Winner-------->Appletondon vs. Boss Smoke<------------Scar

[AppletonDon]

house rules
16-18 bars
4-1 t.k.o
3-0 k.o

[AppletonDon]

aight ill drop first

[AppletonDon]

Ok time for the big boss,u bout to catch a big loss and get smoked//
Fake ass gangsta tried walkin up in my hood his ghetto pass got revoked//
You cant be serious wanna see me loc runup get ya feelings hurt //
Reach up unda my seat and unload watch da tech dispurse in spurts//
His IM is Boss Da Genius call him Boss Da Penis this pussy bout to get dicked//
This nigga aint got no hustle or flow so when u see this faggot whoop that trick//
Boss'll get dropped lower than my eyes get when im hittin the weed//
Im the bonecrusher grabbing yo attenchun! poppin u till ya yuggins'll bleed//(the former no limit rapper young bleed)
Air ya whole space out blowin ya face out all thats left is a chalk trace out//
Extended clip will shut up yo extended lip and u wont speak no doubt//(no doubt is the pop group with the song dont speak)
Try to tarnish my name ill varnish ya frame wood u really wanna go toe to toe//
Your future is lookin a little bleek so when the slugs fly you betta get low//(memphis bleeks label)
Better come correct or dont come at all u in da wrong organization//
Have the physicians pickin at yo body parts like Doctor Operation//
If u hustlin get back to ya block cause with rap u pushin it rick ross//
This kid stuck in the 80's call him tony danza so smoke whos the boss//

[Boss_Smoke]

Ayo,

Apple ain't shit, he a loser, I'm a manicipal winner//
Because you suck dick like Krabapple does to Principal Skinner// :doh:
You just like Syxx a gangsta ass bitch, that ain't doing shit//
You like Ja Rule, fake mothafucka with below average spit//
Your rhymes are like a crappy game of Scrabble//
Foul ass lines cheap as fuck like a travel//
I read your lines you saying less than a deaf man, dead partly//
Boss Da Penis? Wow, that sucks like a Hilton at a party//
You can't be serious, like Nelly spitting gangsta//
50 people laugh at your ass proving you a wanksta//
A fake prankster, makes Apple look fake and dumb//
Like a blind man walking straight into a strip club//
Aluminum rims on his whip; the fake dubs//
Your whole style is wack like Xenon, or Kate's love// (Tom Cruise, connects with the last line, and Xenon is that fake ass planet for them dumbass Scientology bitches)
Come at me again son, and I'll make this Apple bald without a win//
Dressing in women's clothes, Apple's gay with the homo sin//

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[Syxx_Ten]

Opener- boss
Punches- apple
Flow-apple
Multies-tie
Wordplay- tie
Nameplay-tie
Similies/Meta's-apple
Personals- boss
Creativity- apple
Humor- boss
Closure-apple
Enjoyment-niether


weak battle guys but i gotta give it to apple his was a lil better then boss but both keep improving

[Boss_Smoke]

Damn Sal, you deleted a shit-load of my posts...Sent me back down to 723...Oh well, :D

1-0 (Apple)

Uppin!

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[Enzo R.]

Opener- Boss(lmao, nice delivery)
Punches- Apple(some were forced though due to stretched lines)
Flow-Boss(by far...apple, condense those lines)
Multies-NONE(there were none)
Wordplay- NONE(where are they???)
Nameplay-NONE(weak and forced)
Similies/Meta's-Boss(in quantity)
Personals- NONE
Creativity- Apple(nice concepts)
Humor- Boss
Closure-Apple
Enjoyment-NONE

4-3

Favorite Line Bonus:

Apple

This nigga aint got no hustle or flow so when u see this faggot whoop that trick//
Boss'll get dropped lower than my eyes get when im hittin the weed//

both lines were delivered well...

Your future is lookin a little bleek so when the slugs fly you betta get low//

so so but u delivered it well again...


Boss, not Rev, because it would be weird if this were Rev when Rev ain't battling in this thread, right????

Because you suck dick like Krabapple does to Principal Skinner//

funny line...

OVERALL 6-5 APPLETONDON

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[Vega/Set]

i'll post up my vote wen i get a chance...

[Boss_Smoke]

2-0 (Apple)

Uppin!

Someone tell Freeda I'm not Rev :que:

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[Vega/Set]

Opener- boss
Punches- apple
Flow-Boss
Multies-neither
Wordplay- neither
Nameplay-tie
Similies/Meta's-apple
Personals- apple
Creativity- none
Humor- boss
Closure-apple
Enjoyment-niether


4-3 Apple

vote= apple





very weak battle--especially from u boss...i honestly think this is your worst battle verse...ne way theres my vote



3-0 ko.. Apple gets the win

[Enzo R.]

2-0 (Apple)

Uppin!

Someone tell Freeda I'm not Rev :que:

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lmao, sorry about that...it's cuz i just finished votin at the rev battle with apple and wen here...lol...

[Boss_Smoke]

very weak battle--especially from u boss...i honestly think this is your worst battle verse...ne way theres my vote



3-0 ko.. Apple gets the win

Umm....thanks? :)

Nice battle Apple

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[AppletonDon]

yeah no doubt boss i dont feel the battle was bad at all but i guess opinions are like assholes everyones got one

[AppletonDon]

can we get this one closed

[AppletonDon]

Vega or The Kid are ya gonna conclude this or what also what about my battle with jayshort

[Vega/Set]

this is concluded wut r u talkin bout?....

[AppletonDon]

dont ya close it with that winner and scar thing

[Vega/Set]

lol....ok i will