Winner<--------Appletondon vs. SyxxTen<---------------Scar

[AppletonDon]

16-18 LINES
first to 3 wins
ill go first then you have 48 hours to drop after me

[AppletonDon]

On a murder mission my vision is to murder a syxxten//
Verbal lynchin gut wrenchin in peace youll be restin//
16 bars or 16 shots Syxx niggas Ten glocks at ya front door//
Bustin off, clip drop ya body Marry Land(maryland)like Baltimore//
What im holdin on my waist'll knock a section out ya face//
Such a disgrace when the slugs fly ya brain'll be misplaced//
No trace get erased,copper fragments on ya tounge leavin a bitter taste//
Squeeze ya severely see me barely dude getting beat worse than the OJ case//
Lengend Killa, cant be for reala, dude sweeter than honey and vanilla//
I fucked bitches you tryin to marry so he more bitter than sasparilla//
So hold these hollow tips force feed you now swallow clips//
Got a desert eagle that'll do you like crime mob and rock yo hips//(crimb mobs new single)
What Slugs gotta do with it Dont need the burner smack you like tina turner//
Tell yo girl keep her nose outta stuff that dont concern her for i razor ramon her//(the old wwf wrestler)
Your a bazooka joe wrapper(rapper) nuthin but a joke//(bazooka Joe Gum)
didnt even last 1 round in the tourney then dissappeared like smoke//(talkin bout that L he caught to boss smoke in the tourney)
Sucker MC hold 3 he Run when he see i make him sound like DMC//(that wack album he tried to release)
Spittin crack till you switch ya flows now he changing his name like peedi peedi//(from state property used to be called peedi crakk)

Aight Syxx U up Holla!

[krayz1e b1zzy]

wow one of the best verses i seen atd love the marry land shit

[Syxx_Ten]

see how im a play-off his weak 16 like a nba bracket//
dis nigga thinks his verse is cuttin it but he really cant hack it//
da only time this cat pins a women is on his wall when he tacks it//
put slugs up in ya jacket & watch yo heart spill out in yo pocket//
yo first attempt in da tourney failed like johnny knoxville on a rocket//*
put somethin in yo socket besides yo motha fuckin eye//
better get the black suits and plenty of tissue 4 yo moms when she cry//
listen to dis guy talk about killin in marry land knowin his crew is da cats from disneyland//
come to da city of dreams, my clips hold 42 shots ill put a dot on yo brand/**
outta DON'S 16 bars only SYXX hit hard the other TEN bars should get u banned//
my lyrics give u swollen glands cuz this shit i spit is that sick//
da only reason im rockin my hips is cuz u flappin ya lips on my dick//
dudes livin off wic hes broke and its startin to show in his poor wordplay//
APPLE u aint no emcee the only rappin u do is on birthdays & holidays??
random displays of violence gots this bitch runnin,duckin and hidin//
im like rambo in dis bitch wit my 2 gloccs gunnin,buckin and slidin//
a TON of bullets dividin his head like moses did the red sea//
on a scale from 1-10 dis young buck gets a 5 but SYXX is da only TENN-I-SSEE//(TENNESSEE)


#NBA PLAYOFF BRACKETS HAVE 16 TEAMS
*=TOOK HIM 2 TRIES IN JACKASS 2
**=CITY OF DREAMS IS LOS ANGELES
CLIPS=SHORT FOR CLIPPERS
42,DOT ON YO BRAND=42 E.BRAND
DOT ON YO BRAND=CLOTHES HE WEARS
***YOUNG BUCK IS A RAPPER FROM TENNESSEE


good shit dawg

[krayz1e b1zzy]

damn shit hit hard as well syxx ill drop my vote in a lil

[AppletonDon]

good verse syxx this gon be a close one

[Syxx_Ten]

Thanks Dawg U Too Good Luck Uppin For Votes

[Vega/Set]

uppin for votes--i'lll vote l8r wen i get off work tonite

[krayz1e b1zzy]

Opener- Appletondon

Punches-Tied: you two both killed it

Flow- Tied: you both came very correct

Multies- Appletondon: loved em

Wordplay-Appletondon: you killed it

Nameplay- Syxxten: you killed it

Similies/Meta's-Tied:u both came correct

Personals-Syxxten: lil bit more than apple

Creativity-Syxxten

Humor-Appletondon: def. have me laughin

Closure-Syxxten: Loved your closing

Enjoyment-Tied: 4/4

Favorite Lines:
Appletondon : 16 bars or 16 shots Syxx niggas Ten glocks at ya front door//
Bustin off, clip drop ya body Marry Land(maryland)like Baltimore//+2

Syxxten : a TON of bullets dividin his head like moses did the red sea//
on a scale from 1-10 dis young buck gets a 5 but SYXX is da only TENN-I-SSEE//+1.5

Over-All = Both of you came hard, and it was hard for me to pick a winner. in both verse i read not one bar that shouldn't have been included in a battle. so with that said my vote goes to Appletondon with a .5 point higher and thats because i was feelin that line slightly more but other wise you two came equally great and you both deserve the win.

Vote =Appletondon

[AppletonDon]

appreciate da vote i know its gon be real close

[Syxx_Ten]

yeah this was sick battle good shit apple

[Vega/Set]

Opener- Syxx
Punches- tied
Flow- tied
Multies- Syxx--i saw a few more then i did in apples
Wordplay- Appletondon
Nameplay- Appletondon
Similies/Meta's- tied
Personals- Syxx
Creativity- tied
Humor- none
Closure- Appletondon
Enjoyment- Syxx--by slightly a lil bit


Vote = Syxx---but barely


u guys gotta lay off the gun thang--its more played out then jenna jameson's pussy..c'mon guys ikno u more creative than that..and also i saw punches but the attempts werent quite towards eachother i mean ya it was there but not like it should have been...the thing that made this so close is that both your verses are almost similar which can b good thang or not...aside from all that i will say i liked readin them but u guys need to work a on jus a few thangs--good battle nigs

[AppletonDon]

aight coo respect da opinion lets get more votes

[Enzo R.]

Opener- SICKS
Punches- TYDE
Flow- SICKS
Multies- TYDE
Wordplay- AHPOLE
Nameplay- SICKS
Similies/Meta's- TYDE
Personals- AHPOLE
Creativity- TYDE
Humor- NUNRY
Closure- AHPOLE
Enjoyment- AHPOLE

problem was all da lack of good conepts and forced delivery of the punches..keep at it both of you, this was close...

VOTE - AHPOLE...

[Syxx_Ten]

good shit uppin for more votes

[PIRU'N'BONE]

Opener- syxx
Punches-syxx
Flow-tie
Multies- syxx
Wordplay-apple
Nameplay-syxx
Similies/Meta's-apple
Personals-apple
Creativity-apple
Humor-none
Closure-syxx
Enjoyment-apple

close battle it came down to tha closure to me on this one.... really they both good versus but i liked syxx closure in tha end but it was really hard to decide but good shit ta both

vote=syxx

[Vega/Set]

2-2 One More Vote And This One Is Over

[Kurruption]

Opener-apple
Punches-apple
Flow-apple
Multies-apple
Wordplay-syxx
Nameplay-syxx
Similes/Meta's-apple
Personals-non
Creativity-syxx
Humor-none
Closure-syxx
Enjoyment-tied

Overall 5 to 4 Appletondon won this

his bars came out more on point

[AppletonDon]

aight so its a wrap good battle syxx this was a tight one

[~Longway~JNC Records]

its actually called murdaland :)

[Syxx_Ten]

good battle

[AppletonDon]

no doubt