Winner----->Vega vs. Krayz1eB1zzy<----------Scar {topical battle}

[Vega/Set]

18-32 LINES

First to 3 votes wins

48 hours to drop after you have checc'd in


BLIND DROPS




Topic is -- "Through your enemies eyes"

[Vega/Set]

Checc-in



He came through the storm--
Lookin for land that wasnt his and riches to keep him warm--
a money hungry greedy bastard, just-lookin-for-some-more--
--or--is here just for a thrill--
takin rapin women, killin kids- so a life he could feel--
sedatin and matin with girls inspite of age or an ill--
A god to other lands but was it god who had intended his plan--

Through your enemies eyes, they despise--
why--cuz you take shit that aint even yours--

Through your enemies eyes, you gon die--
why-- cuz you make greed into sum hated wars--

Through your eneimes eyes, they despise--
Through your enemies eyes, you gon die--
Cry all you want until you see the fire through your enemies eyes--


Now this man had an army--
taken souls from lands that wouldnt harm me--
cuz natives sticc together, somethin like a family--
so damn he-- for he no not of wut we speak--
and he no not of wut we learn and wut we teach--
--secretly devisin a prized minded plan--
arrived cuz of deprived starved n strife hands--
7 deadly sins and all from one man--
so to end a hardship cycle of destruction wit rifles--
--we became spiteful--so its only rightful to kill--
end his life in his sleep--set his motion to a stand still--

Through your eneimes eyes, they despise--
Through your enemies eyes, you gon die--
Cry all you want until you see the fire through your enemies eyes--

Now we're free-- the chains n cuffs let loose--
untied from a tight life like bein pulled off a noose--
we own ourselves again--now no more abuse--
--the god reduced to a mortal death--jus fused wit eternal rest--









it was hard to explain this story in only 32 lines..plus my skool n work got in the way but let me explain a few things...

this is about me, im the man that comes in n takes things over, im ruthless, money hungry, a rapist..etc etc....this is told from a natives point of view, basically my enemy seein as how they killed me...they were tired of the way they were treated n made a plan to kill me in my sleep--so they got there other natives that i took from other lands n got em to turn on me...the ppl in my "army" let the natives in my sleep place n let them kill me...thats basically the story if u couldnt get it...

[krayz1e b1zzy]

my eyes open--sweat drops i lose focus--
at best i flop,hopin that he'd not notice--
my nervousnes not showin--i spit and try to keep my composure--
but yet like a london security tying shoes, my guard still lowers--
you can call it anything u want hate, jealousy or envy--
but i'd tell you in a second there aint no jealousy in me--
i spit about the guns and knives but aint no felony in me--
still this kid snickers, when im walking around like im a big n99a--
thats just my pride in the way, im tryin to see the big picture--
i tried to look from far but i couldn't--
tried to go hard when i shouldn't--
i even tried to use my heart but i couldn't--
im stealin draws when i couldn't win...i know it's sad--
i only snitched on you to cover my own ass--
i still suffered from the fuckin loss--
but now im tryn to come out on top like a fuckin truck exhaust--
my anger and agression's progressin--i try to surpress it--
but im at that point where imma start confessin--
because i know he's still gonna stand like a consession--
i'll resort to tactics thats type low, i use techs but they more like a typo -- (=Techs=Texts=typo)
u see he's looking like bruce lee, and im feelin like that dude from tai bo--
with the kung fu grip hold yellin " die slow "--
but with no success i take one to the chest,neck, & 2 to the face--
im losing body parts at an alarming rate--
scars and all, my blood scattered along the walls and door--
i got the gun in arm but i just noticed that arm is on the floor--
this is all from me not being used to the street--
wait, he stopped at my legs..haha i guess he wasnt use to defeat--

[Vega/Set]

ight good shit--Takin votes now

[krayz1e b1zzy]

thnx vega urs too

[Boss_Smoke]

Sorry you too-I've been hella busy with shit I should've been doing anyways. Here's a vote anyways :

Well, I liked Vega's verse a bit more than krayz1e's. And if you ask me, that's one of the reasons you win topicals-enjoyability and immersion. Vega's was good for both of those departments, with the cool story going and all that. Good lyrics and multies, so he gets my vote.

VOTE -- VEGE

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[~Longway~JNC Records]

I second boss's vote-- really could not say it any better


Vote= Vega

Sal

[Vega/Set]

ok thats wats up-thanks for voting guys

2-0

[Vega/Set]

Keep Voting Plz!

[~Longway~JNC Records]

lazy fucks

[Vega/Set]

lol yea no shit

[Syxx_Ten]

good batte both of u but my vote goes to vega good on both sides but i just think his was a lil better with the topic good stuff both of guys oh yeah my bad it took so long to been real busy

[Vega/Set]

3-0

good verse kray--and im glad you took the time to step up--again good shit and good battle

[krayz1e b1zzy]

thanx my n99, u too.