Winner--------->Boss Smoke vs. Freeda<-------------------Scar

[Vega/Set]

ne where from 16-32 LINES

first to 3

Checc-in.......after checc u have 48 hours to drop or get DQ'd


Good lucc to you both

[Enzo R.]

checkin in...

blind drops again?...

[Vega/Set]

of course

[Vega/Set]

Boss are you gonna checc-in??

[Boss_Smoke]

check :beejee2:

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[Enzo R.]

back wit a drastic attempt to bash this kat to a dent- -
with rapid dispensed raps that ascend - don’t ask “it’s da end?”- -
once action's commenced - I crack boss - of course dis fag lost- -
culdnt 'shift' this to a 'W' typin ‘win’ in caps lock- -
is that wrong? - I slash hard and split a bottle in deep mentals- -
cutting ‘fags in his mind’ like mythological ‘greek temples’- -
I reach into ya thoughts - my words drive and beat spits dat u wieldin- -
and let da ‘third eye’ look ‘deep’ into ya feelings- -
to kill is appealing wit mics that I hold and flow da nitro- -
even if ya ‘click rised’ - ya shine dims like broken light bulbs- -
my rhymes hold projector-like gats to blow erections in bak- -
fuck ‘heat seekers’ - I issue missles wit ‘smoke’ detectors attached- -
kno, its effort I lack - keystyle this whole message like that- -
and show u cant flow - let alone hold ya own record or track- -
it ended up scratched - I’m tearin back raps-n-impairing that crap- -
and u wonder y people aint ‘feelin Smoke’ like we wearing gas masks- -
I swear the back strap will blast back - and this aint a gun talk- -
my tongue sparks the ‘shots I lick’ datll make ya lungs pop- -
u chump, watch - its like holy korans wen I forger this restricted verse- -
or “Pro” and “Cons” the way I ‘expert’ at torturing this ‘prisoner’- -
so listen, first - I can easily break ya lines evenly - even without symmetry- -
cuz defeatin me? - there’s better chances of addin God to heathen needs- -
reason being, u aint shit - fuck da plain spits needed to bust at u hoe- -
da flame grip’ll leave u more ‘stiches’ den mistreated stuffed animals- -
like tough cannibals - u cant push away my hunger for them emcees- -
ya rhymes don’t ‘add up’ - so I ‘surround’ ya ‘problem’ like parenthesis- -
and end this enemy - he aint no thuggin recon - he’ll flows nuttin so wrong- -
dropping ‘off the top’ wit ‘less style’ than low budget salons- -
so don’t budge when u gone - wen my verse explodes - ur worth’s unknown- -
da shows over - don’t expect this ‘son’ to shine at ‘curtain close’- -

....g'luk smoke...

[Vega/Set]

boss if u dont drop after tonite you d/q'd n freeda will win

[Boss_Smoke]

Ayo,

Another loser in the making, Freeda up for the taking//
And just like his structure I'll have his career slowly breaking//(*)

Only way I'll hit you is if I aim for the dirt//
Hit you with a verse, 23 days after your birth//(**)

Little shit you come with, an' you ain't even spittin' it//
Now ya'll got me battling a dumbass who's calls himself illiterate//(***)

A little bit brittle this cat's wack, he ain't going far//
Even if he had the help of God, his own personal Allah//(****)

He comes at me, flashy talking bashly getting his ass kick madly//(*****)
Blasting with blanks fagly, its sad see he tries hard but falls flatly//

The only way he'd get rhymes is if he got Pac and became a necromaner//
When he spits shit ends quick but I'm the savior injecting him with cancer//(******)

Faster, I'm the average man's master, spitting at Freeda like I'm the blastmaster//
Bringing him out like I'm a trashmaster, leaving him in last or at the back raftors//

I smack bastards, and have them end quicker than Freeda's crap daily spits//
End his existence with persistence and quick spits having him changing his Alias//

And I watch his career as it slows to a monotone jog//
Because he's clearly biting L's like the other 5th dawg//(*******)

Free da 5th dog I done destroyed like Mike did to little kids//
In his home, Neverland, Freeda sucking on his dick//

Treat him like a bitch, speaking of this trick, kill him with a rhyme//
Murk him in the head with a verse, murder him dead like Columbine//

He raps about keyboards, this kid is clearly a nerd//
Look at his verbs, words about Typing To Learn//

Dissing ain't in his blood, he can't do it at all//
Pissing in the mud, he calls his hut, so he can suck my balls// (heh, I burst out laughing after I re-read this line :D)

Oh noes! Freeda is on another sucking rampage, stop him//
The guy that makes kanabara look like Rakim//

I'll fuck you up dawg, 5 times till your mind is free//
Than I'll free da tech 5 times on yo dawgs leaf you dead like a winter tree//

Have you fearing my grudge, choking on my ring of techs//
As it surrounds you, suffocates the fake, gasmask won't help you escape the death//

--Explanations--

(*)His structure - looks like - its breaking - -
(**)He joined the board 23 days after his birthdate
(***)Check his user title "Ill-iterate"
(****)His sig has Rakim Allah in it
(*****)His sig is flashy :)
(******)07-08-89 = Cancer zodiac sign
(*******)Think back, all you wiley vets :)

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[Boss_Smoke]

Alright Freeda, g'luck mayne.

Votes...

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[Enzo R.]

IT'S ILL-LITERATE!!!...lol, jp...

UPPIN VOTES CHIMPS!!!...

[Vega/Set]

Opener- Boss
Punches- Boss
Flow- Freeda
Multies- Freeda
Wordplay- Tie
Nameplay- Freeda
Similies/Meta's- tie
Personals- Boss
Creativity- tie
Humor- none
Closure- tie
Enjoyment- Boss


Vote = Boss Smoke


i really liked this battle it was close n it was str8 heat from both very very good job u 2 this is wut i like to see in battles......this is one of the best shit i seen from u boss n it shows.....u came wit punches mixes in wit personals which is always a heavy hitter--n cuz of that thats basically wut made me vote for u...freeda i think u already kno u had good shit..so good job both u--keep shit like this up

[Enzo R.]

thanks for votin vega....

1-0 BOSS...UPPIN VOTES!!!...

[Syxx_Ten]

Opener- boss
Punches- boss
Flow- freeda
Multies- freeda
Wordplay-boss
Nameplay- freeda
Similies/Meta's- tie
Personals- boss
Creativity- tie
Humor- tie
Closure- boss
Enjoyment-boss


boss gets the win
good battle both of ya'll boss way to step it up good job

[Boss_Smoke]

2-0 (Boss_Smoke)

Thanks foh votings ya'll.

Lets get some more though.

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[PIRU'N'BONE]

Opener-boss
Punches-boss
Flow-Multies-boss
Wordplay-freeda
Nameplay-freeda
Similies/Meta's-boss
Personals-boss
Creativity-freeda
Humor-none
Closure-boss
Enjoyment-boss


boss wins this one... his was really better than freeda's but freeda did good but wen we battled it was a lil better than this one.... good shit both of u...

vote=boss smoke

[Vega/Set]

well done guys--good battle

[Boss_Smoke]

Yay!

But...thats it? No Medal of Honor, or Honorary Statue :doh:

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[Syxx_Ten]

good job my nig congrats

[Syxx_Ten]

:stcthugsta: :clap: :drinky: :run: :mic: heres yo your medals

[Boss_Smoke]

:)

Coo.

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[Enzo R.]

i repped u... :) ...

[Boss_Smoke]

:cool:

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[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

u guys are sweet