View Full Version : Winner------->Appletondon vs. Ness<---------Scar
<NESS>
11-01-2006, 11:13 AM
aiight u kno tha deal drop ya shit, homie.1
AppletonDon
11-01-2006, 11:33 AM
aight ill drop in a min
AppletonDon
11-01-2006, 12:41 PM
yo im bout to leave work ill drop in da mornin
AppletonDon
11-02-2006, 01:00 PM
Ok no squealin ima leave ya head spinnin like u ovadosin on penicillin\\
bet a million u not seein me like the parents of foster children\\
Its don da villian betta keep ya raps like ya weapon and conceal em\\
I aint gotta finnesse ya girl dawg she was ready and willing\\
this nigga keep dicks in his mouth cause he a pro on them tools\\ ( beat program)
whip him like child abuse lose i refuse u small caliber like a deuce deuce\\(.22 caliber gun)
layin verses down with precision pay attention da Don teachin u lesson Nelson\\
who felt son, come get some, lyrical don bomb scorchin i verbally melt son\\
ya rhyme aint intact eatin this cake nigga like a lil debbie snack\\
Smack like the dvd homeboy stuck like he smokin on PCP and crack get back\\
This nigga claim he thuggin ol boy you buggin ya stories is gettin borin\\
Guess thugs need love to he spend most his time bizzy in the adults only forum\\(check it out)
Ness from the BK betta slide on da freeway and bounce like a 6 tre\\(lowrider)
Shots spray duck down dude gettin put out like cigs in an ashtray\\
Today is my day like they say come from the heart cause weak is the flesh\\
N- E- S- S im da best no more no less u laid to rest so god bless\\
<NESS>
11-02-2006, 03:29 PM
i feel where u comin from but dawg step ur game up//
cause niggas runnin talkin bout dicks is fukken lamed up/
il tare ur fame up, u wont live another day//
im from brooklyn fam, we ride lambos(lamborginis) not six tres/
and u a dumb nigga get ur facts str8 cause u needs em//
u cant make beats on pro tools(recordin program) u punk bitch, u use reason(beat program)//
or fruity loops(beat program) seems u been runnin wit fruity dudes/
thugs need love too??? so why u mad dude???//
today is ur day, tha day u write ur will cause dead u gonna be//
cause u goin str8 to tha gutta, u slipped like butta off tha knife g//
i seem to make these bitches cry like every fukken time//
looks like they injected penecilin in my ass, cause im shittin crazy rhymes//
so back the fukk up tha thug has let out his story//
the day i quit writin these rhymes is wen u find ur glory//
so wen i take over, for the ppl i lyrcally kill bring a flower//
cause takin ova the battle grounds and maintianin is wat i call Absolute Power//
crazy shit i loved ur verse apple shit was sick
everybody get the votin
Kurruption
11-02-2006, 04:45 PM
Opener- Apple
Punches- Apple
Flow-apple
Similes/Meta's- Apple
Creativity-Ness
Enjoyment- Apple
win= Apple
It could have been better if Ness was more on the attack.
<NESS>
11-02-2006, 05:14 PM
^^ thanx mayn, yea i feel ya, i jus started battlin, im tryna get better. i hope battlin will help me out and hopefully win some. thanx man
~Longway~JNC Records
11-02-2006, 05:23 PM
yea with this one man appleton handled his thing-- His verse was strong-- probally the strongest I have ever seen from him --
Opener- Ness
Punches- Apple
Flow-Ness
Similes/Meta's- Apple
Creativity-Ness
Enjoyment- Apple
win= Appletondon
Much luv to both yall though -- you both came strong
i`m give this one to Appleton Don as well .. alotta that was becuz his verse was stronger and Ness fed off of it . which should make it alot easier for him .. so yea, my vote = APPLETON DON
<NESS>
11-02-2006, 05:52 PM
thanx yall, errr i sucked here, but fukk it il try to do better next time, thanx for tha feed yall, i appreciate
Vega/Set
11-02-2006, 06:06 PM
good verse though ness--jus next time focus all your verses towards your opponet..n work more on your punches...add sum nameplay to em too...you did good though mayn-- keep it up
Syxx_Ten
11-03-2006, 12:29 AM
good battle
AppletonDon
11-03-2006, 05:10 AM
appreciate da votes good battle ness
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