Winner--------->Boss Smoke vs. Vega<---------------Scar

[Vega/Set]

Topical Battle for Tournament:

Topic= Self Hype


16-18 LINES
first to 3 wins
checc-in first n then you have 48 hours to drop

[Boss_Smoke]

check mo'fo :beejee:

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[Vega/Set]

checc

[Vega/Set]

im lettin you all kno before hand--this topic was self-hype, which you'll see alot of in my verse--its also a battle which you'll see me attacc as well--this is prolly the only topic both can be combined like that so jus remember that wen voting....







Punchin keys like i was mad at my bag of coke//
thing is, im sad but laughin cuz im goin against a joke//
--the boss of jokes at that--so let me show this ni66a how to rap//


...these are facts so get used to the beatin that im treatin u with snoop*//
heatin you with words like im servin you a hot bowl of alphabaet soup//
--grouped wit losers cuz u couldnt touch me wit a 10ft pole or pass me in a coupe//
your bein looped--cuz all i be doin is runnin round you like i was chasin my tail//
your facing jail--cuz against me your mind locc's up like locc jaw that you cant bail//
hail the so-called greatest-- by throwin hardend snow at his latest written//
an im talkin bout u ni66a--cuz what you be livin defintly aint wut you be spittin//
im fitted for this game like a tailor came by before i beat this fuccn lame//
im duccn fame--cuz my talent will only drop if moneys pictured in the frame//
i claim to be the best--well i've layed everyone to rest like time does//
jus give me time n i'll do the same to you--why?--well jus because//
cuz wut once was a regular, became a legend in the grounds//
think you better than me--but i'll beat u into a frown wit verbs n nouns//
down n out--thats wut you'll be feelin like kanye did goin against ouija//
cuz i got 26 keys to serve u wit in different ways--so sense that u cant beat me//




*snoop= not the rapper but its also meant as a person who watches..bacc in the day it was also meant as a snitch

[Boss_Smoke]

Ayo,

I got rhymes that're like gold, being mined by Aztecs//
In the ancient ruins of Mecca checking for bad reps//
The lines that I wrote stored in a special room guarded by restless shoguns//
Defended forever, my rhymebook stored never to be seen just heard when I be blowin'//
So when I spit, history of death and destruction in effortless candence flowin'//
And with a flick, I can destroy every soul showin' with the my mighty rhymes glowin'//
When it comes down to the art of the rhyme, untouched, I flow with the rivers//
Fire like volcanoes, yet when its flipped, my mind is so cold you can't help but shiver//
8 bars is just a sliver, of what I can deliver 'cause my spittin' triggers fingers to split shit bitter//
Consider this litter for a hip hop junkies liver to kill and jitter his mind, burn it like cinder//
Render and hinder him a useless giver to my legendary status, 'cause my mind straight glitters//
My CD's like an injection for every head pressin', messin' with my shit just to learn a lesson//
Testin' they minds guessin' to see if they can handle the nestin' of rhymes into they heads restin'//
Drills inside them, makes them forget they ever had a life before my lines made them confide then//
It tries them, only the strong survive my albums alive, and strive for more from the legend that is Smoke//
The weak ones choke, on the words I spoke, and croak at a low age loc'd, broke and toked with their brain roped//

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Well, my self hype joint was basically about how I blow the minds of the listeners. The rhymes I use are so unbelievably great, only true heads can handle them, and the true hip hop fans use my records as a true rap fix and shit....Yeah, I'm pretty sure everything else is pretty self-expplanitory :D

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[Boss_Smoke]

Ahhhhhhight Vega, good luck mayne.

open for teh votes :)

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[Vega/Set]

good drop boss, well done

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

this was a weak topic, there isnt much depth to it and it is one of the first played topics, i wulda liked u guys to create sumthin more of a masterpiece with a better topic to suit u two

nonetheless, u both came pretty good

after readin both verses, i was lookin for creativity, vocabulary, flow(which both basically were weak on for the overly stretched lines), and who really shined on the topic

vega's shit was good, he had strong approaches, his shit was pretty hard, he was soundin real tough on it, BUT, alot of the lines made it seem like a battle verse, YES, a battle/self-hype can be combined, but it shouldnt be combined if this is a topical battle

similar to a text battle where you must focus on ur opponent more than urself, a self-hype topical shuld focus on urself more than ur opponent, and thats wat i saw really hurt vega a little, Boss, the greatest flaw were those fuckin lines, really really too long of lines to find the flow unless u split that verse which could come out as a 30+ bar verse, but ur creativity was superior over vega's, and ur vocab use was also a plus in ur part, and because ur verse had a greater reflection to the topic, i vote for you, good job guys

VOTE - Boss Smoke

[Syxx_Ten]

i picked the topic for this battle i had another one but we decided on this one.

neways i agree wit alias this was a self hype battle but vega u didnt praise yoself like i thought u would u focused a lil more on him then urself as for boss came wit a whole storyline type self hype verse so my vote goes to

BOSS SMOKE

[Boss_Smoke]

Alright, 2-0 (me)

thanks for voting

uppin for teh votes :)

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[Vega/Set]

its all good man--an you kno wut i figured you would win boss cuz after u dropped n i read your verse i was like damn he got that shit won--even though u stretched your lines to hell it was still a good verse--you got this one homie good shit

[Boss_Smoke]

its all good man--an you kno wut i figured you would win boss cuz after u dropped n i read your verse i was like damn he got that shit won--even though u stretched your lines to hell it was still a good verse--you got this one homie good shit

:what!:

Thanks Vega, that means a lot.

Nice battle mayne, your verse was :cool: , and to tell the truth, I was sure I was gonna lose. My first topical/battle against you, I had little confidence. And when I saw your verse, I was kinda like, well, I'll do what I can, I'ma lose anyways.

But it looks like I was succesful :)

Off to round 3 :cool1:

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[Vega/Set]

:clap:.....it aint that hard to beat me--i figured if i did my topical that way that u would to, n i would win lol--i was wrong n wen i was readin i was like fucc! he didnt copy me lol.....good lucc though in the final round

[~Longway~JNC Records]

I am confused first to 3 but only 2 folks voted -- how is it over?

[Enzo R.]

yea, i dunt get it either...it shuld still be goin on...

[Vega/Set]

cuz i wanted it to be over--wen u battle all the time u can kinda predict the outcome of a battle....and u kno wut after wut was brought here boss deserves the win neway--i should have known better then to drop a "battle" verse wen it was a topical battle...but shit happens n u move on...it was my choice to end it early, it dont bother me ne how--


cuz ikno i can smoke the boss--jus by chokin the flaws--raise his verse n put it in the losers wall--ni66a against me in a real battle u drop like youngsta's balls

lol

[Enzo R.]

ooooh...basically...

[PIRU'N'BONE]

eeh basically he sayin he got'em wit tha topic but boss dont wanna hit'em up wit tha battle battle

[Boss_Smoke]

cuz i wanted it to be over--wen u battle all the time u can kinda predict the outcome of a battle....and u kno wut after wut was brought here boss deserves the win neway--i should have known better then to drop a "battle" verse wen it was a topical battle...but shit happens n u move on...it was my choice to end it early, it dont bother me ne how--


cuz ikno i can smoke the boss--jus by chokin the flaws--raise his verse n put it in the losers wall--ni66a against me in a real battle u drop like youngsta's balls

lol

I'd whoop yo ass in an actual battle son! You don't want none, and if you ever did want to battle me, I suggest you go to Home Depot and get yourself a ladder so you can even see on my level. :)

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