Winner--------->Krayz1eB1zzy vs. Freeda<-------------Scar

[Vega/Set]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 bars
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 votes, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started


Freeda ur lower so u go first....48 hours...drop

[Enzo R.]

checkin...edit this post wit da verse...

VERSE

shit is ova b4 it started - provin not all good things come 2 an endin- -
watch me rip open ya 'cloud' of thought like angels in skies of armeggedon- -
u died b4 u stepped in - there's nuttin funny bout rhyme comprehension- -
so when i say "all jokes aside" that means exit from tha right or the left, kid- -
my time is just precious - so don't go wastin the clock or you'll watch- -
me leaving ya 'punch-drunk' with these 'bars' serving 'shots after shots'- -
POP! and you'll drop - or even 'simmer down' - i'm to slick to be tangled
cuz when it's the gun's TURN - i'll leave this 'son-burned' more quik than the 'TAN-GOES'- -
spit in an angle that'll 'cut ya ears' like behold i'm "Van Gogh"- -
i'm continue spitting “heat” on “wax” - ur “not fit to hold the candle”- -
throwin my hands to 'land blows' like land mines - i command those- -
BLACK OUT in 'snow' - ya brains 'hangin' like you enjoy 'chillin' OUT COLD- -
beating me? doubtful - bring ya crew - i'll offend all ya defenders- -
ya culdn't "block" these "explicit" hits wit anything that ya "send-sir(censor)"- -
don't tamper wit my temper - i'll lift my pen like levers to pop ya eyes from ya lids- -
and 'drive in a whip' like 'torture on wheels' - lashing ya spine till it splits- -
ya rhymin is SHIT - ya whole structure wasn't built on skill- -
so i'll crash an aircraft and collapse ya whole rap - it stood still on stilts- -
i'll shoot "pills" i wield into ya chest - i'm best when i "cap-souls"- -
*and "crush ya career" - than you'll "be-X" as soon as the 'crack-blows'- -*
and that's how that goes - a pro smacks or blasts hoes - u kno dat- -
**leave ya ‘ab-stained’(abstained) wit holes-gats blow - I know not to ‘hold back’- -**
ya whole act's low to da ground - forget da ladder - u think u'll make it 'above da charts'?- -
than how is it you’re “FAR FROM OVER” it when you were “over-with” from the start- -

*crush = crack = blow...."be-X" = BX and/or Be dmX>>> career got crushed due to cocain problem*
**if you don't know what "abstain" means, check da dictionary to understand da wordplay and punch**

g'luck KB...

[Vega/Set]

Drop your verse kray

[krayz1e b1zzy]

yea i know im about to

[krayz1e b1zzy]

N99a im here to read you your rights, you got tha right to remain silent—
I remain so violent,--serving tickets for writing while in toxicated—
Youre the most hated—im so elated—to spead his brains on the pavement--
nice enough to battle you in sign language--
youre not gangsta or a thug, although in jail you'll wish u was--
so ill break every bone in your body and leave u a crip n blood--
drippn blood--through every slit and cut--writin, u should give it up--
n99as dont tell him to elevate, his development is arrested--
his best is useless-- destined to losin--
its so ammusing--that imma tivo his execution--
put his death on replay--
and sell the rest of his body parts on ebay--
bullets devour--lyrical showers...just hop in--(jail=takin showers=dont drop soap)
droppin bars isnt your best option--
this fag is rebelling in his cell room yelling--
as im composing symphonies when crackin fragments of his cerebellum--
mind boggling--use to runnin like stockings the way he's joggin the dictionary--
ill lay him on his back quick like missionary--its all fictionary--
hating the pitch of my flow...its in-tents--like a pack of pakistanians--(pitch/in tents=intense)
man handlin--this fruit imma peel him like manderines--
beatin me is harder to do than walkin through afghanistan-- doin a handstand--
fuck beatin you, reading your verse was a fight with the sandman--
i dozed off half way through--its like u thought your shit half way through--
youre not on my level, youre just half way dude--
I give surges to this actor--and let burners start clappin—and murders start happenin—
This bird’ll start yappin—and chirp to tha captain—
this is tha birth of an assassin—murder with passion—
A hurst and a casket—yurin to burn you bastard—I work with a tactic--

[AppletonDon]

OPENER:Freeda
CLOSER: freeda
FLOW: krayzie
MULTIS: krayzie
WORDPLAY:krayzie
NAMEPLAY: neither
META-SIMILIES: krayzie
PUNCHES: krayzie
HUMOR: krayzie
CREATIVITY: Freeda
ENJOYMENT: krayzie

7-3 vote = krayzie
yo freeda that verse started off decent and closed pretty good but alot of your lines just sound like your just putting words together you had a few good punches like that bx line u need more of that this was better than your last verse though yo krayzie yo verse was pretty good i had to give the opener to freeda though cause even though yours was decent his was just better and the closer also went to him cause yours wasnt really that impressive other than that the verse was tight pretty funny too.

[Enzo R.]

it's koo...thanks for voting app...

1-0 KB, Uppin for Votes...

[krayz1e b1zzy]

thanx for the vote appleton.we need more votes

[krayz1e b1zzy]

votes?...anyone

[Vega/Set]

OPENER:Freeda
CLOSER: freeda
FLOW: krayzie
MULTIS:freeda
WORDPLAY:freeda
NAMEPLAY: neither
META-SIMILIES: tie
PUNCHES: krayzie
HUMOR: krayzie
CREATIVITY: Freeda
ENJOYMENT: both



vote = Freeda

great battle guys

[krayz1e b1zzy]

1-1... still uppin

[Boss_Smoke]

(I would've voted earlier, but I was busy. And these past two days I wasn't home....So here it is)

OPENER: Freeda
CLOSER: Freeda
FLOW: Krayz1e
MULTIS: Krayz1e
WORDPLAY: Freeda
NAMEPLAY: Neither/Tie
META-SIMILIES: Neither/Tie
PUNCHES: Krayz1e
HUMOR: Krayz1e
CREATIVITY: Freeda
ENJOYMENT: Krayz1e

5 --- 4

Vote : Krayz1e

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[Enzo R.]

thanks boss...

2-1 KB...UPPIN YOU CHIMPS!!!...

[krayz1e b1zzy]

what happened to everyone?? it seem like this section died down since the end of last month...i see only 3 ppl here regularly

[Enzo R.]

duznt it piss u off...grrrrrr...oh well, guess i'll hav to wait a lil longer to confirm my win...lol,jk...

[krayz1e b1zzy]

lol honestly im thinkin more about goin to the bone concert tonight

[Enzo R.]

take sum pics and share them wit us later...

[Vega/Set]

this battle is done......2-1 kray gets the win

[Vega/Set]

sry it had to end this way...but noone was comin in...sry again u2

[krayz1e b1zzy]

good battle freeda5th..thnx every1 who voted

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

well if i were able to vote, it woulda been tied

sucks though