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Vega/Set
10-05-2006, 02:33 AM
Topical Battle for Tournament:

Topic= Represent your hood

16-18 LINES
first to 3 wins
checc-in first n then you have 48 hours to drop

Enzo R.
10-05-2006, 01:32 PM
represent my hood...damn, havent wrote bout this type of stuff since i started writing raps...checkin in...

PIRU'N'BONE
10-05-2006, 02:20 PM
checkin in

PIRU'N'BONE
10-05-2006, 07:27 PM
just talk bout my hood or diss'em at tha same time?

PIRU'N'BONE
10-05-2006, 07:30 PM
o well here's my drop i didnt really diss cuz it says topic battle but here it is

Nigga be ready to drop if u step in my block
Niggaz in my hood already know we up to know good
We aint tha niggaz to play wit, up in tha 8oh5
Cuz thugz ,hustlaz, killaz always down to ride
Leavin no nigga behind cuz we killin all ya’ll
So u thinking im liein? Creep ya lil ass to tha town of 18-88
First step thru that gate its ur first step in testin ur fate
N if u try n retaliate, it aint got faze us
Nigga actin devilish like tha nigga satan made us
We them PIRU skull splitters wut u know bout that
And don’t think u gon end wit just a lil pap pap
Cuz after your dead it aint over yet, chop up ur body parts to dead remains
Have bambino eat it so he can maintain his frame
Im at tha top of my game, goin krayzie loco insane
If you even try and fuck wit me mayne
Cuz I got tha block on lock, 805 we gettin live
From tha beach to tha valley faded off tha maui
Runnin this shit better believe its KILLA CALI!

****8oh5= 805 Ventura County
****Town of 18-88 = tha year PIRU Ca was founded 1888
****Bambino=my dog’s name

Enzo R.
10-05-2006, 07:30 PM
its topical, so theres no dissin...u write about da topic and the one wit da best verse wins....

edit...nvm lol...

PIRU'N'BONE
10-05-2006, 07:33 PM
well i kinda did some dissin but owell its a battle rite haha...

Enzo R.
10-06-2006, 11:23 AM
Have a look in my premisis - It's evident ya end exists- -
Where the men consist of ten and kids equipped with metal grips- -
Pedal quick through the borough that hurdles the murderous- -
What this verse depicts is the colonel living we earned within- -
The urge to twist heads when they give dirty looks- -
Gangs vary from the locals to the bigs - Each a dirty crook- -
Learning books burn in our palms - We're taught the street lessons- -
Silk City teams gettin cream - Each must keep weapons- -
But each will plead penance - Skin color's out the subject- -
Sin covers out the love and slim gunners out to cut sets- -
They tuck techs - I tuck texts of written words to represent- -
This driven dirt as resident to spittin verbs like presidents- -
Evidence clear when it's murder that unfolds out our chests- -
Soldiers so cold-hearted - You see the smoke out the breaths- -
Most of us smoked out from zest - Pride is superior- -
We 9-7-3 in here - Derived of the finest rhyme and .9 grip interiors- -
Denied of these good careers - We clearly here as ground dwellers- -
A P-town fellow - Where friends are family - Launching gats in house shelters- -

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Enzo R.
10-06-2006, 11:29 AM
each detail represents many individuals...so if u think i go off topic, think again...

Vega/Set
10-06-2006, 06:46 PM
ight well i dont feel like breakin down verses nor do i think that the other way of voting accounts for topicals so i'll state my vote:

you both did well but freeda came wit multi's, great flow, all out great bars in his verse n he stucc on topic as well--not to say that pirunbone didnt do well but imo freeda's verse was better so he gets my vote for overall better verse



Vote= Freeda5thdawg

Syxx_Ten
10-07-2006, 01:15 AM
good job both of u but when it came dwon to it freeda's verse was more on point with the topic the flow was there good battle both of ya'll my vote goes to freeda

Boss_Smoke
10-07-2006, 04:31 AM
Well, I've read over each verse multiple times, because I think this topical was pretty close, while both were different styles of repping they hood, I think PIRU came better in the repping of the hood. Freeda came with some great rhymes like he always does, and his flow was on point, as usual, but PIRU had some cold ass lines in his verse and also had flow. Overall though, when I count who I think was talking about the topic the most, and who's verse I enjoyed more, my vote goes to PIRU.

VOTE : PIRU

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Vega/Set
10-07-2006, 07:16 AM
2-1 (freeda)


..uppin for votes

PIRU'N'BONE
10-07-2006, 04:34 PM
nice nice... good shit FREEDA barely read ur shit rite now n i liked it coo coo...


c'mon mayne LETS GET SOME VOTES

Vega/Set
10-08-2006, 06:10 AM
if we dont get votes soon, im gonna end this so we can continue

PIRU'N'BONE
10-08-2006, 01:19 PM
c'mon ppl VOTE so we can see who at tha finals....

PIRU'N'BONE
10-08-2006, 01:20 PM
ay n to add that aint coo losin like that so VOTE!!!

Enzo R.
10-08-2006, 01:25 PM
and it aint coo winnin like that either...i hate when that happens...

VOTE CHIMPS!!! VOTE!!!...

c-toby
10-08-2006, 09:08 PM
vote=freeda

freedas verse is unquestionably the more lyrical of the two verses,but i think is the best verse ive seen pirunbone spit...i liked ur style in this one piru...congrats to both of u

Vega/Set
10-09-2006, 02:24 AM
3-1 freeda


freeda wins...good battle