Winner----->StayLoe07 vs. Kurruption<---------Scar

[Kurruption]

16-18 bars

48 hours to drop

Regular style........You can go ahead and drop. I'ma drop later on tonight.

[StAyLOE07]

checkin in i'mma drop on tuesday afternoon

[StAyLOE07]

this kid wanna contest with tha best lyricist/
i got to confess, how you get beaten by ness, i guess you finish kid/*
my bars hit hard like earthquakes, bout to pass through eruption/
cause a kurruption, bout to equivelant fast and kurrupt him/
dam i thought you know,bronx nigga keep there pistols blow/
told your mom to stayloe, put my dick in her mouth and blow my whistle hoe/
kurruption you get eat fast like food bout to be chew up n break-fast/ (in breakfast)
i could see it in your eyes you soft like baby ass,quick-to-fold when when tha pistol-blow and shake-fast/
you wack like weed that i call dirt-bag,don't fucc with me boi i hurt-fag/
12 guage shot gun like tha size of my dick, i don't want you she-male pull up your skirt-fag/
your rhyme suck if your song ever get play by a DJ in tha club, he's fired and Screw/**
ever since when i was a young boi always had my swagger,grill hard at nigga like you, i thought you knew/
i make you die in hunger bleedin in thirst, you want me to go first, so you could use counter punchlines to reverse my verse??
i say noo-b, he's trying to spit the greatest hits, your bars stink like shit saying you use bad contents but no fuckin curse in your verse/*** (noo-b = noob)
you say you from Gary,take out the r n i could see y they call it gay,Indiana/****
can't b like us New York nigga, even if your pop was a pilgrim he b a fake nigga,holdin fake slug with fake trigga ready to throw banana/

* = kurruption got beaten by a 15 years old name ness A.K.A Flesh-N-Bone
** = DJ SCREW look at his avator
*** = The Greatest Hits look at his avator
**** = look at his location Gary,Indiana if u take out the r from gary, its Gay,Indiana

[StAyLOE07]

go ahead kid ur turn to post plz don't no show me

[Kurruption]

Yall' niggaz couldn't spit if yall bars had updates
Talkin' like you from Queens but gettin' fucked like Upstate//(Upstate,New York/jail)
You're dead, so I dont know why you cheesin' and gawkin' for
I'll red ya head like Charli, leave you leakin' in Baltimore//
I'll throw ya bitch in a sack like a Charger
If she wanna go harder, I'ma have to charge her//
You and Ness wouldnt pop if yall knew how to load em'
I'll use this gun in holster to remove yall' scrotums//
Got you shook in the game like bad pyrotechnics
You'll have the pie and eat the tech for breakfast// (got popped for his bricks)
I KILL you for them BILLS like Uma
Pop ya top and leave you stankin' in a can like tuna//
Don't hate on the ace bra, just show love
Or the chrome slugs will split you up like Bone Thugs//
My style is crack, and you cant write a nice sentence
I got bars like I'm doin a life sentence//
I'd rather buck than let you grasp for my life
This shotgun will open ya rib cage like Passion of Christ//
I'm quick like ya bitch to grab the 9 and squeeze
The reason you Stayin' Loe is cause you on ya knees//

[Kurruption]

Uppin' for votes

[Kurruption]

I like the "Gay, Indiana" joke......you hoe:)

[StAyLOE07]

thanx though kurrupt n e one uppin fo vote

[StAyLOE07]

dam people vote lol nah uppin fo vote

[Vega/Set]

well my vote goes to stayloe both were pretty much even lyrically cept that kurruption u was usin i this n i that which umm jus ta let u kno is a bad thing in a battle cuz we wanna see u diss ur opponet which u did less of....so ya thats y stayloe gets my vote

[~Longway~JNC Records]

opener - Kurrupt
flow - Kurrupt
punches - Stayloe
multis - Stayloe
simili/meta - Stayloe
personal - Stayloe
creativity - Stayloe
closure - Kurrupt


Nice verse to both of yall -- good to see some new comers bring some heat-- with that said my vote is going to Stayloe I think he was more original and he came stronger overall -- although I will mention that this four bar by Kurrupt was the bar of the battle and almost swayed my vote the other way -- I loved it plus you get some bonus for using B-more :)


Yall' niggaz couldn't spit if yall bars had updates
Talkin' like you from Queens but gettin' fucked like Upstate//(Upstate,New York/jail)
You're dead, so I dont know why you cheesin' and gawkin' for
I'll red ya head like Charli, leave you leakin' in Baltimore//

[~Longway~JNC Records]

2-0 Stayloe keep the votes coming

[<NESS>]

haha how dare u stay loe,lmao im 15 but look grown.lmao nice one

opener-stayloe (wat u said wit me was hott)
flow-kurrption
punches-stayloe
multis-stayloe
simili-meta-kurruption
personal-stayloe
creativity-Tie
closure- Tie

umm yea stay loe got my vote, but nice one kurruption

[~Longway~JNC Records]

dats a rap jack

[StAyLOE07]

good battle kurruption, thanx for every body votes vega u could close this thread

[Kurruption]

Thats cool though

I assume yall niggaz dont like metaphors

[StAyLOE07]

it's not all about metaphore u gotta throw punchline too, it would b alot betta if u use a punchline n connect a descent metaphore in that would really make ur punchline gets alot of point... but good battle though my nigga

[Kurruption]

Yeah I see you Stayloe

Vega maaaannnnn!!!!!! You killin' me with these votes dog.

So, you're saying I should stop using "I" most of the time???

[~Longway~JNC Records]

I normally dont say anything man but judging by your comments I can tell you a bit salty over the loss-- I just hope your vote over there in Ness's and my thread was not a hate vote cause I voted against you here. All good reallybut I am just commenting on your posts cause like I said you seem a bit emotional

[Kurruption]

That wasnt a hate vote in your thread and I hope there's none over here.

Im not being emotional, that was just my opinion cause Ness had the punches.

You notice everyone voted Ness over me and I still voted for Ness. Overall, no disrespect kid.

[Vega/Set]

yes stop sayin "I".....u keep talkin bout wut u gon do or how raw u r or always sumn bout u...wut ur gonna do to him blah blah.....i mean its ok to say those things for a few lines but for the whole verse its not ok--disrespect your opponet..thats y its called a battle

[~Longway~JNC Records]

That wasnt a hate vote in your thread and I hope there's none over here.

Im not being emotional, that was just my opinion cause Ness had the punches.

You notice everyone voted Ness over me and I still voted for Ness. Overall, no disrespect kid.

naw its all good