]

thanks for voting on the battle...1-0

[Hollow]

...the only votes that count will be the ones that are set up like....

OPENER-
PUNCHES-
MULTI'S-
etc
etc
etc
Ahhh.. You scared to go line to line? :( Oh, well.
lol, jus' playin', man.:wink:

Anyway, naw, we ain't got no fued or beef or nothin' as far as I know. I was jus' tryin' to use more straight up punches an' shit, instead of relyin' purely on metaphors an' wordplay.

BTW, you jus' proved my "Bad Habitz battle" point, Vega... Why is "swallow" the only rhyming insult people can play against my name? :(
/shakes head, slowly

I'm disappointed in you, man... You could probably be more original. (Maybe not everyone, but you probably could) ;)

[Vega/Set]

i mean i could think many more words that ryme wit hollow but like i said wen it comes down to voting, points wood jus b deducted for it, cuz ni66as dont kno how to make thangs rhyme....so therefore i dont do it here....it pointless--literally pointless........and no i have no beef

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Opener- Vega
Punches- Vega
Flow- Hollow
Multies- Vega
Wordplay- Tie
Nameplay- Vega
Similies/Meta's- Hollow
Personals-Vega
Creativity- Hollow
Humor- Vega
Closure- Vega
Enjoyment- Vega


Vote = Vega

[Vega/Set]

Plz keep voting guys

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Opener- Vega
Punches- Hollow
Flow- Hollow
Multies- Neither
Wordplay- Hollow
Nameplay- Hollow
Similies/Meta's- Hollow
Personals- Vega
Creativity- Hollow
Humor- Vega
Closure- Vega
Enjoyment- Tie

6-4 Hollow

OVERALL VOTE = Hollow

***like i said, this battle deserved a breakdown vote, the categorical method can really screw a person from winning, but by categories, hollow took this, he had more or proved superior in the categories above, ok battle from both of you***

[Vega/Set]

then it wont count

[Hollow]

Man, you shoulda told me we'd play it that way before I dropped a verse an' the battle was done. lol, I'da been like fuck you. lol

[Vega/Set]

well i didnt think about it till after i dropped

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Edit: I'll respect ya choice for this battle

[Vega/Set]

that mayb so..but u aint in my mind wen im flowin...so alot tha shit u wont get and will deduct points on....same wit hollow's most likely...but fucc it w/e man since its you then go ahead

[Syxx_Ten]

Opener- Vega
Punches- Hollow
Flow- Hollow
Multies- vega
Wordplay- vega
Nameplay- hollow
Similies/Meta's- hollow
Personals- vega
Creativity- hollow
Humor- vega
Closure- vega
Enjoyment- vega


7-5 vega

[Vega/Set]

3-0 k.o. good battle hollow

[Hollow]

WHOA NO!!!! NO NO NO NO NO NO!!! ALIAS Voted for me!

[Vega/Set]

well then he edited it and i neva noticed im sorry for that.....thats my mistake

[Vega/Set]

i'll make it up though hollow....u can trus me on that

[~Longway~JNC Records]

I am confused at how this battle went down

[Vega/Set]

So am i..but wuts done is done....hollow is ok with it....i promised him a rematch since he "kinda" got screwed at a "possible" win...

[Hollow]

lmao! Love your "perfect" wording, Vega.

[Vega/Set]

thought u would