View Full Version : Winner---->Syxxten vs. Vega<--------Scar
Vega/Set
11-02-2006, 02:02 PM
16-32 lines
first to 3 votes wins
BLIND DROPS!
checc-in first~~~once checc'd in you have 48 hours to drop
topic is ---> life wit family/friends
Syxx_Ten
11-03-2006, 12:03 AM
checcin in
Vega/Set
11-03-2006, 04:48 AM
i aint checc'n in yet cuz im goin out for the weekend..but wen i come bacc i will
Syxx_Ten
11-05-2006, 02:40 AM
hey im gonna be outta town for a couple days ill drop when i get bacc peace
Vega/Set
11-08-2006, 10:47 AM
Checc'n in-------i forgot bout this but ne way here's my verse
All my life my family was there for me--but not my mother or father//
so growin up it didnt bother me to turn into a GD G runnin streets like a martyr//
now harder than that was keepin this secret from the woman that gave me birth//
but unearthed at the time of me failin the 9th grade for the 3rd time//
absurd mind--but i still stayed true to the G's in the street n the cause of the grind//
did my father care--never that, cuz that motherfuccer was neva there//
so my mentaility hit as soon as i realized the reality of my nature was from where//
2 states, 1 district, n 11 homes where my true fam was distant at times//
still persistant in the mind-- cuz i knew my fam was hours away near mine//
--they keep me occupied in life--neva knew if i was lied to n livin in strife//
cuz i didnt care either way--didnt care if i died durin the sinnin at nite//
cuz a knife pressed into my life would only release me to right//
but then thoughts gone cuz outta my left came an angel from heaven//
skip a couple chapters and just kno that she got me outta the dark where i was headin//
then spreadin news got out soon to my fam i was leavin for good//
not greive'n cuz i kno that somedays i would be bacc in the hood//
bacc to see my light that should have been there at first life where i stood//
--now shes my wife for good--gave up the game but not the fam in the hood//
im only misunderstood to others that dont understand my wife n brothers//
but uncover n discover that my life would have ended without my lover//
get a girl like that an even a broken heart from a mother would recover//
--and i can honestly say she saved wut was left of my life//
--and now wut i crave is her and her amazement and delight//
--you can even tell i went from sad to happy with what i write//
shit i even consider my life began as soon as she came into sight//
~Longway~JNC Records
11-08-2006, 10:55 AM
very nice homie
Syxx_Ten
11-10-2006, 06:07 AM
i been da man of da house since i was da age of four//
wonder wheres my dad and how come he dont call me nomore//
looking for a father figure but surrounded by nothin but thugs and bangers//
had a coo childhood til i got a lil older and noticed all da drugs and slangers//
not listenin to momz gettin hit wit hangers then havin her tell me it will be alright//
sept 11th of 96 i turned 14 then found out my grandma was dyin the next night//
took a flight to Los Angeles got home & 2 weeks later my otha granny passed//
my life went downhill my lil cuzins got adopted,got evicted we were goin nowhere fast//
time past by me and momz struggle to survive we moved from place to place//
its just me and her for the first time and i hate she always invades my space//
gangs replaced school i thought the thug life would be cool//
packin a tool like a handyman violence was my fuel//
played my mom for a fool she caught on and then we moved//
she found out i got expelled so there was no need to be removed//
i proved myself in da hood i was a hot boy like lil weezy//
gettin paid off stolen credit cards man i thought i had it easy//
i grew up a fuckin screw up like luda and young jeezy//
momz called me sleazy when the cops came to bust me//
got thrown out at 16 she talkin about how she cant trust me//
i got lucky cuz she loves me she just wants me to become a man//
so i moved out wit friends did my own thing lived by my plan//
thats when my crew began them niggas is are my fam//
so now we out here hustlin sellin O.Z's to grams//
we had to sell our house i started livin at da homie big sams//
in 2003 i joined uncle sam to be all i can be in da service//
3 months b4 boot camp i fall in love all of a sudden im fellin nervous//
army finds out i got an ulcer then there like sorry u cant serve us//
so my purpose must be bacc wit my baby, 6 months we broke up cuz obsessed//
on my 22nd bday i got my girl been together 2 yrs even my momz is impressed//
my bad forgot about this sry it wasnt that good but good lucc vega and dont forget that rematch clause lol
~Longway~JNC Records
11-10-2006, 07:06 AM
your girl and you still together yo?
Vega/Set
11-10-2006, 10:51 AM
uppin 4 votes
Syxx_Ten
11-10-2006, 12:08 PM
yea we are goin on 2 and a half yrs
Boss_Smoke
11-10-2006, 01:10 PM
Alright Vega, you had a good verse, but I felt the flow was off more often than not. And Syxx, I believe you had a very good verse too, and the flow was good, but the end of it all, was, I felt, abrupt. It seemed to just end out of no where. But, it was an overall good battle, and my vote has to go to....Syxx!
VOTE = Syxx_Ten
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StAyLOE07
11-10-2006, 01:31 PM
vega verse was good but i like syxx ten mo he had a betta flow n also had a good story, also i see he stood mo into tha topic talkin about friends and family...
so my vote goes to syxx ten
~Longway~JNC Records
11-10-2006, 02:09 PM
Both were strong-- really strong -- its a hard topic to spit over-- emotional and hard to get the fact in there -- Both had a really good flow use of vocab and storyline -- my vote goes to the verse I felt the most and that was Vegas so
Vote = Vega
Good job both of you
Kurruption
11-10-2006, 05:05 PM
Vega had a deep story, but the flow was a little off. Its good you found a good girl in her right mind cause that shit is hard.
Syxx story was deep and he had a bounce back ending. Its good youre still with your chick.
Winner= Syxx Ten
Syxx_Ten
11-11-2006, 12:39 AM
good battle vega thanks for votin so vega whats up wit dat other topic i had u down
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