Winner----->Freeda vs. Hellafied<------Scar

[Enzo R.]

18-20 Lines
House Rules
Verses Due 48 Hours After Check-In
g'luck...

and this is my check-in...

[hellafied96]

showtime...

lets go

[Enzo R.]

dude hellafied? - i thought in hell-u-find evil and fire- -
i can see-through dis liar worst than critiques who admire- -
my speech will retire ya means to try to beat this guy- -
culdn't comprehend 'crack' reading between the 'lines'- -
deceiving rhymes you drop on fast like u pop off gats- -
lack of 'focus' y ya verse 'gets cut' - you're NOT ON TRACK- -
so i top off that shit wit scripts u miss skill to spit- -
ill leave ya distilled in piss with ya lips that’s been filled wit shit- -
eating emcees daily - but u ain't fillin me up- -
even if u dickrided legends - no chance of u 'feelin me up'- -
artillery tucked-sickening tongue rip ya optics wit speed: tenfolds- -
but u only see 'fags in his MIND' like mythological 'greek TEMPLES'- -
decrease pencil points when i sharpen rhymes that plunge inside- -
as u talk out ya 'ass' - and they wonder y this 'son don't shine'- -
run or die? - the verbal glock's cocked so watch wat i store- -
cuz u culdnt 'freestyle' walkin da plank - i'll make ya 'drop off the top' of da 'board'- -
knock ya top off in the shore - drown in my infamous 'flow'- -
than 'piss' from the boat to mix wit ya 'blood' - who wants this 'orange' drink in their throat?- -

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[hellafied96]

Cant explain it I got an immediate homicidal craving.
Freeda you be the first of my many bloody victims.

Im trying out the red dot and aiming straight for freeda5thdawg.
My rhymes be spinning u around like a nigga lost in a thick fog.

This is my debut and im already miles ahead you
if your mama was here I’d probably fuck her in front of you

when im done I be sure to dispose discretely the both of you
hope you got some tats cause they gonna need it to identify you

Pop pop pop and youre done.
Now die out and dissapear like cum.

You’ll never reach me, like osama im gone.
Everybody listen, this is what happens to scum.

its a lyrical assassination, typified by hellafied’s superior aggression
how can you free the 5th dawg when I’ve already arranged for his cremation

u mistaken if u think I came here to hand u easy ammunition
im gonna eat all your fucking food like a hungry nigga fresh out of prison

bring on the next victim cause this is just the beginning of hellafied96
we’ve just witnessed the ending of freeda5thdawg in November 2006.

[bad habitz]

opener:freeda
multi's/similies:freeda
punches:freeda
closure:freeda
enjoyment:freeda

vote= freeda

this battle imo was straight one sided...hellafied you came out strong but kinda fell off as you went along.....good battle though

[Vega/Set]

Defintly one-sided

i feel that hellafied could came alot fuccn better--future advice homie...dont talk about guns or ppl's mothers cuz honestly that shit is played out n very boring...plus u barely had ne decent punches...keep at it though mayn


Vote= Freeda for overall better verse

[Boss_Smoke]

Freeda -- "you got the juice." :nod:

hellafied -- you ain't really coming with the things that win battles, not many punches, and you rhymed "you" with "you" like 6 times in a row. I think you can get better, but right now you ain't ready to beat someone like Freeda.

vote -- Freeda

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[Enzo R.]

appreciate u guys voting...good battle HF...

[hellafied96]

oh well.. shit happens.

thanks for voting n shit.

way 2 go freeda.

i cacth u niggaz next time.:D