Winner------>Appletondon vs. Southsider<---------Scar

[DOOM]

10 bars, and you go first, ok?

first 3 votes

[AppletonDon]

aight checcn in will drop in a min sorry 4 delay was not at work past 2 days no computer at home

[AppletonDon]

my bad dawg ima hafta drop 2 morrow had to catch up on some back work

[AppletonDon]

Southsider nuthin but a switchsider, constant dick rider\\
quick to bust and dipose this pussy like a used rough rider(the condom)\\
this dude wastin time, I, no anticipation free yo mind lyrical emancipation\\
check the demonstration this boy got a serious pedophile fascination\\(spm,is locked up for rapin a young girl)
This south park mexican wouldnt last a day in my hood now rollover\\(song on spm album)
quick he a little too sober somebody get pablo another cold corona\\
This 16 year ol baby gon phil(feel) my wrath spittin wack as aielion\\
only time dude hot is when he thinkin bout what mail(male) he on\\
Hotta than sizzler you fruity than a twizzler so im chew him up\\
hold on rookie u movin to fast do him like the dj and screw him up(slow down)\\
threw him up like westside when the lyrics regurgitate now learn ya fate\\
bullets penetrate ya face plate forgive me to elavate the souths murder rate\\
This bitch betta off lickin clits than spittin spits no way he winnin this\\
betta call it quits dont resist gettin touched up more than yo girls tits\\
Im flippin this while u slittin wrists can you doubt im killin this\\
Think not seal it bitch when u gettin less play than the 4 minute remix(avant f/bone)\\
Sick of u new cats with ya new raps u not real like guns with caps(capguns)\\
u just a little rugrat take yo moms tit out and wipe yo milk mustache\\
Ima have the last laugh think fast ass cause ya thugs aint emmortal god\\(mo thugs 3)
Nimrod nuthin but hype like a-rod i mac everybitch you got like ipod\\

[DOOM]

damn that was nasty!, i guess i'll have to step my game up, i'll drop tomorrow cause i got homework.

[AppletonDon]

aight coo

[DOOM]

Appletondon aint nuthing but a snitch, thinking he found a penny and now he rich
crying on Bones forget me like a little bitch, swallowing the KNICKS TEAM's dick up until the last inch
This cat makes me laugh when that he thinks he a chain gang soldier but he a fool
Bragging that you associate with gangsters but in reality you keep getting your ass beat by O.G's and stiil thinking your ass is cool
your ur raps r worse than george bushs speeches on crack, U dont wanna battle this mex
u cant beat me so get the f*ck out of here and go have some hand sex
a big blue bomb threat walkin through you and denying mercy's concept
Appletondon death is set, your the dying target using every letter of the alphabet
street cred, is your head layin dead before anyone heard what you said
you cant erase me i'll fill you up and sharpen you like a pencil's lead
Trying to make your rap look dominant over mine, But thats a mistake that will cause your defeat
My rap will get me the win and get more people excited than when you beat your meat
Appletondon is the trapped target in a net, your fate is set, i'm the dominant force that you just met
Your still a trainee and i'm a season vet, i'm bring my lyrical skill at the speed of a jet, cause i got that High-Speed in-ter-net

[AppletonDon]

aight uppin 4 votes

[StAyLOE07]

punchline - apple
multis - apple
metaphore - apple
wordplay - apple
flow - none
personal - none
enjoyment - apple

Apple
fav line - Southsider nuthin but a switchsider, constant dick rider\\
quick to bust and dipose this pussy like a used rough rider(the condom)\\

Think not seal it bitch when u gettin less play than the 4 minute remix(avant f/bone)\\
Sick of u new cats with ya new raps u not real like guns with caps(capguns)\\

south
fav line - Trying to make your rap look dominant over mine, But thats a mistake that will cause your defeat
My rap will get me the win and get more people excited than when you beat your meat

overall i think it a good battle but apple took this one with betta punchline n metaphore

vote = my vote goes to apple good battle

[Vega/Set]

punchline - apple
multis - apple
metaphore - apple
wordplay - apple
flow - tie
personal - none
enjoyment - tie

Apple



vote = my vote goes to apple

[Kurruption]

punchlines- apple
multies- apple
metaphors- apple
wordplay- apple
flow- apple
personal- southsider
enjoyment- apple

win= APPLE

His multies and wordplay he used did the trick.

[AppletonDon]

3-0 good battle sider