Winner------->Krayz1eB1zzy vs. Appletondon<-------Scar

[krayz1e b1zzy]

Topical battle

* Topic : natural disasters (pick one and use it)

*16-26 bars

*48hrs to drop after me or me after u

*first to 3 votes takes it

[AppletonDon]

aight ill drop in a min

[krayz1e b1zzy]

checcin in-- hurricane homie

[AppletonDon]

do we both spit on the same topic or i can choose whatever i want

[AppletonDon]

when i say topic i mean do i spit on hurricanes to or can i choose a different natural disaster

[krayz1e b1zzy]

yea you chose your natural disater like wild fires, blizzards or someshit and use it against me. imma drop my shit now read it and then you can see what i mean then pick yours

[krayz1e b1zzy]

hurricane kraybizz

yea, i begin with a calm breeze, with ease, i knock u over like palm trees--
im an entity as you on your knees, i travel over seas, and gather energy--
my winds break the speed limit, tearing off roofs and twisting debris with it--
then trees lifted, your windows you tacked ill break it--
you should have been evacuated,you felt the reports were exaggerated--
as i get agitated i waited to see what i was rated--
a level 5 storm, anything in my way i level like college dorms--
including hospitals and cottage homes--
youve never heard a storm sing the perfect song--
when lyrics are spit it returns to the earth in the form of you being rained on--
tossing lightning bolts, dropping hail the size of golf balls--
one the size of soft balls ll'shatter your windshield--
your teeth chatter from wind chills, then ill flip your caddy into a windmill--
as meteorologist study me, im flooding your fucking street--
as youre clutching your heat, its impossible to puncture me--
your family clinging onto floating wood, one slips and drowns--
you look up, and my face emerges in a cloud--
sending surges into crowds--
striking so many people you'd thought surgeons was around--
the coast gaurd grabs your arm and pulls you aboard--
i smile then a jolt of lighting turn that boat into a board--
then i form, over new spots, the t.v. camera news shots--
perfect views got, kids, women and pets stranded on roof tops--
too much water to determine where the land marks--
as im observing floating historical land marks--
sun light sheds an ounce of hope as sunny skies try to break through --
i refuse and struggle to return the sky grey from blue--
i exhale one last blast , and cast a mass of wind --
to be remembered by my name but to return and be renamed again--

[AppletonDon]

aight coo im a give it a go

[AppletonDon]

flood appletondon

Emergency broadcast system blarin on ya tv screens loud as can be//
This is not your dreams it seems this is natural disaster reality//
My brothers earth,wind,and fire sit back and take a break//
Flood watch advisory civilians take caution and evacuate//
one drop,two drop,three drop,four//
its too late now its starting to pour//
lock your doors get on all fours and make sure your heart is right//
pray god be with you its gon be a very long night//
pressing on your window only a matter of time before it gives in//
an uninvited guest but you have no choice but to let me within//
inside or outside you can run but you cant hide//
im everywhere everything on your left and right side//
ridin down the street u see a puddle but it aint too deep//
plus u in ya suv jeep so slowly u begin to creep//
next thing u feel like u glidin just floatin on thin air//
lost control of the wheel as your heart fills with despair//
gaspin for air as you slowly descend lungs fillin up with H2O//
u scream god NO! I dont wanna go too late his name is changed to john doe//
Meanwhile mary and joe feel a sudden pain in their heart//
visions of daddy flashin through there minds as the tears depart//
CRASH! windows gone water starts forcing its way in//
Forgive me for my sin joe prays wishin last summer he had learned to swim//
as there bodys start to float water fills there throat//
lookin for higher ground prayin they owned a boat//
its no hope just close your eyes and accept your fate//
if ur life is right no doubt youll put your feet acroos the pearly gate//
Sad story of a family broken apart by something as simple as water//
Molecules and matter natural disaster take more lives than manslaughter//

Its my first time doin a topical tell me what ya think.(I know its more like a story but i got the elements in there)

[krayz1e b1zzy]

flood appletondon
Its my first time doin a topical tell me what ya think.(I know its more like a story but i got the elements in there)i like it...uppin for votes

krazy1e b1zzy
^gotta be more specific

[Krazi3Bon3]

I dunno man, but krayz1e b1zzy (http://www.btnhboard.com/forums/member.php?u=17504) you'd prolly make me cry lmao joke. But that was hot, you had a few hitters in there that were pretty powerful, but I must say appletondon your lil "story" had more of an overall feel to it. If you had more "You" and "you and your family drownining" in it I'd give it to you. but my vote goes to

krayz1e b1zzy (http://www.btnhboard.com/forums/member.php?u=17504)

[Kurruption]

Opener- kray
Punches- kray
Flow- kray
Multies- kray
Wordplay- apple
Nameplay- apple
Similes/Meta's- none
Personals-none
Creativity-kray
Humor-none
Closure-kray
Enjoyment-kray

Winner= krayzie Bizzy

Both had above average verses. KrayBiz snapped and got off punches and multies on a topical battle on weather, and thats some shit thats hard to do.

The strength in Apple's verse didn't come until the end but its still good because its his 1st topical. Overall nice bars:cool:

[krayz1e b1zzy]

thnx u both for votin...still uppin

[krayz1e b1zzy]

still uppin

[krayz1e b1zzy]

is this gonna stay open?? or is it done?

[Vega/Set]

i really liked this battle both came correct in my eyes...but since i dont really have time to vote in detail im gonna let it b known that i think kray had the better flow...not an overall better verse cuz like i said it was close but flow wise i think kray took it....

3-0 kray

good battle u 2

[AppletonDon]

aight coo good battle kray

[krayz1e b1zzy]

werd good first topical my n99